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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter 31

Oh I loved it, please say he is not dead.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see, my lovely! The next update should be up by Friday morning so you can find out what happens next! Thank you so much for sticking with me on this one and being kind enough to review. Thank you!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 31

Whoa! This chapter was intense, especially the closing scene. I can't wait to read Buffy's POV about what just happened. Good update!

Author's Response: Thanks, Midnightgirl! I'm so happy to see your review, I was getting really worried that I had truly pissed everyone off. I was hoping to have the next chapter out by the morning, but it's been really busy tonight at work and I just don't think I will be able to. Anyway, thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 31

I know I promised not to rant much... and I plan to stick with it, but that doesn't mean I'm not glowering at the screen right now!!!

I think Buffy did what she did so she could use his blood to be sacrificed in order to save the world (or just sacrifice HIM to save it, but I was hoping she'd kiss him and say something if that was the reason). Still, I doubt Rupes will see it that way... GRRRRRRRRRRR

OK, post next chapter NOW and gimme some hope, PLEASE??? *bats eyelashes*

*hugs you* (mainly to keep you close enough to choke you if you don't fix this! LOL)

Author's Response: I think the next chapter will answer most of your questions behind Buffy's reasoning, first part will back track and be her POV. Thank you for not ranting at me, and lots of hugs for being kind enough to review. (At this point, you are the only one who did.) I will be working on the next chapter soon, hopefully work won't be too busy and will let me write. Sadly, it's really warm out and that usually brings out things of the bad. Thanks again, hun...even if you are trying to choke me!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 30

Mmm your A/N sounds as if I maybe won't like the end of this fic... we'll see.
Oh my, it was Spike that hurt Buffy. And even now Giles can't acknowledge that Buffy isn't a normal demon, not hurting Spike.
Spike won't like to hear Giles threatening Buffy.

Author's Response: Eh...it'll be interesting. Maybe not overly happy and making with the group hugs and dance, but...different from what you expect from me. As I stated, there will most likely be a part two. Depends on the request for it. The ending I have planned for one will sufice on its own, but for those who crave the traditional happy ending...that would be in part two. So, if you want it...all you have to do is ask, dear! :) Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 30

I love your way to write, the words just come flowing and it's in harmony, the words create beautiful sentences :) I'm in awe!

Fast healing is good, she definately needed it after their misunderstanding. I guess I won't like Rupert much... / Ariadne

Author's Response: Aw, thanks babe! **blushes** The liking of Rupert will come later, maybe. It won't be too bad! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter 30

Oh I hope he does not do anything to Buffy.

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for leaving the review, glad to see you are still with me on this one. Rupert is being a bit of an ass, but maybe he'll change. Thanks again!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 30

Dang...Spike hurt Buffy and Giles is still after her. That sucks. I hope Spike finds out about the plan. Hopefully Buffy will make it out undead. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Spike injured Buffy, but at least it wasnt intentional, right? Spike will be advised of the plan, eventually. **insert evil grin** Glad you are still with me, thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 30

Great vineyard scene. And I loved Spike and Buffy's dialogue throughout the chapter. The Buffy/Giles conversation was definitely interesting, I'm worried about the ominous direction it took though. Good update!

Author's Response: Thank you, I am always a little worried about fight scenes. Seriously, they aren't my fortay, so I am glad you liked it. I thought this scene with Spuffy was better than most, as far as their interaction. Glad you liked it and are still with me!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 30

Ouch!! Buffy got hurt. Buffy is afraid that she can't control her demon to drink from Spike.

Something tells me that Giles is going to be wrong. I'm afraid for Spike. Something tells me that something is going to happen to him because of Giles not wanting to listen. If I'm right I hope he doesn't die. He is the slayer and I know most of them die young but maybe Spike can live long.

So, we are not going to like Giles in this story. I think the only time that I really didn't like Giles on the show is when he and Robin tried killing Spike. Made me mad that they did that to my Spike. LOL



Author's Response: A big ouch on that one! Scythe stick thru gut, not on my list of fun things to do on a date! :) Giles's will have a moment of clarity, eventually. I can't say too much more since I don't want to give everything away. Thank you so much for the review, glad to see a few of you still out there.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 30

Another approached and for a brief moment, Spike wondered why they always seemed to attack one at a time.Hmmm... *scratches chin* I've been wondering about this in all karate films...

...Focus, Sotia!!!

Well, I LOVED the update, hated Giles with a fiery passion, and have a sense of impending doom that I really don't want to see come true. I'm hooked on this and will follow it to the end, but you've been warned *chuckles*

I hope Buffy lets Spike know about whatever it is that Andrew came up with!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Yes, there seems to be the same puzzling action in all Kung-Fu movies. Weird. I am so glad you loved the update, I really enjoyed writing this chapter. Seriously got like no work done tonight and now must scramble to get it completed in time! Shame on me. As for you fiery hatred of Giles, I would be worried if you didn't. I know I have been warned, but please be patient and trusting. Oh and she will let him know....eventually. **Grins wickedly** Thanks so much! Yea Sotia! **hugs you back**

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 29

Of course, Buffy trying to get through with Faith isn't going to happen.

