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Reviewer: MadBrillianT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: Stress Relief

NO WILLIAM!! DON'T GO TO THE DARK SIDE!!

Author's Response: Aw honey, keep reading - he will redeem himself - I promise

Reviewer: Minamyluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Stress Relief

Wow, that is all.

Author's Response: Thank honey, glad it left you speechless

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Stress Relief

My thoughts exactly at William's last words.. he won't let go easy. And Buffy won't like that. But will she know? *on to the next chapter*

Author's Response: Hi toots, he does clig a bit doesn't he. need to sort that one out

Reviewer: maraina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Stress Relief

Oh wow...good tinglies, definitely good tinglies, lol! The passion with which William embraces his hedonism is pretty hot I have to admit but 1- Spru? Oh hell no! (LOL again) 2- Going straight from one encounter (i.e. lover) to another? Sooo not of the good. 3- Thinking he can treat a woman (Buffy in this instance but it could be anyone) with such disrespect as to handle her like chattel while seeking his pleasure at her (very literal) expense? Completely in keeping with those times I suspect but still...NOT COOL. Great way to crank the angst-levels up though, hee! Hope there's gonna be some serious comeuppance and a LOT of soul-searching for William in the not too distant future. Still adoring it and waiting eagerly for more.

Author's Response: Thanks maraina. Angst is my middle name and this story has plenty. Give it time and you will see what I mean.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 07:46 am Title: Stress Relief

Buffy has her work cut out for her if she thinks she can take away William's favorite trollip. Drusilla has thoroughly seduced William with her lurid games and he is truly ensnared.

Considering how Buffy's father is treating her like a beast to be wed and bread, whether or not she can assert some leverage of her own and bargain William into her plans of "give up Drusilla or no sex with Buffy". Perhaps she can bargain with William's father and have him order his son to give up Drusilla in exchange for an heir. That is really the only bargaining chip that I can see that Buffy has. The women of those times probably would have chaperones to ensure that their virtue would not be compromised and if Buffy were not to allow herself to be alone with William then she can make her plans come to realization.

Buffy's father is quite the rake as well and I feel that he does not give his daughter enough credit considering that Buffy has been wise to his plan to marry her off by starting her out with old men to eventually serve up William on a silver platter. Buffy is his daughter afterall and Hank is not a stupid man.

William's existence is wholly based on selfish pleasure where his ideal of what love should be is warped by sexual enticements provided by a woman who is unattainable. If Buffy were within reach but unattainable, would he bother to give chase since she has already given him a taste of her body.

Somehow I think that William is too sure of himself and does not take into consideration that once Buffy is wed that she can do the same to him that Drusilla is doing to her own husband.

Great story, really am looking forward to reading more of it.

Author's Response: Vette honey, the best is yet to come. Wait and see

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