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Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Ok ok ok first I have to laugh at the idea of Spike hiding with Dawn to talk in a band room and then I have to hug you for making this update so wonderful that I had to read it twice.

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

I was not expecting this and I have to say this is so much better then I ever pictured happening my hat is off to you and your story telling. I always love this story but I loved this chapter

Reviewer: nucular_thrall Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

See—” she gasped, grinding against him, rubbing his clothed erection with her hip. “I’m not asking you to be a human—I just want to you be—”
“What?”
“—mine.”
Ok I need a second cause that was just well seductive and hot.Ok maybe I need more then a moment

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Funny I wonder how Willow and Tara would feel if they found out Spike was now supporting them while they still crashed at Buffy's for free? How would Willow then justify her actions I wonder. I thought this was really good especilly with Buffy turning Giles down he's gonna have to come to terms with the fact Buffy isn't a kid anymore and she's not gonna be pushed around by him or the counsel.On another note Spike has to be the worlds sexiest step-dad on the planet!

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Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

So much packed into this page its hard to know where to start but I think my favorite part in this was when Spike and Buffy were arguing and him telling her he didnt want to ruin his chances of getting her back and then Buffy cutting hersellf and putting the scent of her blood into the air and then her calling him William. It was a teary eyed moment for me.

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Were you really so angry with me?” Buffy’s voice was rising, though not from rage. Her chest hurt and she could feel the threat of tears. She turned her back on him before adding, “They all looked like me. Did you really hate me so much for leaving?”

“I didn’t hate you!” he burst out, fumbling, eager to explain. “I—I hated them. I hated them because they were there—they were there and you—you weren’t. All I wanted was for you to be—”

This was a pivotal point for both of them I couln't imagine it put a better way. I think its cool your having them face each other on uncomfortable issues and not run from their problems it shows just how far they both have come.

Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

I'm glad Dawn is pointing a few things out to Buffy on why Spike should have to make so many changes because he fears of losing her or that it made Buffy think back to the blood on her pants incident and how if they are gonna be a couple they are both gonna have to change a little to be togther.





Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

I'm kinda worried what her friends and Giles will do now that she has decided not to play along I just don't trust this Willow not to do something evil or even Giles.

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Buffy's not a little girl anymore its about time they see that or at least William and then Spike saw it all along.

Excellent as always

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

LOL to Spike sneaking into school and then getting mistaken for Dawns dad and feeling offended and then he tried to lie about his age it just gave me the best giggle. Dawn hugging him was a small touching moment as well. I am really looking forward to what and how the Scoob's react to Buffy saying No thanks.

Please more

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

( Secrecy never being a strong suit with the group, they all knew about Giles’ visit with her and the ultimatum he had given. It was the favorite topic of conversation as they sat at the Magic Box’s reading table the following afternoon, and each of them had their own opinion about why Buffy would choose to abandon her relationship with Spike)

This is so smug even for them I hope she turns their whole world on their heads!!!

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Oh thank God a chapter! I was dying to see what would happen and you just made all the waiting worth the while I loved it! I'm always sneaking on my morning break for FTTP posts and this one just was so worth the waiting.
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Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Awwww Spike being sorta domestic and Dawn pointing out to Buffy the steps Spikes goes to to please her and how hard he does work to try to give her what she wants.

Reviewer: anabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

I have a question for you
if I were instead of buffy, one of the first questions that I had done to spike is why the hell he not me knowme the first time that he saw me?????
yes, I know that has happened over 100 years, but in more of 3 years, non Ring any bells?
he did not recognize any of its phrases of her that as much it liked to him? when she grew and acquired her body of woman, he did not recognize it?
comon! they are in hellmouth, everything are possible, even travel in the time
he is somebody extremely perseptivo, I understand that in the beginning he was confused, but he was 3 years to think the things, to see details... remember things... did he never doubt for a moment? she does not feel disturbed of not being recognized?

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

He is trying to take care of her and her sister and be the kinda man she needs him to be. Then he goes so far to hid it from her for the sake of her pride. It always cheesed me off that Dawn and Buffys dad just left them hanging. Thing is Giles the watchers her gang and the hellmouth all need her but just how much of all of them does she need?

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

This chap. is huge you almost need a knife and fork to cut into it. Both Suffy and Spike seem to be working on their relationship issues and it is going to be very interesting to see what Giles and the gang does when faced with Buffy coming into her own and making her own decisions on her life and home and lovers.

Reviewer: Guy of Gisborne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Hott ending! Yes Buffy! Shes the Slayer she does not have to be bullied by anyone!
Go Buffy for the win!

Reviewer: phantom reader Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

“Have you ever been in love?”

I loved this direct question from Spike to Dawn because love does make you do the crazy. I am really enjoying this great job.

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Yay! Buffy take a stand!

Reviewer: daw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

WAY 2 GO BUFFY!!!..lol...

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

haha yay go buffy:)

great update i cant wait for the next one:)... i hope you update again soon

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

i loved this! spike's foray into high school was awesome. funny that he'd be taken for her dad, and a reminder of how Not normal he is. his employment is still way sketchy. i'm afraid that'll bring future angst.
but i liked buffy and dawn's talk, and the sexy spuffy reunion.
the scoobies are going to wig! :D

Reviewer: Nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2008 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

My stomach was tied up in knots the entire chapter, but then the ending came and Yah Buffy! ;)

Reviewer: Jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2008 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

YES!!!!

WOOHOO! Go Buffy!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2008 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Five

Thank heavens...you really had me going there for awhile thinking that Buffy was going to be all pigheaded and refuse to believe that Spike really had changed and that she is totally, butt-crazy in love with him. Really, really happy with this chapter and yes, Dawn's father is hot!! :)~

Seriously, I am waiting on pins and needles to read about the Scoobies reaction to Buffy refusing help from the Council of Wankers.

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