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Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:02 am Title: Shake It Up

Spike being friends with the Principal was very unexpected and a funny twist. lol Buffy being in Calculus I definetely didn't see that coming either much like Spike. lol



Author's Response: Hehehe... that's exactly why I put Wilkins in. They go golfing every Sunday. ;) Buffy in Calculus... definitely a twist. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Shake It Up

I was wondering how Wilkins knew his name was Spike now. Great slip with Spike, knowing where she lived. He really is trying to pull this off. I am a bit surprised to know that Angel's actually his friend here, that's going to take time getting used to. Never liked his character and only watched ATS because of the rest of the cast. Loved Wesley's transformation over the series. Glad I've got so much more to read.


Author's Response: Wilkins will come back into this little play muuuuuuuuuuch later. That's something I purposely left open to become a plot point later, since Wilkins and Faith are connected. Yeah, Angel's his friend here; that might seem a little risky, but that's the way I wanted it. I'm not really a fan of him anymore, either. Hope you have fun reading, I love these reviews. :)

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: Shake It Up

So he knows where she lives.. how does he know that?
Of course, they are going to study... I hope not... :p


Author's Response: He knows that because he's kinda obsessed with her. Yes, they are going to "study." ;)

Reviewer: spuffyz_3rd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 02:05 pm Title: Shake It Up

Go Spike! He's such a badass, even if it is all for show.

Author's Response: =D Indeed, indeed.

Reviewer: eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 09:11 am Title: Shake It Up

Ok, I like that Spike isn't always bad and when he likes the teacher stil can behave a bit normally. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to put at least some humanity in him... ^_^

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Shake It Up

Or just walk around the halls the whole period like I know all you kids do

Made me laugh my ass off. 1) Kids totally do that, and 2) that is so a Wilkins thing to say!

Loved the chapter, reading on. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, that sentence sort of just came to me; all the kids at my school do that.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 05:03 am Title: Shake It Up

good update

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Shake It Up

he he. oh those crazy kids. lol. this is gonna be interesting. loved it bunches. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. =]

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 04:32 am Title: Shake It Up

Just came across your fic and love it! More please!

Author's Response: The sexy title did it for you, huh? I was thinking "Paint It Black" and "Blackened," but "Black," yeah, uber sexy. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 03:40 am Title: Shake It Up

Haha, oh man. Well, I have to say, my calculus BC class is a LOT different. At my school, the prereq is pre-calc, and after that, you can take either calc AB or calc BC, because the first semester of calc BC is the same as calc AB... I've always wondered why schools make AB the prereq for BC, when the first half of the year is all review anyway. You might as well move along faster. Also, everyone stereotypes the smart kids as they quite and shy ones, but my school... eh, not so much. Mostly, it's a bunch of talkative, intelligent, well rounded, involved people who want to challenge themselves. I'm not personally offended by your story, or others that generalize in this way, but I think it happens to often and people should recognize that just because you're smart doesn't mean you're quiet and well mannered. In fact, it often makes people more obnoxious and egotistical, or at least some people. Well, enough about my calc class, great addition to the story and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I was just thinking of an advanced class I knew pretty well that had a lot of reviewing so Spike could fluff it off. BC, which I thought was a complete waste of time the first half because I had already taken AB, quickly came to mind. Sometimes people take AB before BC where I live, but it's not required, like you said. I concur completely on the smart kid thing; hell, I'm probably in that category of people. Everyone in my Cal class was outspoken, witty, and sometimes sarcastic. Really, though, _every_ person is unique, not only the smart kids, and I'm trying to make a point by pressing how conforming everyone is at this school. I'll probably flesh out the class a bit further, although mainly I'm sticking to stereotypes right now so Spike can break them. Sorry if the stereotypes offend anyone, though popular stereotypes are meant to be offense as I'm bitter. ;) Just setting up the story in a really cut-and-dry, black-and-white manner. Thanks for the comment; I'll be sure to stick to stuff really in Calculus now. ;)

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Shake It Up

This should be interesting to say the least lol.

Author's Response: Thanks. =D

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Shake It Up

Yeah lets get to the part wher they "study'..This is a great story and its coming along very well!!!

Author's Response: It'll come; Spike still has to finish the day before he goes and "studies" with Buffy. Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 01:28 am Title: Shake It Up

study group!!! study group!!! absolutely love it!!! very excellent chapter. Interesting that he's friends with Wilkins...and that Buffy's in Calculus...can't wait to see the study group!!!

Author's Response: I thought study sessions was a little cliche at first, but the idea quickly grew on me for its simplicity. Wilkins subplot might grow into something bigger, haven't really decided yet. Just thought them being friends would be kind of funny. ;)

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Shake It Up

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Shake It Up

love it, more please.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Shake It Up

Squee I cant wait until the tutoring begins! I hope he tprtures her for her earlier cruelty!

Author's Response: Oh you know it. ;)

Reviewer: piratesxohmy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Shake It Up

i love this story so far . and the whole study group was brilliant

Author's Response: Thanks; needed Spuffy as much as you guys. At least in the same vicinity.

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