Author's Response: Most likely not, I mean...that would totally ruin the whole ending I have planned. Then again, I've been known to change my mind at the last minute, so..... LoL! Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for sticking with me on this. Hopefully, if all goes as planned, the ending is only three chapters away.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter 29

Great Buffy/Faith scene. Everything Buffy said was true, now it's up to Faith to decide what to do. Can't wait to find out what's in the email. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. I was totally nervous about this chapter since my muse took such a long vacation. Really happy to see that my readers are still enjoying the story. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 29

Interesting story, I can't wait to read more. The lesbian thing almost threw me off, but the story kept me going and I am very glad. Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Nicka! It's always nice to catch the interest of a new reader! Yea! Sorry if the B/W/X thing turned you off, but very happy that you stuck it out. Wasn't much to it other than that one scene though. Yea! New reader! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 29

Wesley got bad news from Andrew then... that doesn't sound so good.
I have a feeling that Buffy can't convince Faith.
Till next part :)

Author's Response: No, it is definitely not of the good, but it will all be explained shortly. Thank you so much for staying with me and leaving a review.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh, lovely to see an update! :) I wonder why Willow has left Faith at the motel.. maybe she wants Buffy to come there... and what about the upcoming danger? You're making me curious! :) So please update soon...
/ Ariadne

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am so happy that you are still with me on this story, I know I have been rather lacking in the update department. I do promise to get another chapter out soon, it seems that my muse has returned at least somewhat. Thanks again!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter 29

Oh this is good


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad to see that you are still with me.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 29

As you already know, I LOVED this! The gloomy-doomy cloud that hangs over their heads has me chewing the ragged edges of my nails.

For Buffy to be kneeling, things must indeed be extremely ominous, and I doubt that Faith's is the only life she's worried about (I mean... duh: Apocalypse pending!)

Excellent chapter, honey! Can't wait for more of this, even if I (and a certain hot blond) have to beg for it ;-)

*hugs*

Author's Response: Oh, Sotia..you are truly awesome and I will accept your and a sexy lil hot blonde's begging anytime you want to send it my way. Yes, things are very much teetering on the edge of doom in poor old Sunnydale and I am afraid that the rest of the ride is not going to be very fluffy. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! **Does happy dance** Thank you! **hugs**

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 28

hee, Buffy forgot what she was going to say. And cute cell phone she has. Andrew is ok.

Author's Response: I know, I so want her phone! Loves me some sparklies! And...who wouldn't forget what they were going to say when faced with an amorous Spike? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 28

I'm still here with you! :) great update! I wonder when and how she will find Faith? In her bed maybe? :-p No, don't really think so.... I'll be waiting for your next update, like I always do :)

Author's Response: Yea! Glad you are still with me. No, Faith will most definitely not show up in Buffy's bed. Thanks so much for not only leaving a review, but for sticking around. Not too much longer until its completed, promise!

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 28

this role reversal really works . i think you write very well!!!

i want more

Author's Response: Good to hear! I really enjoy writting this story, even though I've had a hard time doing so lately! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 28

Loved that this has been updated.

Author's Response: Good! Thanks for the review, Sam!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 28

I'm definitely still interested in this fic, so a big Yay that you updated!!! Loved Andrew's introduction into the story, I especially enjoyed learning his backstory. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I have been really worried that I had lost you guys by fiddle farting around for so long and am really uber pleased that most of you are still here. Can't give away too much of the story, but Andrew is going to come through. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad you have an update for us :)
Not only did Buffy have news that can be helpful (especially if Andrew finds something out). Hot interlude in the graveyard :)
I wonder how Spike the news about Faith being Buffy's Ex take.

Author's Response: Thanks, babe! For weeks I just sat at my desk and suffered through the blatant mockery that is my cursor. Write a paragraph, delete half of it, curse loudly, try again...repeat. Sad, pathetic and irritating to say the least. Glad you're still with me! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter. So happy to see you back.

Author's Response: THANKS!!! :) I was so nervous about this chapter since it took so damned long to write, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 28

I really loved seeing an update on this one! I had forgotten about it *hangs head in shame* but thankfully it was on my fav list and I got mailed! I fully remember now why it was there, as it is a very well written, extremely interesting story and I cannot wait for more!

The following two parts had me gigging loudly!
"They had known one another for nearly ten years now, after Andrew had stalked her at length hoping to become the next Anne Rice of vampire novels"

and

sexylildeadgirl

LMAO!

Please keep the updates coming!

*hugs*

Author's Response: So pleased that you loved the update and I do not fault you one itsy bit for forgetting about this story, it has been a long time. Two months, in fact. Damn thing kept mocking me. Down right infuriating actually. As I have stated on numerous times, I will not leave you guys hanging with a WIP. This will be finished, in fact, I have the ending written already, just have to write everything up until then. Thanks so much for your review!!!!

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