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Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:38 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

Ok now I'm not So sure I want Spike to get back at her. lol Really didn't see any of this coming. I can't stop reading this.

Author's Response: Yeah... overwhelming Buffy sympathy makes Spike a bad person now. You caught the drift of where things are going perfectly.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

I was afraid this is what you were going for when, in Spikes mind, she must of had a perfect life. However, I never thought to would be that bad. She was only five, somethings you just never truly get over. Will Spike continue to thwart her advances? Now to see.

Author's Response: Yeppers, I was definitely implying it with Spike always commenting that she must have had the perfect life. I wanted to make her life as miserable as possible, though, because well... that's just the way life is. Need some Buffy sympathy, too. Thanks for continuing.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 06:52 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Buffy´s grandpa doesn´t seem to be so nice... And the way you described her room, the stains on her sheets, made me beleive that he doesn´t know how to do laundry, lol.
The fire was an accident, I hope....

Author's Response: LOL... I meant that they were too poor to do laundry and that he beat her relentlessly. The fire was an accident.

Reviewer: spuffyz_3rd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 03:02 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Something tells me horny teens are go!! I cant believe she started the fire. It was an accident... right.?

Author's Response: Yes, but she doesn't think so. Psychological scar that will be further discussed way later in the story.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Loved it, Buffys family died when she was 5 did I get that right in a fire she started.

Author's Response: Yes, that is correct.

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 05:10 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

I completely agree with just another reviewer. People are going to start feeling so sorry for Buffy about her life that people are just going to forget about what Buffy did to Spike.

Anyways, keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Not going this way. It might seem like I am, and the tutoring chapters DID kind of focus on the bad that is Buffy's life. But I'm mostly setting up for later here, not for the now. The now is plagued by the past.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 04:13 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

And the plot thickens! Love the chapter update, more please!

Author's Response: Ha! Indeed it does. Thank you.

Reviewer: just another reviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

hey! just saying i love your story, and I love the whole new spike thing. just a word of caution, dont make buffy all of a sudden start being all good, or something, or make her horrible life too horribel, so its unbelieveable. also, dont let spike just throw away everything buffy did to him, because no matter what her lifes like, i doesn't make up for that, and i know alot of people would be bothered if he just passed it all off. Ill keep reading! love it !

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting; it was very insightful. I would like to hear what others have to think about this, too. Definitely not gonna just forget about the past. It might be temporarily shunned so we can have some Spuffy (lust Spuffy and not love Spuffy), but it will probably be a burden on their relationship until this fic ends. By the end, I hope their joking about it. Lots of angst from it, though, might even be a summer-ender. But now... yeah, definitely not gonna let Spike forget. He might show sympathy for her, he might date her, but he will never forget, and it will be the looming grim reaper on their relationship. As for the horrible life... that's where I'm going, I know it's cliche, but it's the only thing I could feasibly think of. I don't plan on having Buffy be "good" at first, in fact I think her mask at school is quite an endearing plot point. But she will, eventually, take the mask off, after the appropriately powerful events have taken place. Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 09:22 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Well now, that's a twist! Really can't wait to see what happens when Buffy gets back in the room.

Oh and Little Miss Sunshine? I freaking LOVE that movie. So good.

And as to your response, I guess you're right. A shower at that point would not bode well for Spike.... as long as there will be other shower scene dammit! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. :) LMS is awesome! Spike shower scene later, when things get more routine. I promise.

Reviewer: Joy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Take her away fro all that Spike!
Sorry getting ahead of myself there !

Author's Response: You know it. :) In good time, though. I know it's been done before, so I want to put a little twist on it.

Reviewer: Mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Wow this was a surprising chapter! Buffy's home life is a surpeise, Spike's refusal is shocking! I cant wait to see how the rest of the tutoring goes! Love it so far!

Author's Response: Shocking, yes. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Gracias.

Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Poor Buffy! More Please

Author's Response: I know. =(

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Cant wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Wow great chapter! Spike surprised me by turning her down!

Author's Response: Yeah... everything's just too messed up for him.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

I like it a lot. I cant wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 05:41 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

good update

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

Yikes! Can't wait to see where you are going with this!!

Author's Response: Going... somewhere... actually, when I wrote it, I hadn't a clue. I do now, but when I wrote it... gosh, I didn't know.

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