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Reviewer: idk5743228 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 10:34 am Title: Labor Day

I've loved this story since its beginning and a really hated to see it end. I thought the birth scene was one of the funniest and yet, truest I've ever read. Thanks for a great ride. Can't wait to see what you might have in store for us after your rest. Also, thank you for the update on your friends "shadows" story. I am sorry she had such trouble and hope that she will be able to find a way to let us know how that story works out.

Author's Response: I hated to end it, I really did. But I figured the birth of their baby was the best way to end on a solid happy note. I'm so glad you enjoyed the whole ride, it had it's ups and downs for sure. It really does suck about Shadows and I hope she's able to write a summation once she's healed. Stupid red tape at her job and tight ass people, erghhh. Thanks so much for the lovely review sweets - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 09:58 am Title: Labor Day

I figured it was you all the way through, babe. :) Beautiful pic you chose, too. It was so obvious buffy was going to pop that day, with all the crazy nesting. :D

I'll miss these two, and you until you start posting again. Gosh, this story gave me a ton of laughs! LOL at Fred - what is it with women having amnesia about the birthing process once it's all over? You'd think we'd never ever want to do it again!

My last friend still in the Army is getting shipped out two months before the birth of his first child, to Baghdad. Great timing, huh?

Author's Response: LMFAO - ya caught me! I figure taking the best of both my RL experiences and writing it would make it seem more realistic. Oh God, the nesting - my house was never so clean. Indeed when woman see newborns it makes you forget what you had to go through. I just know for me there will be no more babies, 2 is enough for me, giggles. Oh that's terrible, your friend not being able to be there for the birth of his child. Please do send him my regards, that simply cannot be an easy pill to swallow. Thank you for the great review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 09:25 am Title: Labor Day

I absolutely loved this story and am sad to see it over. It'l will be one that I'll enjoy reading over and over.

Author's Response: WOW, it really floors me to hear you say you'll read it over again sometime. I'm simply thrilled to pieces you've enjoyed it that much... thank you sweety for making my day with your review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Labor Day

Spike is such a wimp.. passing out. I know I had a knee problem, the doctor used a big needle in some sort of procedure, hurt like hell. The nurse said... women took the pain no problem, most men fainted.

I had a section.. so didn't go through the pain of contractions. But your description was priceless.

Too bad about our author on Shadows. Thought something had happened when she didn't post this weekend. Shame. When is your husband returning?
Enjoyed.

Author's Response: LOL, yup, he really was a wimp when it came to the blood and needles. I figure he had such a strong character in every other arena that he needed an achilles heel so to speak. I never had a c-section, I had a normal vaginal delivery w/ both my little ones, but yeah, those contractions and the labor process... not fun. It is too bad about Shadows but it simply had to be for her job's sake. Hopefully she can write her summation as soon as her finger heals sufficiently. The hubby is getting back the second week of November, so it's just around the corner... thank God. THe kids and I miss him terribly so it will be great to have him back. Thank you so much for the wonderful review sweety. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 08:26 am Title: Labor Day

I loved it. I have been following this story since you started it and have laughed my ass off in so many chapters. You really made the characters come to life.
Would love to read another one like this.


Author's Response: YAY, squeeeee, it thrills me to know you've felt the characters come alive - they really are so much fun to write and of course humor is my fav genre, I simply can't help the natural funny bone I was born with. I actually do have another comedy planned and have a few chapters written (Murphy's Law), but I need some more time to develop it, round out my characters and flesh out the details of the fic. Hopefully in a month's time or so I'll have most of it half written and can begin posting. Thank you very much for the wonderful revew sweety, I really do appreciate it. Huggles.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 08:00 am Title: Labor Day

Owww, that was sooooo awesome. I just loved this story, and now I'm sad there'¡s no more :(

Thank you for sharing and thanks to the incredible Tamakin for sending me this way.

Author's Response: Thank her for me too sweety, I'm always so grateful for people recommending my work and then having the readers enjoy it - makes it all worth writing, *grins*. Glad you liked the end chappy and all it's comical little turns. I'm sad to have ended it but it's time for a much needed rest. Thank you so much for the lovely review darling, smooches to you.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 07:59 am Title: Labor Day

It's a sad day now that this has come to its conclusion but it was brilliant. I adore your writing, I loved reading this story and I laughed so much reading this final chapter. Been there, done it twice, but I don't remember mine being quite that amusing! Just to say take your time but I will be looking for your stories in the future because they are truly fab. xx

Author's Response: I am truly sad to have ended this fic, it's been sooooo much fun to write it should be illegal, giggles. YAY, I loved hearing that it had ou laughing - humor is my favorite thing as of late when I write. Ya know, funny enough, both of my deliveries were actually quite humorous, the second one, my daughter, is what this chapter was mostly based on. It was too funny the things that went on in that room and the doctor was absolutely a Lorne all the way. I'm so glad you liked the end chapter darling and thank you so much for the review. I'm looking very forward to sharing my new stories once the muse has had sufficient break and free reign to do as he pleases - keeps him happy and healthy, lol. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 07:21 am Title: Labor Day

Oh no it's finished what a beautiful ending though...Lets hope they all live very happily together for ever.... http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n55/spikesmrs/Smilies/4_1_10v1-1.gif
and http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n55/spikesmrs/Smilies/thImage37225.gif for keeping me entertained for months...

