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Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Good Dawn! For fixing him up and figuring stuff out and planting thoughts of the maybe-she's-not-a-lying-bitch kind in Spike's head. I was afraid he was going to be truly horrid to her next he saw her, because he felt betrayed.

I'm also wondering about another piece of jewelry, and if Spike still has it.

Can't imagine Buffy will be delighted to see Angel(us)...

Author's Response: You'll find out what became of *that* piece of jewelry a bit later on, I promise. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Yay for more! And Dawn? Gotta love her, and the thoughts she's put into luscious Spike's head. Can't wait for the confrontation between he and Buffy, and he and Buffy and Angel. Gotta be awesome. Thanks for giving us a great story!

CT.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the kind review. :-D

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Honey, honestly, you write word crack. I can't get enough!! :) So so so good, please update again!

Author's Response: lol. What a great compliment. I hope I can continue to feed your addiction. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: anabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Wow, this if that was a capitulate INTENSE!
In the first part, we see, like Willow feels with rights to act itself to the backs of evrybody, without taking into account the feelings or opinions from Buffy or the rest from scubbies, in the third part, finally it yields to her own desires and decides to call to Ange, and this is something that I do not believe that it brings nothing good for the reconciliation of Buffy and Spike/William
Dawnn has a truely tender relation with Spike, as if outside its older brother, very beautiful! it seems that she wil be the one that is on the awares to him to Spike about how Buffy by its return feels, that really loves him
And I must tell you: never belive that you wrote of the first night between William and Elizabeth, adorable, the tenderness, the love, the passion...I always have thought who the jealousy are a sign of lack of self-confidence, and William is the king of the insecurities,
even in a while like this, their insecurities emerge, and also I can see small parts of Spike being born in: his obsecion to have to Elizabeth only for his own of an almost fierce way!
Keep writting, you gotme sitting in the border of my chair!! i gona send you a basket of cokies for you an you muse

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: Jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Yay Dawn! And yay everyone's reactions to the idea of Angel coming to Sunnydale, haha.

I love Spike/Dawn interaction--- great job! Spike's questions and thoughts are so, so, SPIKE. :) I love great characterisation!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! It seems like you've really picked up on the inspiration for this story, considering the frequent updates, and I for one am a very very very happy camper. =D



Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Oh here comes Devill uh ohh i mean Angel to the rescue! Yuckkk! What good can he do? What im very interested to know is how Buffy feels now. Im a little dissapointed that she is not here in this chapter. But Dawn saved the day!!! I truly truly love her for caring genuinely for Spike! Who would have thought that such a young girl could actually distinguished a good man from a bad one? From the start, she and Joyce are the only true friends of Spike who believed in him. And now she is there when Spike needed him most. I wish Spike could tell her what happened. Although i feel totally proud of Spike for not telling her. He kept it all to himself and didnt take it out on her. And the way he always thinks of Buffy's welfare before him amazes me! Even after all that happened he still unselfishly wants Buffy not to be harrassed by her friends. When he could be the one harassing her because he thinks that Buffy intentionally made him love her. Instead he took his anger on himself. By destroying his hands that wanted so much to destroy her for putting him into this lovesick mess. Oh please put an end to his torture and mine, too! let us know what Buffy's thoughts are soooon!

Author's Response: Buffy's thoughts will be a main focus of the next chapter, don't worry. I loved hearing your thoughts on this chapter, and you are spot on in your analysis of Spike's actions. Thanks so much for such a lovely, insightful review. :-)

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Stupid Angel! Stupid Willow! I love the way you've made Dawn. She could have had a better role in the show, and I think this is what it should have been. Very well written. I enjoy the interactions between Spike and Dawn. Can't wait to see where you take them all from here.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

GOD DAMNIT WHY DID SHE HAVE TO CALL HIM AND WHY IS HE COMING!!! HES GOING TO MESS EVERYTHING UP!!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i think its so sweet that dawn fixed him up and talked to him about buffs situations. i really hope that spike got that buffy didnt want to leave him and loved wat they had and was happy. also i hope spike and buffy talk about things and that they work things out. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx so much

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter and that you reacted so intensely to it - it's a sign that I did my job right! As always, I appreciate hearing your thoughts. :-)

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

uh-oh...angel cakes is coming. I know Willow just wants to help but i think she doesn't understand that Angel is in the past...and that Buffy and him have two different lives and when they broke up they gave up all the rights of being part of these type of situations. (Like you made Xander say in this chapter) I just think that Willow is trying to be the puppet master of Buffy and Angel when in fact she should just stay out of it. I hope Buffy gets to say that to Willow at ome point of your story (or maybe Giles say it) because i always wanted her to say it in the real show.

I'm glad Dawn is pushing Spike in to thinking maybe Buffy/ Elizabeth wasn't the 'lying bitch'. And once he talks to her he'll realize that she never wanted to leave William. She probably feels extremely guilty now for seeing that her William was turned into a vampire and had to go through everything for the sake of his pain of losing her.

Author's Response: Willow had only the best intentions when calling Angel, but you know what they say the road to hell is paved with ... Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

Hee! Something tells me Angel isn't going to get the warm welcome from Buffy that he might think. I love the Dawn/Spike interaction from the last chapter and from this one. I don't think I will ever get enough of this story.

Author's Response: How wonderful to know! I hope I can keep you that interested in the future. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

I kind of feel sorry for Willow. She tries her best and people chew her out.
Oh, wow, Elizabeth/William first time sex. I liked how you wrote it the first time, but being the perv I am (at least I'm not a pedo, hee) I kind of wanted more. Poor Spike.
Nice Dawn, take care of Spike.
The Angel might be funny. He didn't seem like a total dick.;



Author's Response: Yeah, I think Willow's heart is in the right place here. Then again, so is Xander's. He may be biased against Angel and Spike ... but that's because he's seen them both do terrible things. He and Willow are both just trying to look out for their friend in different ways. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

cool chapter i was really hoping for the bit buffy spike meeting but i understand that you needed to set it all up and all that...just one serious question.....why do we need angel here anyway??? all he ever does is screw everything up and then get all broody about it (no offence to angel lovers?) but yeah is he really needed? ooh and btw i went back and read the remakes of your earlier chapters they are definately better than the originals more detailed although i love the story either way just wanted to give you props for it ^^

Author's Response: Yep, Angel is necessary to the plot. Sorry you don't like him, but that's just how it's got to be. I'm glad you liked the revisions of the other chapters, though. Thanks so much for letting me know! :-)

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three

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Well, those look more like hershey kisses than a muffin basket, but I think you get the idea!

You are building up some delicious tension right now. Love it.

Author's Response: Mmm ... muffins! The Muse thanks you. :-)

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