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Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 11:23 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

Gotta say... I hate these "outcasts" as much as I hate the "populars" in this story. Sure their music tastes show some sort of intelligence (in direct contrast to the popular hip-hop shit), but to go as far as to ruin somebody's home for pitiful revenge. Sure in Australia we have the same sort of segregation, however not to the spiteful extremes... I gotta ask is American schooling really like that? I thought it was just a mindless stereotype from crappy teen-flics and and after-school specials! That's enough of my ranting (you most probably think I'm a bitch... I am just curious...) I do however absolutely love your story (please ignore my previous curious nature if it upset you in any way). Spike is mean, Buffy is... well at first mean, now I feel very sorry for her... Angel is surprisingly adorable, Cordelia is wonderful, and Riley is just hilariously stupid! I must say I love the angst! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 06:35 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

I'm channeling The OC again. LMFAO

Author's Response: >_> _< You caught me! This little arc is directly inspired from The OC.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 05:59 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

How does the father of a drugged out teen keep his job as principle? Homicide might lose it for him though. Was this what Spike had in mind for the party? He didn't have a problem with drugs or vandelism? Why not Buffy, she did it to Faith in canon? Seems a bit logical for it to be her. Did Spike even know she carried a gun? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: As always, Wilkins is corrupt. I believe I also allude that Spike's father Giles (who owns the town) is more corrupt, and that the two are friends and so nothing can happen to Wilkins or Faith. This is definitely not what Spike had in mind for the party. He did not know she had a gun. He thought she would just come over at 3 AM and put on some rock music or something.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

Unexpected ending, liked it.

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 06:31 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

I know, I'm a bad bad reviewer. Since I missed reviewing (again) before your newest update, I decided to just go ahead and review for both chapters, rather than combine them in the next chapter. That work for you? =P

And have I said lately? You have an awesome taste in music! Both Nirvana song you chose here rock. Kudos. I like saying kudos, leave me alone. Heh.

You just had a ball with all those metaphors didn't you? Ducks, dragonflies, and Jack Sparrow galore! Fun stuff.

Seriously, there are people who don't know what akimbo means? But.... it's such a fun word! We need a world-wide memo or something to clue people in. ;)

Lovely chapter, on to the next!

Author's Response: *laughs* You always put a smile on my face, you know that? :) Incubus said "kudos" in a song, so it can't be all that bad. Nirvana's awesome, they're picked on WAY too much for being overrated when they really aren't. So many great songs... and not just depressing stuff, too. As much as I love akimbo, not everyone knows about its awesomeness. We need to spread the word! :D

Reviewer: a n o n Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

update please

Author's Response: soon... maybe tonight

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 01:40 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

What was Spike thinking inviting Faith to the party?? Hope Buffy doesn't get caught in the crossfire! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: ^_^ Sometimes Spike even baffles me. And that's weird, because I'm the person who's writing him. Thanks for commentin'! :D

Reviewer: just another reviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 04:24 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

hey love your story!!!!! i've been reading along the entire time, and I have to say, this is one of my favourites. I really like how you added the gun, not many people add something so realistic to their stories, because they want to make it like btvs, but this is a nice splash of reality in fantasy. Very good. Who's getting shot? or is Spike jumping in between? that's what i want, i don't think angel could handle having cordy shot, and would be so mad at Spike, at would be good if Spike jumped in between and stopped them of even if HE got shot. Not like I have a spike death wish or anything. o0o0o0o0o0o cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Favorite is good. Yes, very very good. :D I was kind of hesitant about the gun thing, but I feel better about it now after reading this review. And as for "who's gonna get shot," that's a "stay tuned to find out" sort of thing. :( Spike WILL get in the middle of everything, though. Need some heroic qualities in the very anti-hero-esque character. And this is a Spike-centric fic, after all; can't really have a scene without some good Spike action. Thanks for commenting! =]

Reviewer: amandamanda3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

ack!!!!!!! crap! you gotta update soon! :) I can't wait!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise! ;D

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 05:08 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

good chapter.. you are sooo mean to leave it there.

Author's Response: Hehehe... I was definitely thinking evilness by ending it there. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

HOLY SCHNIKIES!!!!! LOL, I've always wanted to say that. Wow, Faith is a lot crazier than I thought she would be. Yer killing me here, u really are!!! You do know how to keep people coming back for more. Please update soon!! Por favor!!!

Author's Response: Faith es muy muy muy loco. But she was provoked, you have to remember. And hopefully this fic will have a lot more "HOLY SCHNIKIES!" moments in the future. :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:17 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

More please, Wonder what will happen will Spike try to rescue one of them if he does who, Cordelia or his buddy Faith, Are Faith and Spike getting together. More please.

Author's Response: Nah... definitely not Spike/Faith; strictly Spuffy. I don't really think Faith's in need of saving right about now. ^_^ Thanks for commentin'!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 08:34 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

Hmm.. I don't suppose Buffy's got a semi-automatic in her pocket or something?

Author's Response: Nah, sadly she didn't bring hers today. :( She does have a noose, though. A pretty noose.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 05:21 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

more please

Author's Response: More soon. :)

Reviewer: blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

ah dammit, are you trying to kill me?
you can't just STOP after "Faith had a gun."
That is so not okay ;P


Author's Response: "You're killing me Smalls!" Sorry, little Sandlots there. Can you believe that at first I only pinned the party for one chapter? It was one big, ginormous ride that never ended and climaxed several times... didn't work very well. This way, we have the suspense and the killing of readers and the total lack of Spuffiness that becomes Spuffiness that really shouldn't be Spuffiness, but then you're thinking "Hey, that's Spuffiness!" and wondering what it means for the Spuffiness because, well, who doesn't want Spuffiness? Ramblin' on. Thanks for commentin'! :D

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:43 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

omg!!! (must know what happens next)

Author's Response: *grins* Soon... next chapter needs some revision still. Thanks for reviewing! ;D

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

oooh you just keep bringing out the big guns...he he literally this time. Still loving this fic, so glad you're updating regularly. Can't wait to see the next installment!

Author's Response: Hahaha... wait until you see how the night is capped off. ^_^ Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:28 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

This story is really maturing nicely! Can't wait for more!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 01:52 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

If buffy get shot then she should just die cause her life just couldn't get any worse haha just messin buffy cant die because this is spuffy not sp.

Author's Response: :D Definitely not gonna kill her. If I killed Buffy, it'd probably be suicide more than anything. Just being shot on the whim by crazy Faith... not symbolic enough, sadly. :(

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