Date: 01/16/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
Mmm secrets?
So it is strange that Buffy has no pictures of Jessica's dad. Was she not a loud to keep them?
But all in all they (Buffy and Jessica) seems to get along well. The difference in liking (makeup, jeans) is normal *g*
Then Jess' father died before she was born, leaving behind Jess and Buffy who had to struggle.
Oh yeah, and add an English teacher to the mix. I love your new story :)
Date: 01/16/2007 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
You've captured how hurtful teenagers can be without even trying. Jess was well detailed, so you've painted a picture here. Iaughed at William's reaction to her peers. this is already entertaining.
Date: 01/16/2007 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
So glad you two are writing another one.
Date: 01/16/2007 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter One - School Daze
hmmmmm.....intresting!! plyz write some mre
Date: 01/16/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter One - School Daze
more please
Date: 01/15/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
Interested.
Date: 01/15/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
good so far
Date: 01/15/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
Fantastic start! I love the premise, looks like Jessica is gonna be one interesting character. Can't wait to read more! :D
Date: 01/15/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter One - School Daze
It seems like there should be a lot of discipline for that girl. I can tell that she is going to cause a lot of problems. Ah, to be 16 again...lol! Those were the days, but she really shouldn't talk to her mother like that. I wonder who her father was. It's refreshing to see a new story from you ladies. I look forward to the updates on this one and I can't wait until Buffy and William meet. Also, it's Avril Lavigne, not Levine, but anyone could make that mistake...lol! I just happen to be a fan of hers and yes, I'm okay to admit that. Alrighty, I've probably annoyed you guys enough. Can't wait for more=)