Great story, look foward to more

O0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o and off she goes!!! Chapter's great! you did an awesome job of making up that whole new domension thing and everything...it sounds TONS more real then alot of other plots I've read...not too corny, but something you could definitely imagine happening on the show. I like the fact that you can tell that Spike was picked up in that alley (at least, that's what I'm assuming), it'll be great guilt bundle to add to Buffy ( i dont like s.6 Buffy all that much...can you tell) Your story makes sense, the plot lines dont skip around...keep on going!!!

I can't wait to read more of this fiction. It sounds like it will be an awakening for Buffy and that's exactly what she needs.

Keep up the good work,
Jace Nox

Hmm...The first chapter was actually quite intriguing! I'm excited to see what happens next! Please update asap! Great job so far!

woot! so far, amazingly good...i love the plot and how you started it out! I hope eventually Buffy gets all guilty about how she treated him and how she hurt him though...i hate it when people just toss that to the side and pretend it didnt happen...hint hint;) I'll be reading!!