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Reviewer: Eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 09:05 am Title: The Empire Spikes Back

Good chapter, but he is really pushing it lol

Author's Response: Point. ;)

Reviewer: Eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Changes

He he, I would have loved to see their faces when he replied to his name :D

Author's Response: Haha, yeah. :D

Reviewer: spikex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Changes

great start!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: R Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:23 am Title: Innocence

Glad to see you back in action!

Seeing as how your writing is good, and I mean grammar as well as content, I'm hoping for good things. Although I am a believer that good story isn't necessarily a happy one!

Best of luck to the muses!

Author's Response: Thank you so much; it's comments like these that keep me going. I don't know what I'd do without people like you that give me feedback and feed my muse. I probably wouldn't of gotten further than the first chapter without ya. Sometimes I wanna write this as a pseudo-tragedy with a sad ending, but you're all there to faithfully keep me in check. ^_^ And I'm happy for that, too, as I'd also be pissed if I read any lengthy Spuffy story that ended sadly. Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:21 am Title: Innocence

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 12:06 am Title: Innocence

good update but i hope that buffy doesnt believe what faith says

Author's Response: :( She's gonna go ballistic. ;_; Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Innocence

Thanks for the feedback. Wow, didn't predict the part about faith knowing buff's secrets, but another turn. Deep, dark, and delicious. Rock on!

Author's Response: *evil laugh* Thanks, I'm trying to make this as dark, unpredictable, and cliffhangery as possible. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: Innocence

I can't decide who to hate more...Spike or Faith. Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: Definitely a toss up. Hopefully you'll find some solace, though, in that I'm going to explore fully next chapter how Faith found out, and Spike will be just as shocked as Buffy. Basically, he didn't consciously do anything bad; maybe that will put the hate off of Spike a little. He knows that its taboo, trust me. Spike might be sick, but he's not that sick. ^_^ Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:42 pm Title: Innocence

wow you really want people to hate spike huh? he better do something great to redeem himself

Author's Response: D= Yeah, I guess I want people to hate him right about now. Not by the end of the story, but at this low point, it's completely possibly that everyone will hate him. I have enough up my sleeve to make things amendable; I'm not ending the story before they're both happy and together. Hopefully I'll realistically get there, I know I've dug everyone in quite a whole, from the Buffy antics in the pre-story days and the Spike abuse now, but I believe I have good enough plot and events in the future to slowly mold them back together. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Innocence

I hate FAith!But love the twist!

Author's Response: Faith, LMAO! Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Innocence

Ooh! Thank you for the update! Please give us another! I'm not too proud to beg... please? lol, great chapter.

Author's Response: :D You don't have to beg; another chapter's on the way. Trust me, I couldn't leave this story if I _wanted_ to, it's bloody well all I think about in school. Not that I want to leave it, though, as I love writing this and hearing what people have to say about it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Innocence

Would have to agree that things can't get any worse between them. Could it be Angel that told everyone after the Cordelia incident? Would love to see some Spuffy but it's going to be an uphill struggle with this one! Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yep, this is more of a story _to_ Spuffiness than actual Spuffiness; that's later. Good theory on the secret. Updatin' soon, trust me. Can't let my readers down now can I? ;) Thanks for the feedback! :D

Reviewer: sofia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:56 am Title: Innocence

*covering from stones the other rewievers will throw at me* I tink that even if the ending was harsh it was dramatic and good. I soooo hope to see them back together but I personally love angsty spuffy. I think this story is brilliant and so is the end of this chaper (21),

Author's Response: :D :D :D Thank you! Definitely going for dark and dramatic and maybe cruel... I'm sick, I know. More angst and happiness on the way, maybe not in that order... ^_^

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:26 am Title: Innocence

that was so cruel of Faith to use Buffy's secret against her.

Did Spike tell or did she find out on her own. He told Angel but I didn't think he told anyone else.

I see some groveling that Spike will have to do to get Buffys trust and love back.

Buffys tough but, I could she her running away from this.

Author's Response: :D I love your reviews; they tell me exactly what you're thinking and where to go, what's plausible and what's implausible, how you feel about the characters, etc. We will explore how Faith came to know the secret next chapter; it's not as bad as it seems by the cliffhanger. As for Spike groveling... he's gonna do some, but probably less than you'd expect. Mostly I'm gonna throw him in situations where he can consciously be a better person, help Buffy, see the world in more than black and white, destroy stereotypes, and overall become a hero. Not abandoning the anti-hero in him, though; most of the stuff he does will probably be unknowingly at first. Thanks for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: Blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:30 am Title: Innocence

Faith?
Faith?!!

