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Reviewer: HollyDB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:08 am Title: IX

Buffy’s voice became quieter, almost embarrassed. “I…I don’t know what it was like…where you were,” she said, “but for what it’s worth…I’m really glad you’re back. I…I missed you.”

Shock dueled with astonishment in his eyes, and Spike simply stood in the hallway, stunned. Finally, he pulled back to himself and replied, “Missed you too, pet.”


*sniffle* That was beautiful. Definitely worth driving across town to read. Yeah, so I'm addicted to the Internet. What's it to yah, wanna fight about it?.

Really...this was just...perfect. The pacing was awesome, the dynamic...it was just perfect.

You have more waiting...right?

Author's Response: I'd like to think that you drove across town JUST so you could read this. But then I remember that I emailed it to you and you'd downloaded it before leaving St. Louis Bread Company Panera. :D

Reviewer: HollyDB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:01 am Title: VIII

Just so you know, you're incredibly lucky that there's another chapter for me to read following this one. I really can't get over how outstanding your characterizations are. Your Buffy-voice is, in a word, flawless. I swear, when I first started reading this, I began to wonder why in GOD's name you'd contacted ME...granted, that was before the phone talkies and the learning of your not-knowing-how-incredibly-talented-you-are-thing.

So yeah...I'm heading on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh hush. We both know that you're better than I am at writing this pairing. Glad you're still liking it, dear. :)

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:07 am Title: IX

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: IX

Does Spike have a soul? And Buffy has got it bad for Spike. They are so cute together.

Please update soon. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: We'll have answers for Spike in the next chapter; you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:56 am Title: VIII

Ah, Buffy found Spike and now after a closer look she's sure too that the vampire she found is indeed Spike :)
He knows he came back wrong? I wonder what'a the matter. Yes, he doesn't have all memories but what else? The chip.. Logically speaking Spike could be right; the duster stayed back too when he died.
I wonder how long it will take Buffy to tell Spike she loves him; but she did the first step and acknowledged it to herself. She even did give him some of her blood. Must be love indeed.
Looking foreword to the answer of Spike's question (though I think part of it is why Buffy needs him; or maybe because he is destined to be her champion) :)

Author's Response: I didn't mean to imply that Spike had lost his memories -- he really hasn't. I'm just mirroring the scene when Buffy came back, when she was running on solely primal drives, not even seeming to recognize her friends. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: idk5743228 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 01:25 am Title: VIII

ah, to chip or not to chip. I like this. How will Buffy, with her new adult feelings cope with the possibility that he came back a little different. Keep up the great work

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see! ;P Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: idk5743228 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 01:16 am Title: VII

Nice touch at bringing Spike back. I look forward to every update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: VIII

yeah, that's a good question.

but now that i finished all the chapters, i have to wait till the next update! :( lol

buffy came back for a reason, and now of course there should be one for spike too.

buffy knows she loves him now. and she actually wants to tell him! can't hardly wait to see the "declaration"!!

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, I promise! I think the declaration will be coming up shortly as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:46 pm Title: VII

oh boy! lol

never been so grateful to have another chapter to read!!
just the moment she begun mourning him, he came back!

Author's Response: I couldn't keep you all waiting TOO long! You might give up on me!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: VI

buffy's always been great at denial! lol

now i begun to feel itchy waiting for spike's retuning. cuz he is coming back, right?

Author's Response: This wouldn't be much of a Spuffy story if he wasn't coming back... :P

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:13 pm Title: V

i think buffy's not really fine... her life seems to get better, the relationship with dawn less strained, but... she is slighty falling to pieces. like when something big happen to you, and at first you're too shocked to feel the pain.

glad that tara noticed it.

Author's Response: I think Buffy's very good at repressing what she feels; years of hurt will do that to a girl. And I love Tara as a confidante for Buffy.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: IV

tara's always been one of my fave, and anya as well. you like them too, do you? :D

still wondering about dawn. is she stil angry at spike? does she feel guilty?

Author's Response: Anya's extraordinarily fun to write, although I'm saddened that the way I've set up the story I don't have as much opportunity to write her as I would care to.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: III

"If she’d learned nothing else from her Watcher over five years, it was that."

such a funny line!! lol
so, buffy guessed the truth. and she's gonna tell the others. i'd like to see dawn suffer a little bit at the realization (ok, i'll admit it... not a dawn fan, here... lol)

i liked when she don't want to cry, cuz it would meant giving up

Author's Response: Things between Buffy and Dawn will get better, I promise. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 04:46 pm Title: VIII

Excellent connect the dots logic between the retrieved duster and the possibly missing chip. There are going to be several awkward conversations in their future. This was a wonderful reunion, especially on the heels of Buffy's complete devastation about Spike's loss.

Author's Response: There are indeed several awkward conversations in the future. Maybe more than several. But we'll get there in the end. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: VII

This was a vividly detailed, emotional chapter. I loved Buffy's desperate run to Spike's crypt, and her devastation at finding it "[a]bandoned. Cold and unwelcoming, as it had never been before. Spike was truly gone.

Somewhere in the recesses of her mind was a list of men which had all summer, until this point, eluded revision. On it, she added Spike, the name of the one who was supposed to have stayed."

Spike's resurrection was also vivid, and his instinctual beeline for Revello Drive was a lovely surprise.

Author's Response: Thank you for this wonderful review! When the story was in its first rough outline, I knew I wanted to write the scene where Spike's duster no longer smells of him, and Buffy's subsequent trip to his crypt. I also had a lot of fun writing Spike's resurrection; although it was a little annoying because I constantly wanted to switch noun markers. Style dictated to leave it as was, using nothing but "he," but I still had to read over it a few times to make sure I hadn't inadvertantly slipped up before I revealed his name in the final sentence. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:38 pm Title: II

loved the dream sequence!

poor buffy, i feel for her know... *jumps on the next chapter to see her reaction* lol

Author's Response: Don't worry. It will get better. :)

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: I

that was an interesting twist! i dunno if anyone has done it before, but for me is quite original.

and well written, and promising, and... i loved this first chapter! lol
i don't know why i haven't notice this fic before, but now i've got 8 chapters to read and... that's good! ;P

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my little story, and I hope to continue to impress you.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 10:09 am Title: VIII

They're so cute. Hope Buffy will be able to sooth all of Spike's emotional acheys.

Author's Response: ::grin:: Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:27 am Title: VIII

Great update, hope Spikes not damaged and traumatised like Buffy was.

Author's Response: There's something going on with Spike, but I have this crazy desire to see a happier S6, so don't worry yourself too much. :)

Reviewer: Bellefleur29 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 03:07 am Title: VIII

Good ending, I just read this whole thing for the first time and I loved it. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Ooh! A new reader! Welcome, and I hope you continue to enjoy my little story.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 01:42 am Title: VIII

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: :) Stick around; I have surprises in store!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 01:29 am Title: VIII

That last line is a heart-breaker.

Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:54 am Title: VIII

Oh I love it, Spike is back and Buffy is inlove with him. More please.

Author's Response: It's going to be a long road for them, but she most definitely loves him.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:41 am Title: VII

oh this chapter made me cry for Buffy but wont she be surprised when she gets home.

Author's Response: Having a naked Spike camped out on my bedroom floor wearing nothing but that leather duster...good surprise for all. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:20 am Title: VIII

This is so great. It's really fantastic how you've done this, and I can't wait to see where you take this. Hope the muse is well-fed and content! :)

Author's Response: My muse is so fickle; I have to tred carefully around her so as not to upset her. She's been kind lately, so I hope she stays on this happy streak for a while. :)

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