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Reviewer: Isa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Changes

Wow!!! I love how you just jumped right into the story instead of making people wait for his transformation.

Really grabbed my attention!!!

Looking forward to reading and reviewing Chapter 2 ☺

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Changes

What's the background poem or song or whatever behind your sexylicious banner? I love the story! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! :D Several songs in the background, actually. The top one is "Black" by Pearl Jam, where this fic got its namesake. On the left side of the sun is "When I'm Gone" by 3 Doors Down. Under the sun is "What You Are" by Audioslave. I also put in some music references, like Zeppelin, Lifehouse, Soundgarden, etc.

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:38 am Title: Changes

I'm just starting this fic and the first chapter already has me hooked. lol Go Spike! The Riley and Teacher interaction was hilarious. LMAO



Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you. ;) Yeah, Mr. Davis is pretty inept... I'm glad you're rooting for Spike, though. :D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Changes

I loved it Andrew. No one recognized him. I 'm so glad you've updated this. Hopefully, both fics will have a your muses attention. Keep that sucker chained to the bedpost, can't wait to get caught up. Great way to make Riley back down, won't he be pissed at himself to know who it was, to do it!

Author's Response: Thank you, Verda. I just hope you'll be as encouraging after you see why this fic is named Black. ;) There is some reason to my madness, even here. Spike blowing smoke into Riley's face was inspired from a scene in American History X. If you haven't seen it, it's an amazing movie about very racist neo-Nazis. One of them blows smoke into the face of someone they loathe, and ergo we have the connection. Thanks for commenting on past stuff; I have a really great time discussing previous chapters.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: Changes

I liked Dark side of the moon so much, so I had to read Black as well! :) Anyway, I like it so far :)

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 10:21 am Title: Changes

haha that was so awesome:) even though uve wrote chapters ahead of this already i just thought i'd comment the first chapter...i love it cant wait to continue

Author's Response: :D Thank you very muchly. Your kind words keep this story alive.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:09 am Title: Changes

another random thought while I'm here -- you said this was your second fic, what was the first one? not spuffy since its not on here? or not on the internet at all?

Author's Response: It was Spuffy; I'm just so embarrassed by it now (for lack of good writing or story or really anything) that I took it off the site. Wasn't finished, either; only had about 12 short chapters done. Thanks for asking, though, heh.

Reviewer: spuffyz_3rd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Changes

This is awesome! I love good spuffy fic that incorporates both the william and the spike side of his persona. And Buffy as a super-bitch? Love it. Onto chapter 2 now, even though I should be going to bed...

Author's Response: Thank you! :D Always love it when people review past chapters, keeps me in line with the entire story.

Reviewer: Eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Changes

He he, I would have loved to see their faces when he replied to his name :D

Author's Response: Haha, yeah. :D

Reviewer: spikex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Changes

great start!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 08:08 pm Title: Changes

Hmm I don't really believe it. I don't think you can like or care for someone that has gone out of theri way to make you life a living hell. I would be really interested in hearing any victim of a bully say that they like the bully. Not gonna happen, he might be attracted to her looks but I think that with a crappy personality like what is described in this chapter I doubt he would harbor any feelings for her.

Author's Response: Not necessarily a bully, and not necessarily a "crappy" personality. And part of the story is him loving her despite her treating him bad. Thanks for the critique, though; I liked the honesty.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 07:39 am Title: Changes

definitely the start to a great story. i love it. please keep updating.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I will. ;)

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2006 - 12:30 am Title: Changes

This is freaking cool! I'm glad you've continued this, I love Spike.

Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 03:22 pm Title: Changes

I'm sorry, no disrespect intended and I haven't read the story. But every time I read your summary I'm confused. Surely you mean 'torturing his very existence' not tattooing.

Author's Response: Actually I meant tattooing, since in my little world of la-la land I think of it as blackening something. Too loose connotation, mayhaps. Maybe too much Prison Break for me. :( I dunno, I kind of like it.

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 11:06 am Title: Changes

Great chapter :) looking forward to more. - I love his bad ass act.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 09:49 am Title: Changes

Yea! I hope Spike gets back some, he deserves it.

Author's Response: Yep, taking some back by terrorizing the group that oppressed him. *grins*

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 07:12 am Title: Changes

Lovely new chapter - definitely looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: janica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 06:47 am Title: Changes

total badasss!!! wooopiee!!!!!

Author's Response: Badassery is bliss! :)

Reviewer: BreannaStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Changes

Oh, it's perfect, keep it up :D

Author's Response: Perfect? Unperfect! I was going for unperfect. Hah, thanks.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Changes

Ooh, this is fabulous! Love the premise, love how you've written it--I am completely hooked! can't wait to read more! please, please continue it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Idea felt addicting, which is why Frost isn't getting any love right about now. :(

Reviewer: bel_amour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Changes

i loved it, update soon


Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Changes

more please

Author's Response: More 2 come... ;)

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 04:00 am Title: Changes

I definitely think you should continue this. So far, I'm entertained, and it has good potential to be a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks. I am definitely going to, especially if the response stays this way.

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 03:43 am Title: Changes

Ooohhh... I really like it so far. I love me some bad ass Spike. I can't wait for him to show everyone else up. Keep up the good work.

~Diana

Author's Response: Thank you. Badass Spike is sooo much fun.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Changes

Pretty darn HOT! Keep on writing when you can.

Author's Response: Thanks! That just gave me an idea...

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