Oh crap. And Spike that doesnt know the diffrence between Buffy and Faith? And then mean Spike? And then...Faith. Evil evil Faith. Seriously mentally damaged Faith.
Now I am worried. :(





Author's Response: :( Suicidal tendencies ftw! :D

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:15 am Title: Innocence

Am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks! :D

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 06:24 am Title: Innocence

yes, yes i do want him to put things back together. really. really. soon. !!! lol please update when you can! Looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Hehehe, it's definitely in the future. I'm gonna rely more on events to do the mending and not blatant attempts by Spike, though. He probably couldn't charm his way out of this one, anyway, even with a little Neruda faithfully at his side. Ha. Thanks for commenting! :D

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 05:59 am Title: Innocence

I must admit the Spuffy relationship so far is kind of sick, but hey, I like reading it, so maybe I'm not all there either. ;) Love the story, really hate Faith.

Author's Response: Yep, I'd definitely describe the current Spuffiness as disturbing and sick.... my intentions were pretty much always aimed at doing that. :) This is pretty much the end of that stuff, though. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 05:37 am Title: Innocence

Oh wow...what's gonna happen now? Spike's been as ass, but I didn't expect him to tell everyone about her past. Update soon please!

Author's Response: I will soon. Thanks for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Surprise

So far, I've enjoyed the story. I don't know if you consider this the "rock bottom" for Buffy, and if it's not then you could have something where she loses herself (like in drugs or somethin'). Then, she'd have to rely on Spike to pull her out. Reminiscent of Marissa/Ryan in the O.C. Just a thought, continue on. I like it.

Author's Response: We have not hit rock bottom yet; that's next chapter. :) Since I'm a little wanker and love to copy from media and literature I've come across, you are correct in this story becoming reminiscent of The OC in the future. I'm not gonna give it away, but I've always wanted someone to OD in this story. Originally I got the idea from a song called "The Freshman" by The Verve Pipe, but rewatching the first eight episodes of The OC pretty much cemented overdosing at the top of my proverbial checklist. Definitely expect this story to be similar to The OC at times; I really really really liked Mexico and Tijuana and the Hospital, I felt that those were landmark episodes almost on par with Buffy, and I've been contemplating the idea of going to that same place. But that's a little ways ahead, and I still have time to think about it. Thank you for your great feedback! :D

Reviewer: DelicateFlower Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Surprise

I'm dying here! I keep checking and hopeing and praying that you will update soon! is it Faith? is is Cordelia? is it Angel? the teacher? please, please, please update! So far, this story is sooooo good. Anything you write will be pure genius I'm sure!

Author's Response: LMAO... Angel, hahahahahaha. I wouldn't delve into preference for main characters, at least not yet. ^_^ And thanks so much for compliments! :)

Reviewer: spuffylover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 06:01 am Title: Surprise

EVIL cliffhanger more please

Author's Response: Soon... soon.

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2007 - 01:33 am Title: Surprise

Ahh! Damn cliffhangers! Very well done. Amazing story. Please update soon.... pretty please? *pouts*

Author's Response: Thank you! And I've seemed to hit a bit of a block as far as writing goes, so I honestly dunno when the next update will be. Sorry. :(

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Surprise

OMG!!!! I hope Buffy knows he thought it was her!!!

Author's Response: I certainly hope so also. :D

Reviewer: R Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2007 - 05:06 am Title: Surprise

1. I'm interested to confirm who that naughty person is.

2. I like Spike less and less as the story progresses, b/c instead of getting better he seems to be getting worse. He started out cynical and sarcastic and hurt...but it's gotten worse than that. Reading it is kind of...hopeless? I dunno, i like my stories to have happy endings. Angst is all well and good, but I want my fairytales to be better than real life.

3. I think the UFB is the perfect catalyst for a change in Spike. Obviously, Buffy will be angry...and her anger and dismiss of Spike could help him...see things a little more clearly . Maybe see a bit of grey.

Author's Response: Yeah... Spike's definitely gotten worse. I dunno, I guess a part of me was writing tragic when I should have been writing with the happy Spuffy ending in mind. Thanks for 3; I was hoping it might be a good enough catalyst. That's not gonna be the *only* thing that makes Buffy angry, though; other stuff will surface. I don't want to give it away, though. :) Thanks for commenting.

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