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Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:49 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Spuffy Kiss! Stupid Grandpa! lol



Author's Response: Hehehe, spuffy kiss is good. :) Grandpa is bad. :(

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

They both have a lot of baggage to sort through. Relationships are rarely that easy. It did give them a chance to explore the unknown world, apparently they both are wanting too. Really enjoying this, hope I can finish it tonight.

Author's Response: Yes, and this will play a major role in the madness to come. The only problem I had with this story is, like you said, they both wanted. I wish I could have fleshed out more why Buffy wanted, but I just dropped the ball on that one.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 07:03 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

I liked the kiss :)


Author's Response: :D It was a nice kiss, in a morbid kinda way.

Reviewer: spuffyluver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 04:02 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

nice tiwst good update

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

Still reading just doing my Christmas catch up today company finally gone.
Loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

Poor Buffy. :( One event can totally change your entire life, and as much as Buffy doesn't want pity, she is going to get it when people find out. You know? Blegh. Great chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. That's what I was going for.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Buffy's homelife is really messed up! Spike's confused if Buffy's background should change his confusing feelings for her! Heck I think I'm kind of confused about them also! Can't wait to read more! Loved it!

Author's Response: Hehehe... everything's confusing, which is why things are about to get worse. :(

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

good update

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

aww
i like it tho =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sba Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 07:18 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

It's good, but get the ball rolling...get to the point...any point.

Author's Response: I don't really know what you mean. :( The point is that everything is really, really fucked up, and it will take time before we get to the Spuffy loving. It's impossible to make a quick fix with this story; I even tried to give Buffy a terrible life, but I still feel even that is not enough for Spike to disregard the past. There's gonna be some angst and some separation... the night was really just a prelude to how intricate everything is.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 06:58 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

After about three tries, I finally found my pulse. Phew!

Hi.

I'm glad Spike is pushing her not to give up on her life. I'm also glad he's not just saying to hell with everything she's done to him and making with the wild hot monkey sex. There's too much they need to sort through before that (sadly) can happen. As sad as her past is, it's not an excuse to torture William the way she did.

And she better not do anything to mess up Spike's painting plans!!

Really good chapter, looking forward to more. =)

Oh, and Merry Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Saturnalia, etc, to you too. ;)

Author's Response: Haha. :) Yeah, if things weren't cut and dry, black and white before, they sure as hell aren't now. Before I had the whole love to hate her thing going, and I still have that angle (thankfully; I can fully relate to that). But now I have introduced a boatload of plot points and it's hard even for Spike, who was steadfast at screwing over Buffy, to actually do it. Thanks for reviewing! ;)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 06:45 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Her life really sucks...that's so sad. Will Spike be able to get over the past or will Buffy just waste away? Happy holidays!

Author's Response: That's one dilemma. Happy holidays to you, too, even though I think they all passed as the time of my writing this.

Reviewer: Li Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 06:31 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Haha you took the words right out of my mouth- confusing! BUt in a good, plot-building, driving crazy wiht anticipation way! Lol, great couple of chapter, I really like how it's playing out between them and how it seems that it's not just going to be a quick and easy solution. The work out scene was written very well, though I felt a few elements were over emphasized. I must say I learnt a few things though lol. I'm really interested to see what you come up with next,t his story is a great read!

Author's Response: Thank you! Comments like these make my day, even if it is Christmas and I get presents. :) Quick and easy isn't on the foreseeable horizon; it's gonna get bad and angsty before it gets better. The exposition puts everything in a bind. As for the workout scene, I really just wanted to set up everything in class so I didn't have to be detailed when I wrote about it in the future. I always use my rage in workouts, so I figure why not have Spike do it? He probably has a lot of stuff to brood about. ;)

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