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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:30 am Title: Push

As it's been said, "it's a thin line between love and hate" but Spike want's retribution, for it to be anything other then that, would not be true to this story. He wants it to be dirty and ugly and not an act of love and beauty. Will he get want he's wanted or will it turn into more? Very well done.

Author's Response: Thin line, yes. Also: "you always hurt the one you love."

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:27 am Title: Rage Against The Machine

Buffy was mean in the past. Part of me hopes Spike will get her back. I'm sure though she doesn't have that perfect life he thinks she does.

Author's Response: You would be 100% correct there, mi amiga. One hundred percent there. She doesn't have a perfect life, and we'll soon see how unperfect it actually is...

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:17 am Title: Hey Man, Nice Shot

Spike is just Priceless and Buffy So wants him! Yay!

Author's Response: Heh heh heh... yes indeed. Spike is awesome here. :)

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Closer

Go Spike! I hate Riley! Love that Spangel are friends. Oh and since I love Cangel I hope that Angel get's with Cordy somehow too.

Author's Response: Yeppers... I'm in the "We Hate Riley" fan club, too. "We Hate Freddie Prince Jr." fan club, also, but we know why that is... You're in for a real treat, because this story does have Spike and Angel as best friends, as well as Angel and Cordelia having a relationship, maybe even the healthier relationship. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:02 am Title: Shake It Up

Spike being friends with the Principal was very unexpected and a funny twist. lol Buffy being in Calculus I definetely didn't see that coming either much like Spike. lol



Author's Response: Hehehe... that's exactly why I put Wilkins in. They go golfing every Sunday. ;) Buffy in Calculus... definitely a twist. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:59 am Title: Let Me Take You Home Tonight

Angel can be with anyone he wants expect Buffy and Cordy is a good choice, goes to canon. Spike's just tearing himself up. The war he battling within himself is of historical proportions, you weren't kidding when you said there would be angst. Great work, thanks.

Author's Response: Yep yep, Angel goes with Cordelia. They might become the "healthier" of the relationships later, just an fyi. And yes, my Spike is really messed up and conflicted to hell. Angst is my weapon. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:51 am Title: The Empire Spikes Back

LFAO! I'm loving this and there isn't even any Spuffy yet! That doesn't happen very often.

Author's Response: :D I'm pretty good at writing silly classroom antics. Probably because that's semi-autobiographical, LOL. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:42 am Title: Disease

Your handling the writing fine, don't know if it will change once he decides that he doesn't hate her anymore, but she does deserve everything he dishing out. She might of had a reason to do it but it doesn't excuse it. Loved the scene with the janitor.

Author's Response: Janitor was Jim Carrey pretty much. I think he was a janitor before he became an actor, IIRC. I'm glad to see you think what he's dishing out to her is deserved; some people even thought it was too much here.

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:38 am Title: Changes

I'm just starting this fic and the first chapter already has me hooked. lol Go Spike! The Riley and Teacher interaction was hilarious. LMAO



Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you. ;) Yeah, Mr. Davis is pretty inept... I'm glad you're rooting for Spike, though. :D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 03:01 am Title: The Road Less Traveled

Take control, Spike. But Buffy's another story. Doesn't he have some painting to do? Will Faith start without him? I haven't read that poem in so long, I'd forgotten about it. Glad to see their still reading it in school. Thanks ALT.

Author's Response: Still reading in school... >.> I did my term paper on Robert Frost, and that was about the time I wrote this chapter. I just felt the poem fit awesomingly in with the story. And Spike will take control, maybe too much.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

They both have a lot of baggage to sort through. Relationships are rarely that easy. It did give them a chance to explore the unknown world, apparently they both are wanting too. Really enjoying this, hope I can finish it tonight.

Author's Response: Yes, and this will play a major role in the madness to come. The only problem I had with this story is, like you said, they both wanted. I wish I could have fleshed out more why Buffy wanted, but I just dropped the ball on that one.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

I was afraid this is what you were going for when, in Spikes mind, she must of had a perfect life. However, I never thought to would be that bad. She was only five, somethings you just never truly get over. Will Spike continue to thwart her advances? Now to see.

Author's Response: Yeppers, I was definitely implying it with Spike always commenting that she must have had the perfect life. I wanted to make her life as miserable as possible, though, because well... that's just the way life is. Need some Buffy sympathy, too. Thanks for continuing.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 01:53 am Title: Rage Against The Machine

Spike has to be as big as a house, lifting like that. Hard to imagine spike that bulked up. You don't need steriods, not when you've got rage and the adrenaline going for ya. Loving this fic in Spike's POV, from a guys POV. Thanks for posting this, it's a fantastic read.

