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Reviewer: Cissi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 01:09 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

That was so beautiful, you made me cry!
And I had no idea you were german, I thought you were an american or english :) You write very well, could've fooled me :) It's really funny to find people from other countries than the english speaking ones here, I'm from Sweden :P

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :D And credit to my betas for catching my grammar mistakes etc :D otherwise it would read a bit differently too lol

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

You have drawn tears from me, a history is precious, but very sad.
I never had listened to that song, it can be because I live in Spain, and that music is not popular this way. And to listen to reading the fic, is very sad.
Spike's life is a drama, fullness of anguish and death, but he had opportunity to know the love before living to army, it's a pity that he had had a so spoiled life, and than after knowing love, he had gotten killed in the war.

She suffers a nervous breakdown by the death of his, but in the course of time, she manage to go to London, The journey is not like the one she had imagined herself like at the dock, but at least, can be in contact with a part of his, when visiting that so especial place for him and saying goodbye to him.

Congratulations for the fic, you are incredible, even I am in tears, but I have liked it.

Pd: I am sorry to weigh for my bad English, but I had to say magnificent that is this fic.


Author's Response: I'm very thankful for your review and the time and care you took to leave it. I know how hard it is to write in a foreign laguage being from Germany myself, so THANK YOU. I'm glad that you liked it and that the sad feelings I felt when I heard the song were transmitted through my little ficlet.

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

:( So sad. So good. My angst meter went "Tilt".

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very very much. I read all your stories over at the crypt (*cough* waiting for updates *cough*) and that is angst, not my little bit of ramblings. Glad you liked it and took your time to leave a review. Made me very very happy.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

Oh you made me cry.......new it would be a sad story.....just didn't think it would so heartwrenching and so beautifully written that it would hurt so bad.......no regrets reading it either..........for in death he was loved and will live forever in the heart of the one who loved him most......

Author's Response: aww, that last sentenceof your review is so beautiful. I said it before, I'm not sorry that I made some readers cry, shows me that the story seems to work. I think my beta had a bit of work with the grammar because the story made me emotional too and I got too distracted by the story itself and because the song still gets to me too much. I'm such a wuss that I still get teary-eyed when I hear it. A thanks to Deedo again for finding my mistakes. Thanks to you for leaving such a nice review and I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

I've said it before and I'll say it again this is a brilliant fic Eve but then I might be bias. The sentence structure is fluid and leads you to want to read more ;drawing you in to the story line. You feel the emotions of Buffy as she here's the news of Spike's death alone and hidden from all the onlookers and the joy she had in visiting the playground, but saddness too that Spike's not there to guide her around the sights of London. I give this fiction 10/10 for content and also well done for finally posting your own fic and not just beta...ing mine all the time H & K's Spike's mrsSmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: yup honey, you are bias. ;-) but thanks for the compliments and nudges *kiss*. Deedo gave me a lot of tips about the structure too and some more tips, which I will use when I beta your next chapters. I'm so happy that I was able to evoke emotions with that little story and with only my second try to write something. H&K back Honey!

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

Great story! I can understand why it would sound like the other story, can't go to far with the same song, but you did a good job. You should really read Zarrah's story btw one of my faves of all time

Author's Response: I'm certainly going to read the story by Zarrah, but after the dust settled on mine and I had some distance. I was way too nervous about posting it as it is and then hearing first thing in the morning after posting, that it sounds like another story had made me even more nervous. I thought people would think I used that story as basis and not that just the song inspiried me. *sigh* I saw later that it was a "real" story and not like mine a songficlet, that calmed me a bit. ;-) Oh my, I'm rambling in a review response LOL. Thank you very much for leaving a review and I'm so happy that you liked what I wrote.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 02:09 pm Title: Travelin' soldier

i've never heard that song, but i've got to now, or else it will drive me insane. I really like the story!!

Author's Response: I can only recommend that song. It's great, i think it made me cry the first 10 - 15 times I listened to it. ;-) Thanks for leaving a review and I'm glad you liked it. Means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 08:11 am Title: Travelin' soldier

Awww,,,so pretty an sad :(
You're a really good writer ^_^ Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks you for your compliment and leaving a review. That makes me really happy and maybe I will have the courage to keep writing here and there. :-)

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 05:31 am Title: Travelin' soldier

this looks like traveling soldier by zarrah....who also posted it here.......

Author's Response: Sorry, I haven't read that story and I didn't check when I posted here, if there was one with that title already. If both stories are based on the same song they should be a bit similar. I didn't even know the song two weeks ago and whenever I heard the song, I always pictured Buffy in her "Anne" outfit and Spike a bit like in the yoko factor and somehow my missing muse came back and wanted me to write it down. ;-) Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 05:02 am Title: Travelin' soldier

what a sad story

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review and taking your time to read the story.

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