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Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: † what dreams may come †

Oh this is great! I love how he not only misses Buffy but Dawnie too!

I also like how Buffy is taking some blame in what happened.

Please continue soon!

Author's Response: I always hated that part of season 7 with Joss. Spike and Dawn had such great character dynamic together, but hey, there goes Xander's big mouth, and then Dawn won't ever speak to Spike again, save to threaten him? I had a lot of hope for their relationship as brother/sister, but silly Joss claimed he knew what he was doing. The ponce. *sigh* And that's another thing Joss really failed to do -- address the fact that while Spike did attempt to rape Buffy, Buffy is the one who pushed him to do it by fucking magnificently with his poor head. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: † unforseen †

Spectacular beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: † unforseen †

I really love this so far! I like how you are seeing the situation from both sides of the coin.

Please continue soon!

Author's Response: *clears throat* Something else that Joss Whedon failed to do... Excuse me, I might be just a tad bit bitter toward a certain series creator. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 04:05 am Title: † unforseen †

great start to your rewrite - looking forward to reading the next chapters - Hope we won't have too long a wait.

Author's Response: Oh, no, not too long at all -- I'm trying to at least edit some bits of the chapters every night. So, all in all, I should be done revamping the chapters by, give or take, the beginning of February, and hopefully, by then, I'll also have Chapter 13, as yet untitled, finished as well. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Inara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 12:53 am Title: † unforseen †

Great start, looking forward to reading more...

Author's Response: Thank you!

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