Hope you enjoy your hubbies home leave... Jeanette {Spikes Mrs}http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n55/spikesmrs/Smilies/12_1_2231.gif


Author's Response: Thanks, I'll definetly enjoy having the hubby around, a much needed welcome home. You are of course very welcome and thank you for such a lovely compliment and review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:43 am Title: Labor Day

This was a lovely story. I've enjoyed it from begining to end. Congratulations!

Author's Response: Thank you so much darling, I really appreciate it and of course thrilled you enjoyed the story. Hugs.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Labor Day

LoL, I once read that sperm helped stimulate labour, we used it in an rpg

And a boy? Noooo, they need girls to give Spike grief *lol*

Author's Response: Giggles, you can bet they'll have a girl at some point - I simply couldn't resist letting Spike have what he wanted and of course I'm a bit partial b/c I had a boy first as well. Sperm stimulating labor? Really? Wow, that's one I've never heard before. But of course I'm done having babies so I won't need to try that one, LMAO. Thank you for the great review sweety, huggles.

Reviewer: caegey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:29 am Title: Labor Day

I've been reading In the Army Now and Tailored Encounters for months and I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed them. They are definitely two of my favorite AU fics. I'm looking forward to reading what you've got planned next after your rest. You deserve it.

Author's Response: Awwwww, thank you sweety. I'm very pleased that you've enjoyed both fics so much, it makes writing them worth it to hear you say that. I'm excited about my new plot bunnies, but alas a break is in order so the muse can truly regenerate himself. THank you for such a lovely review. Smooches.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:27 am Title: Labor Day

wonderful, wonderful end to the story. Really enjoyed it. I've seen quite a few fathers hit the deck when the wife was delivering. my own tried it as well at the sight of the needle needed for the spinal so I laughed out loud at that bit. many many thanks for sharing

Author's Response: LMAO - father's hitting the deck is just too funny not to write - I had to. And God, shudders, those needles for the spine, they really are bloody huge and painful too. Thanks so much for the wonderful review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:21 am Title: Labor Day

Awwww. This was totally cute. And I mostly loved the part where Spike passed out and Xander didn´t know how to react and what do to, or better what he is allowed to do.
And they have a cute son. Everything both of them ever wanted.
I think Buffy can learn a lot of him and one thing he has to learn ... getting along with needles so both of them can have a lot of children.

And I loved the last one of TE. Sorry for not answering. But I think they are lovely and I think it was fantastic that her friends weren´t that bad to him. Wating for the next chapter, it doesn´t matter to me when this will be. But I can understand if real life is important. Sometimes it can be a real pain in the ass. ;)

Love you and hugyou tight. Smooch.

Author's Response: Giggles - I couldn't resist writing Spike as passing out considering his aversion to needles and blood. Xander was an after thought but I figured he could lend to the humor factor nicely. No worries over TE, I'm just glad to hear you had a chance to read it and enjoyed it sweety. But alas both TE and IAN are finished/completed and I can take a much needed sigh of relief and a break, wheww. Thanks for the review my dear friend, hugs and kisses right back at ya.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:12 am Title: Labor Day

This fic has truly been one of the most fantastic Spuffy fics I've ever read, right through from the beginning to the end. I'm actually so sad to see it end even though it had to happen eventually! I just love love love your writing style and fell in love with these versions of B & S easily. A great fic and I hope you enjoy your well deserved break!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you sweety, such lovely compliments I'm blushing ten shades of red here, giggles. You've really made my day. I'm glad you've enjoyed it all the way through, it's been soooo much fun to write, my most favorite fic to write thus far. THank you for such a wonderful review darling, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:07 am Title: Labor Day

aahh loved the story and thank you for fleshing out the end

Author's Response: You're welcome, I figured by ending it with a family it would bring an all around sense of closure. GLad you enjoyed it sweety and thanks for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: tina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 05:45 am Title: Labor Day

i loved this story it was amazazing thank u so much for writing it
luv ya

Author's Response: You are most welcome and thank you for the wonderful review... hugs and kisses darling.

