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Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter Out

"Thank you so much for the awesome review - you just made my week."

Aww you welcome! Glad I could make your week. Your smut and humor's certainly right up there with Nauti's so I'm not surprised that you have so many fans. ;)

"Yes, they enjoy rough sex and even harsh words, but it's all play and they do deeply love and respect one another. Spike is a man truly in love and he would protect Buffy with his life and never let any harm come to her."

Reading your responses to the reviews left for you, what you wrote here happened to stand out to me. That's basically how I see canon Spuffy. Well, it wasn't all "play", but towards the end of the show I do think they came pretty close to what you described. I know fantasy AU might be more fun but you must write some Post-Chosen/NFA Spuffy fic sometime. Please? *makes puppy dog face*

Author's Response: I need to do some heavy reading and re-reading as a break once i finish this and te. Nauti is on my long list of those reads too. I'm so out of touch with who is writing what these days because writing myself leaves so little time for enjoying other stories. I have other spuffy fics i'm working on currently, but none i'm ready to post yet until I have a sizeable handful of chapters ready and polished. So it will be nice to take my time with them and read for fun for a change. Many fans? Oh, I don't know about that - if it's true, I don't notice it, I'm so busy trying to get better, playing with my writing style, trying out other genres (in my side projects) to expand and see what I'm capable of). I suppose the one thing I try hardest to do is to write something unique from anything that's been done before, I loathe to reinvent the wheel. I had a few people ask me a long time ago if I'd consider writing a vampire fic. I honestly would but i'm not sure if i could come up with something that hasn't been done before... at least for spuffy. I have an original fiction i'm working on, a novel, size tale that'll take me at least a year to write, but aside from that, what sort of canon or even vamp spike with non-slayer buffy is there left out there? I wouldn't even know if whatever came to mind was original or not because I haven't read a ton of vampire fics like most folks. Sighs... maybe one day . For now, the next fic that will see TSR once its ready is entitled Murphy's Law... another comedy/mild angst type. I truly enjoy writing comedy and hopefully experiment with ever so slightly different characterizations of spike and buffy. Ahhhhh, see? I agree with you wholeheartedly. It is their canon relationship with the playful type of roughness, even if the lines were grey there for a bit. Well, if you do have any ideas on some vamp plots, feel free to email me hon. As i mentioned, its not that i don't want to, I'm just after that one unique idea that will stand apart. Thank you so much for all your kind words... hugs you tight, my friend.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Out

OMG, you gave us wrote the hotel scene after all! It was even better than I imagined it in my dirty little mind, too.

I thought it was wonderful that you had Spike propose before he found out that Buffy was pregnant. Even though I never doubted he would want to marry her either way, it just made it special to know he wanted to make that commitment as a totally separate thing. Especially since I'm sure a traditional guy like Spike would insist on being married when the baby came.

And I just knew Spike would be horrified at the thought that he was having all that nasty porno sex with the mother of his unborn child. Men are so predictable sometimes. ;-) The irony is, sometimes a pregnant is so horny, that's when she's *most* receptive to getting down and dirty!

I will be so sad to see you post the last chapter, but am glad to know you'll be giving us more goodies in the near future. You know what they say - it's the singer, not the song.

Author's Response: I did, after reading so many reviews and especially mag-rose's, I decided the hell with it, if people wanted it then who am I to deny them, giggles. See... I liked that idea too, a proposal before knowing he was to be a father - it made more sense and ran a bit deeper in the telling of their relationship, so I'm glad you appreciated that, thank you. Giggles - yup, one horrofied father to be for doing the nasty of nasty's with the mnother of his child, LMAO. Men... don't they know to take adavantage of the preggar hormones? Oh neat - never heard it put like that - its the singer not the song. How cool. And thank you for the lovely compliment - I greatly appreciate it and the review as well. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Shez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Out

Wow that was brilliant, I am really looking forward to the last chapter xxx

Author's Response: Glad to see you liked the chapter and thank you very much for the review darling. SMooches to you.

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Out

great job....only one more chapter????NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Author's Response: I know - but it has to see its conclusion, of course I won't let it go out without its fairshare of humor, *winks*. Thanks so much for the review hon. Hugs.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Out

Loved the updates!

Author's Response: GLad you enjoyed them sweety - thanks so much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter Out

Oh, and I was ROFLMAO with that pic and then Buffy trying to hide the evidence from her dad! What a hoot! I just love your humor! tootles!

Author's Response: Hee hee - you know me and my humor, I can't resist.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter Out

Stupid PC, half way through my review and it kicked me outta the review box and deleted what I'd typed! I'll try again.

I'd show you some love, but after that last chap, I don't think I have the strength. See, you did great on that "flashback." No fumbling for Spike (must be all those videos). Very hot (but then I would excpect nothing less from such talent!) Muse must be quivering with satisfaction. Listenting to all those people clamoring for a "hotel" scene and you and muse deliver.

I loved that Spike just kept asking her "be my wife" over and over until she said (or nodded) yes! Very sweet. She was so sure he'd never marry again after 2 failed attempts but I think the 3rd time is definetly going to be the charm for our fav Drill Sarg.

He was so cute when she told him he was gonna be a daddy. Very nicely done. And you answered my question, did Buffy know she was preggers, she did, and for quite some time (you sneaky little devil you).

