Aww, it's cute. I've always steered clear of any fic's that include either Buffy or Spike already having kids but this one is just right. It's not all woe is me I'm a single parent, and it's not all centered around the kids. Just right. Keep it up!

*claps hands* This is so much fun already! They are both so cute! Trying to check each other out on the sly, each of them stumbling or bumping their heads...so sweet! I loved how those little awkward things that you threw in that just endeared themselves more to each other. Like the toilet paper...gotta give Buffy snaps for being the brave girl and asking for it. Just tooo cute!

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Adjusting himself in front of her, Spike grinned when the blush deepened, then chuckled deeply. - How cheeky of him! This cracked me up!!
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Before she could really think about the consequences of her words, Buffy blurted out, “You can sleep with me.” - Yay! Part of my motto...just GO FOR IT!
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I love this already. I mean it's them, and you, you writing them. Hell...what's not to love?

Thanks for a refreshingingly cute, funny chapter. I love something that just makes me smile and this did more than once. Can't wait for more!

Cheers!
Nina

EEEP!!! This is fantastic! Absolutely love it! Great plot, great writing, great Spuffy chemistry...can't wait for more!!!

One of your best written pieces so far. It looks polished and well-read over (beta'ed).

As for the actual story. Excellent. I am looking forward to the rest of the weekend!!