Reviewer: spikeslilchit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 05:26 am Title: Labor Day

Awwwhhh, tear!......I don't know if I am crying because the story is over or from that unbelievable last chappie! I absolutely loved this story IBE!!!! You have such a talent for writing these 2 characters, no matter what setting! I can't wait to see what you do with them next!!! Congratulations on yet another wonderful story!!!! ~~~~Extremely big cyber hugs n kisses~~~~~~

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so very much darling for the character setting compliment. I do have a thing for trying the unusual, giggles. Sighs, I'm looking forward to my little break. I have so many plot bunnies with chapters and notes written for each that the muse needs some free reign to work on whatever he likes for a bit, jump from one to the other. I do hope you'll read whichever the little bugger chooses to post next and enjoy it as much as IAN. Thank you so much for the warm and lovely review darling, hugs and kisses right back at ya.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 04:58 am Title: Labor Day

OMFG THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER!! I LOVED THE ENDING!! i LOVED this story and am so happy that i read it. i loved the whole baby birth and that he passed out at part of it. im so glad that they ended up happy and had a family. thi fic was amazing, youre an incredible writer and THANK U so much for writing this fic, i really enjoyed reading it. i cant wait to read more of your work and take care

Author's Response: LMAO, glad you liked the update hon and Spike passing out - how could I resist with such a wimp for blood and needles, giggles. You've made me blush with your lovely compliments sweety, thank you so much for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 04:36 am Title: Labor Day

Aww! A perfect ending! I loved the whole story and this chapter made me laugh and smile throughout.

Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked the chapter sweety. I figured a humorous and touching ending was in order, a different kind of roller-coaster. Thank you so much for the wonderful review darling, smooches to you.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 04:34 am Title: Labor Day

how sweet is that! such a great ending to a very dramatizing yet funny experience. this reminds me of my child development class when the women starts "nesting" right before birth and goes all crazy with the cleaning because of excessive energy and that not so cool birthing video i had to watch o.o the child birth isnt that bad.its the "after birth" of the placenta now that is not cool. xD but i loved how you brought humor to the whole situation and although it scared the crap out of me for having children i truly enjoyed reading it. thank you for such a wonderfully well written story. :D aahh the miracles of army babies ;]

Author's Response: Giving birth is such an experience in itself that I defintely tried to make it as funny as possible. Hee hee - the hairy legs and dr.s comment was me when i had my second child. Oh yes, the nesting faze - my house benefitted greatly and of course the video, ughh. I have both my kid's birth filmed and I plan to use as a method of THEIR birth control when they hit puberty,,, i don't need to be a grandmother before my time, hahhahaha. I figure if they see what happens, they might be less likely to be careless. Ick! I agree the placenta was so not fun, but afterwards that's when i felt truly relieved. My hubby had the nerve to take a picture of it, ewwww! DOn't let te chapyy scare ya, giggles, it's a painful experience to be sure, but isn't too much to handle - at least with the right drugs, lol. I simply adore your review sweety, thank you so much. Kisses.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 04:26 am Title: Labor Day

I am reading this while waiting for my daughter who may be in labor to call me back with the news!

Author's Response: Oh WOW!!! How ironic! And of course congratulations sweety, I bet you're at the hospitol right now - I posted then went to bed and woke up to see this review. I hope everything goes smoothly for her and of course thank you so much for the lovely review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 03:43 am Title: Labor Day

Precious! I'm tired as hell right now, so just wanted to say I enjoyed this fic so much, and this chapter was adorable. :) I will be SO sad to see it over.

Author's Response: Awwww, I hope you got some much needed rest my friend. I'm of course super pleased you enjoyed the last chapter of the story, it saddens my heart to have to end it. Thank you for the review darling, smooches to you.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 03:25 am Title: Labor Day

Awww, honey, you know how much I've adored this story, right from the beginning when you started plotting it and I'm very sad to see it end. This chapter was perfect, brilliant , and everything in between. I had such and awesome time reading it, betaing it, discussing ti with you and helping you in any way I could. I definitely loved the ride and I'm looking forward to all those new stories you're promising to write. *smooches* Congratulations on a job well done!

Author's Response: It's been so much fun to write I hate to bury it and all your help with help with plotting and beta'ing... I could never thank you enough my friend, I really couldn't - smooches. Thanks for the congrats and review... I'm looking forward to having you help out on my juicy plots bunnies, giggles.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Out

First of all, I'm very, very sorry it took me so long to review. *blushes* Second, you already know how much I loved the chapter, but I don't think you'd mind me telling you again, would you? *giggles* I absolutely loved the proposal, Spike's cockiness shining through as he asked, completely sure of what the answer would be, I also loved the way Buffy finally told him of the baby and his reaction to it, and of course, last but not least, the hot, hot, HOT, flashback scene in the hotel.

ps. I TOLD YOU SO! *smooches*

Author's Response: No worries at all my friend - I know better than anyone how busy you are these days. LOL - I couldn't resist keeping Spike cocky until the end - luv that bad-boy edge. Thanks for all your help on this one sweety. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Out

Well it's not a secret. The daughter is there from the future so they know she gets pregnant eventually, just not sure if she is YET - have to get her tested, hehe

My pic? The penis statues? *blink*

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA - the penis statue. Oh oh oh ... speaking of pics - I need to email you soon. Got a plot bunny that although it wont be written for a bit - I would just love it if you had anything in mind/in your stash of lovlies. All I can say here - is it will be my solo attempt at writing vampire Spike/slayer Buffy. How very cool - they know she gets pregnant but won't know when, hee hee - evil author you! Love it hon - And I do look forward to finishing up TE & IAN so I can hunker down and just read for awhile as a break. You're on my list hon. Smooches to you my friend.

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