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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 08:29 am Title: The Noose

Very poignant reference to his "spark". Really added to the story, wonderfully done. He does need something, maybe a vaction will help. One more to go.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the symbolism in the lighter, it was something I dreamt up one sunny day. Keep on going, almost there! :D

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 07:28 am Title: The Noose

Spike is losing it. How could Angel just let him go like that?

Author's Response: He knows that Spike needs to be alone, to think things over and change. Angel can't do it for him, it can't be forced, or it won't stick.

Reviewer: anonymouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: The Noose

please continue this

Author's Response: I will soon.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: The Noose

Caught up at last :) You better update soon :p
He has to make up with Buffy, he just has to. But I don't know how, that's up to you.... Maybe Cordy can help? I hope Faith gets what she deserves and I hope Spike can forgive himself and I hope Buffy can forgive him, but it won't be easy, I know that. / Ariadne


Author's Response: Definitely not gonna be easy. They will make up, but after the needed self-loathing and events to give clarity to the situation. I just wanted to say again: thank you SO much for reviewing. I didn't even have Black in my mind until you went through and reviewed... now I'm primed enough to maybe start it again.

Reviewer: spuffyz_3rd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 12:38 am Title: The Noose

Spike has to get his spark back!! This and the last chapter were fantastic to read, totally heart wrenching. It's sad to see Spike so emotionally detached and lost. It's like he was so focused on vengeance that when he finally got it, it didn't fix any of his problems and made him realise what kind of person he'd become. And that person is pretty horrible. I hope he finds his way back. Please update asap!

Author's Response: You really hit the nail on the head, especially with the vengeance part. That has always been one of the premises, that vengeance isn't worth it. Yeah, he is a pretty horrible person. He needs to fix himself before he can do *anything*, he needs to get his spark back. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: The Noose

cofusing chapters

Author's Response: It's meant to be confusing, in a way. All I was really trying to get across was that Spike was turning crazy. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 10:20 pm Title: The Noose

Maybe now he'll be a better person. He was horrible! Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: He was horrible. And hopefully I'll update soon finally. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 10:00 pm Title: The Noose

Can't imagine what's going through Spike's head! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: He's bonkers. :( Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: The Noose

Yeah... if I was Angel in that part... I'd be a little freaked. I managed to undersatnd most of it... but a few parts were out of my reach.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! *smiles happily* I'm so glad you updated this... LOVED it, by the way. It's good to see your not dead. (for a little while there, I wasn't sure... ;) Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad you got the references... they were a little oblique. Very motivating to see such kind words. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 02:48 pm Title: The Noose

I caught a couple references, but the one I really zeroed in on was for Brave New World. God I love that book... I think I've mentioned that in a review before. Meh, I don't want to check. Anyway, I am glad to see an update. Enough so that I won't give you a hard time about taking awhile to do so. ;) Good chapter, by the way. I almost felt like I was the one losing it while reading Spike losing it. Well done! :)

Author's Response: You did, that's where I got the idea of putting it in. See, you all affect my writing. :) Also because the last episode of Prison Break was "Soma," and I've already touched up a little on how PB is somewhat of an inspiration for this story. References were oblique, but I'm very glad I incited that feeling of losing it with Spike. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 01:12 pm Title: The Noose

Im so glad you updated! Love this story please update soon.I cant wait to see there next interaction

Author's Response: I'm glad I updated, too. ;) Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 09:09 am Title: The Noose

Oh that was good, so Spike lost his spark, would that be because his spark is Buffy.

More please

Author's Response: Spike lost his spark because he hurt Buffy so much, it's just unbearable for him. Thanks for reviewing.

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