Author's Response: Hahaha... this is as guyish as it gets. Yeah, I'm overly ambitious with him lifting so much. Either I exaggerate the hell out of it or it gets lost... I wanted this to be a quality of Spike, that he works out because he has so much rage. Rage Against The Machine is a rap rock group with political lyrics much akin to Spike's thoughts, which I why it makes a good title (aside from him raging in this chapter... heh). Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 01:28 am Title: Hey Man, Nice Shot

Faith and Spike? *shutters*, totally a Spuffy shipper here, glad to see you're on board. I was wondering where and with whom, he got all this new sexual knowledge. Buffy, the green eyed monster? Spike is really making his presence known, now for the last class, guess he's going to show them a few things besides a punch to Riley's face. Well done, this is great!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 01:27 am Title: Hey Man, Nice Shot

Faith and Spike? *shutters*, totally a Spuffy shipper here, glad to see you're on board. I was wondering where and with whom, he got all this new sexual knowledge. Buffy, the green eyed monster? Spike is really making his presence known, now for the last class, guess he's going to show them a few things besides a punch to Riley's face. Well done, this is great!

Author's Response: Faith and Spike will never be anything, trust me. I will reuse Faith often, though, and she is a big part of this story, although we rarely see her. And I needed someone for Spike to bang, so yeah. Thanks for teh complimentario! :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:45 am Title: Closer

Wondering if Buffy had too changed over the summer or was it her treatment of him, that made him see her differently? Riley won't be excepting him to back up his statement. This should be really good. Some really great songs you have, for titles, just went down the list.

Author's Response: She's treated him badly for all of his years in school. Riley won't be expecting anything; he still thinks only taunts can scare Spike. I'm glad you like the song choices as titles; that means you have good taste in music like me. :D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Shake It Up

I was wondering how Wilkins knew his name was Spike now. Great slip with Spike, knowing where she lived. He really is trying to pull this off. I am a bit surprised to know that Angel's actually his friend here, that's going to take time getting used to. Never liked his character and only watched ATS because of the rest of the cast. Loved Wesley's transformation over the series. Glad I've got so much more to read.


Author's Response: Wilkins will come back into this little play muuuuuuuuuuch later. That's something I purposely left open to become a plot point later, since Wilkins and Faith are connected. Yeah, Angel's his friend here; that might seem a little risky, but that's the way I wanted it. I'm not really a fan of him anymore, either. Hope you have fun reading, I love these reviews. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:14 am Title: The Empire Spikes Back

Forgot to tell you how much I loved the name of the chapter.

Author's Response: *grins* It's one of my favorite chapter names, too. Alludes to the darkness of the fic, too, since TESB was by far the darkest and most depressing of the trilogy. My favorite of them, though.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 12:12 am Title: The Empire Spikes Back

That was a great chapter. I love this Spike and "valley girl Buffy"? Wonderful POV, I'm really enjoying this, fantastic writing.

Author's Response: :D Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Not everything is at it seems with Buffy, you should know. And compliments on my writing = ecstasy.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Changes

I loved it Andrew. No one recognized him. I 'm so glad you've updated this. Hopefully, both fics will have a your muses attention. Keep that sucker chained to the bedpost, can't wait to get caught up. Great way to make Riley back down, won't he be pissed at himself to know who it was, to do it!

Author's Response: Thank you, Verda. I just hope you'll be as encouraging after you see why this fic is named Black. ;) There is some reason to my madness, even here. Spike blowing smoke into Riley's face was inspired from a scene in American History X. If you haven't seen it, it's an amazing movie about very racist neo-Nazis. One of them blows smoke into the face of someone they loathe, and ergo we have the connection. Thanks for commenting on past stuff; I have a really great time discussing previous chapters.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Alive

been waiting for this chapter forever. I didn't really like reading about what spike was going through but i understand it. Please update soon, i look forward to all your updates.

