Reviews For Blue Eyed Suicide
Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 12/13/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Prologue
I'm not sooo fond of angst... but I read it. If it gets to worse for me I just wait a bit (or till it's finished). But I like the first part, how it's written, and not too confusing for me. I like it.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 12/10/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Prologue
good so far
Reviewer: TestaALT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 12/10/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Prologue
Great job. I especially liked the eyes paragraph - that was expertly done. And the flashbacks really threw me into their relationship quite well. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much
Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 12/10/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Prologue
wow. great start. really want to see how this plays out. post soon.
Reviewer: This Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 12/10/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Prologue
So far I like it. Sounds interesting