Date: 09/06/2015 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
This is so good! I can't stop reading, and... Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh I SHIP IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/26/2007 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Great ending to the chapter. Damn his mom for interupting them though,. lol
Author's Response: Yeah, bloody mothers. They always pick the wrong time to talk. :P
Date: 05/11/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I hope William will talk to Buffy again and tell her what he told Anne. Because otherwise their stories will be different :) Yeah, Buffy was indeed the talk of the evening. Anne didn't say a word yet if they like the thought of William courting Buffy. The rose was very romantic.q
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. :)
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I got my kiss... or I guess they did, but it was indeed divine. So simple, and yet completely powerful. And I beleive she would follow him anywhere. Amazing, can't wait for more.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
aww i love it! i love them! oh gosh, this story gives me some type of warm fuzzy i've never had reading a story before. it's so, just, sweet and innocent. it's beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you like this story and really appreciate your taking the time to review.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I really love reading this story it shows heart.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you feel that way. :)
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
OHH HOW SWEET WILLIAM IS!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that theyre getting closer and that they like each other so much, they both deserve to be loved and to be happy and they to that to one another. i really hope that everything keeps going well and that people leave them alone. also i hope that william and buffy will court and that wit goes well. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter. thanx
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
A very loving story and a great twist on the part oof William in Spike we never see. Please add more when you can.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Sigh-----so beautiful!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
A little adventure headed Elizabeths way :)
A very nice story
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I wonder if Anne is ok with William liking Buffy given the times and her station in the household and coming from a work house if she would be ok with her son having feeling for Elizabeth. Don't get me wrong Anne cares for Buffy you can tell but she's not a very educated nurse and Anne has to notice that. Or she chose Elizabeth herself for William hoping she'd see in him all the things she sees good in her son. I'm not sure but I love reading this and seeing if any of my thoughts come close to what happens in it next.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm starting to worry with so little vamp activity that perhaps they know she is there and are watching her or something or one of the kitchen staff is reporting to Dru or something. Evil is a foot I think cause just when everyone gets too happy or comfy in pops evil.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love that Buffy stays try to Buffy-ness ans says the first thing to pop in her head it's a delightful tale.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Very pretty fic I feel like I'm watching a old movie reading this tonight. A flower and a note a possible secret meeting? Cant wait to see
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
this has life I feel like I'm right in there while reading this. I am a huge fan please write more soon.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh my giddy heart! They have something!!!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
This story is simply beautiful! I love it so much! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
More please.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Ahhhhhhh where is he taking her too? I'm dying to know!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
It is interesting to see how he struggles against himself not to touch her when you can see he wants to from the small hug embrace she gives him with the smelling of her hair. The great thing about Victorian times is that so much thought and meaning went into those stolen touches but it simply was not allowed and how it feeds into the passion they feel so I can see why with his writing it's the only outlet he can have in regarding any woman he might have any feelings for. I think that with your writing it makes it all the more sexy and endearing is the longing and how you describe it out. I really enjoy this and wonder when he is turned and when she is pulled back to the time she is from how either of them will deal with the loss I applaud your writing on this it is effulgent in it's own way.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
“That Cecily cow…she wasn’t effulgent. Was she?”
LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL!
Cow is right!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I feel like I'm reading a classic and I love it please write more soon!
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I think I held my breath the whole way throught that chapter. I was so excited to see that you had updated. This is so beautifully written. I love it.
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Aww...I really love reading this story, You've written the shy,nervous William so fantastically well.
I just hope nothing horrid happens - but then I expect they will ..lol
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I think it's so incredibly brave of him to give Buffy his words when knowing how everyone has rejected him and made fun of him in the past but he is honest with her and shows her his feeling towards her. So beautiful I want a guy like young William here it almost made me cry to see his happiness. Man I need a tissue!