Author's Response: Thank you, anon. I also don't like what Spike is going through right now, it's all very sad. :(

Reviewer: misouragirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Alive

Really glad that you returned to this story and I hope you keep writing it to its conclusion. Black is darker, more emo angst than I generally go for, but you've done a great job writing it. The literary allusions, the collegiate existential mumbo-jumbo is very well-done! Spike is pretty awful in this story, but I do think I can see him and Buffy reconnecting if the right paths are taken from this point on, especially as it was largely the way Buffy kept hurting William that is responsible for William's metamorphosis into the amoral creepy Spike who then hurts her in retaliation. It's believable and well-written, and like I said, I will keep reading it if you keep updating, so I hope you get inspired to see this to the end!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words, they are truly inspiring. This fic has always been a playground for any literary or film allusion I can muster up, it's great to see you understand my oblique references so well (existential mumbo-jumbo is dead on...:). I'm glad you think things can be reconciled if the right course of action is taken, that makes me feel so much better since some people think Spike is beyond redemption. I know exactly where I'm heading and I do hope that it's enough to amend Spike, at least partially. Thanks again for your motivating review. :)

Reviewer: jadangel2001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 06:46 pm Title: Alive

i'm SOO glad you're writing again, i love this fic. i love the way you write, the things you include in it, the details are fantastic. i wouln't usually say i'd beta, cos i don't always have time for people that update often, but if it's just someone to readthrough that you want, and give an opinion that it's ok before you post, i can do that no probs. great writer like you doesn't need someone telling you about grammar, and you've probably already found someoneby the time you check this review, but if not, my email address is jadangel2001@yahoo.co.uk, and that's my msn address too if you wanted to chat about anything. keep writing if you can, it's a joy to read this again.

jade.
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, you're amazing. :) I'm glad I still have people that are reading; it's great, after all this time I was off I thought everyone would have forgotten about this story. As for a beta, I don't think I really need one anymore... I know, I'm a change-my-mind-all-the-time weirdo, but I think I'm comfortable now with writing this, knowing that people are still reading and enjoying.

Reviewer: cocky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 06:15 pm Title: Alive

I wasn't quite finish. I sent my review before i was finished.

Now, that I think about it. I feel that maybe Buffy will take this Spike back. I been reading back and maybe she could . Cause Buffy was treated Spike like crap when she knew how he felt. Although, we really didn't see much of it. And I love to see how you go with the coming chapters.

Author's Response: It's oooooo again! :D Yes, she did treat him like crap for several years. I purposely did not flashback to it often (I think I did once) because I wanted to show vengeance and not the act that inspired it, so we could think more deeply about the implications of it. The premise is that revenge leads to ruin. Thanks for following up on your last review.

Reviewer: cocky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: Alive

I don't want him dead. And maybe I shouldn't have wrote that. You probably don't know this. But I'm ooooooooo. I don't leave reviews much anymore. I just try to stay away from stories like this. Especially this story because I was so disappointed to see Spike yet again the one who needs redemption and not Buffy..
But it didn't work that way. So, i let it be.
I saw it now. I'm trying to read it again the parts that I didn't. As huge as a Spuffy fan that I'm. I hope that Buffy doesn't take Spike back. I think you made him to terrible to her for me to want them back together. It doesn't matter if Spike changes into a better person. Sometimes, you have to learn your lesson by losing everything. And i think that this is what this Spike needs. Although, this will hurt my Spuffy heart. When writers to this and make Spike so terrible and awful then i usually don't want them to end up together. So, again it is hard right there to read a story where I don't want a Spuffy ending. Some stories I can see Spike changing into a better person and Buffy taking him back. And some I really can't picture Buffy taking spike back. And those of the stories that I try to figure it out and don't read. I think some authors do a great job and some do a poor job with that.

I am wirting an AU story where Buffy is the one who needs to change and be a better person. This Buffy is going be mean and awful. And it will be lots of angst. And people who love the character Buffy probably wouldn't like it. . But I don't think I will ever put it up. Maybe one day. Not anytime soon. But i like to think it is a different type of story.

good luck with the rest of the story.

I



Author's Response: I had an inkling that you were oooooo. As for the story and the malice towards Spike, not everything is at it seems. This story definitely has an Iago or two, people who are being deceitful right now. I don't want to spoonfeed the ending, but I do hope that Spike will be redeemable after the situation has progressed and we see how things really are. I'm *not* going to have Buffy just drop everything and take him back; that has never been my style. I do hope you post your AU fic; it seems interesting. I must say, though, that for me, at least in season six and seven, it was Buffy who changed for Spike, not the other way around, and she was wholly the bad person. That's just my opinion, though. Thanks for reviewing, ooooo.

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