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Reviewer: Marguerita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great update by the way.

Also, about your authors note - I think that might be a bit of something you could look into, even thought its not totally relevant to the story you could still include things like that. Its the sort of thing that fleshes out a story and makes it more interesting, gives more background etc... You'll find the really great writers are ones that can seamlessly tell a story with dialogue, explanations, descriptions etc.. all with a good flow.

Glad to see where the mommy kissing Santa comes in. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: It thought of adding it in the story but it was also something they were talking about how Wesley told his family his girlfriend was coming and they didn't know he had one and Fred mentioned it to Buffy once in there talking. So that is why I decided to put it in the AN: Thanks theres only one more chapter left.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh I hope Chelsea and Abby get a new little brother or sister soon! Good update : )

Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see, last chapter should be by the end of the week, I hope real life can be a pain.

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