Reviews For Torn
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Rising Waters
Oh time is running out. This won't be easy, saving the men.
Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/24/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Rising Waters
Great update but you can't leave them in that terrible storm! Update soon...please!!!
Reviewer: ksd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 09:33 am Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/24/2007 - 09:33 am Title: Rising Waters
This chapter was so well described that as I read it I got absolutely lost in the words and felt as though I was standing in the storm watching the whole scence transpire. William knows her ... he knows the fire in her whereas Bryant does not ... I like how you got that across. Also like how you have her knowing deep down that William must be a good man. She is seeking his approval by helping him. Another great chapter. YOU GO GIRL, YOU GO !!!
Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/24/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Rising Waters
On the edge of my seat here!!! Love it.
Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 05:03 am Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/24/2007 - 05:03 am Title: Rising Waters
great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 03:19 am Title: Rising Waters
Date: 08/24/2007 - 03:19 am Title: Rising Waters
oooooo lol.....great update...cant wait for the next one:)