Well, I'm gonna cut my ramble short this review cause the PC keeps doing strange things, everytime I type a "y" it kicks me to a different line in the review and start typing somewhere else. Real pain in the butt. I think it's cause (damnit, it just did it when I typed the s in cause) I was using a wireless keyboard with this PC and now I'm not so the for some reason the keypad is acting up! I hate when PCs start doing weird stuff!

Anyway, gotta go read BtSoE now. Sweet Baby Grandson is in bed and hubby's watching a psycho-killer dvd so I'll snuggle up with bit of a read and bowl of buttery popcorn.

Sorry there's only 1 chap of this to go but hey, I know you'll have something else up and going soon (wink wink nudge nudge). Did I say I was gonna stop rambling? Musta been wishful thinking.

No really, I must go. More hugs than you know what to do with. Can't wait for the last chap (but I will of course). Hugs to Muse and oh what the heck, just randomly hug everyone you know for me.

bye. really.

Author's Response: Oh God I hate that when keyboards go all wonky. Can you imagine how frustrated I'd be if it did that to me while I was writing? I'd be calling the geek squad in a heartbeat, lol. Glad you liked the propsal and of course - I was tickled you didn't realize Buffy knew she was preggars, hee hee. I'm not evil, just calculating sometimes. Oh I know you'll enjoy shadows... giggles - i wonder if you'll be thinking some of the things I was after reading a particualr part of it... concerning Lucian. Thanks for feeding my muse and hugging him so well my friend. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: Rouge Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Out

Yay!!! You wrote the hotel scene! *does a happy dance*

P.S. Damn, Spike is so bossy! Hope with Buffy's current condition and her moodiness she'll be whipping him around for some time now, making him reconsider definition of the "bloody animal", lol.


Author's Response: Hee hee hee - glad you liked the delicious naughtiness. Yup, Spike is always a bit bossy, but I think they balance each other out in the end.. giggles, especially now that she has the preggar-hormones going on. Thanks for the lovely review. Hugs and kisses to you sweety.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Out

I'm so glad you went back and wrote the hotel scene. That was hot! The engagement and her telling Spike she was pregnant was cute too.

Author's Response: Giggles - glad you liked it., and I'm glad I did change my mind. The proposal, or rather demand she be his wife I thought stayed in line with his character rather than get on bended knee. He's Spike, til the very end. Thanks so much for the great review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Out

Hon, you´re fantastic. And I hope I did a great job feeding your muse. *gg*
I loved the way he asked her to marry him. Lovely. And the picture. *looooool*
I don´t know what to say right now. But I love your story. I´m so happy that there will be some more chapters and I think that this whole army stuff is sometimes a little difficult, isn´t it?
hope we find a little time chatting again and a little longer than the last time.

Smoooch and hug you really tight.

Author's Response: Oh yes - myour feedin my muse nicely my friend, thank you, *hugs*. Giggles - I so loved that dusty car pic - it was too much for me to resist using it. Yup - one more chappy to go, complete with laughter and sweetness. I do hope to chat with you soon sweety. And oh yes - Army life is, hmmmm, can be trying at times. It's a job like any other, but with a whole different set of rules and conduct . Even when the uniform comes off at the end of the day, your still held under the scrutinizing eye of Uncle Sam... you just can't do whatever you'd like and think it's alright. The government owns you basically - big brother watching ALL the time. But it's something you get used to and just accept I suppose. THere's good that goes with what to some may seem the ridiculous or ludicrous. Even to this day, I tend to always walk on a sidewalk rather than cut across grass. It's that training they drill so hard into you, it lasts a lifetime - or brainwashing, LOL. Thanks so much for the review hon. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter Out

That picture! I laughed out loud at Buffy's embarrassed scrambling on the car hood, and you turned the comic coverup on a dime with the romantic proposal. How did I not see that one coming? That entire scene was emotional and charming, and throwing in Spike's canon "'m a BLOODY ANIMAL" was delightful.

I love how you're depicting the close relationship Spike and Buffy have with her parents. Spike asking Hank for her hand was in character and lovely.

The hotel sex scene was romantic and erotic. The way they take care of one another, in the bedroom and in life, gives me a warm buzz. Thanks for another extremely entertaining chapter.

Author's Response: YAY... so I accomplished taking you by surprise, that's awesome. I didn't want anyone to see it coming - that was my surprise I mentioned from last chapter. Naturally I couldn't resist the dusty car for humor or adding in Spike's egotistical `m a bloody animal line - it just seeme dso him for the moment they were having. Yes, I imagined in my mind when writing this that Buffy's parent's would just adore Spike. He's way better than Angel, takes care of their daughter, they can clearly see they are in love and well... Spike has charm. I'm pleased you enjoyed the the hotel scene. I couldn't picture it as something completly crude. Yes, they enjoy rough sex and even harsh words, but it's all play and they do deeply love and respect one another. Spike is a man truly in love and he would protect Buffy with his life and never let any harm come to her. I'm very glad you picked up on all that. Thank you for such a wonderful review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Out

her, you wawnt food for the muse? please, take the whole Chinese new year's group banquet.
i love your writing and your characterizations :) have loved following this story

Author's Response: Oooo, I like chinese, lol. I'm very pleased you like their characters in this fic - I realize it's a bit different than most spuffy stories. One more chapter to go, YAY. Thanks so much for the lovely review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Out

HOT update!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Out

ROTFLMAO!!! I do love your sense of humor... the pic of the car was hysterical! :D A big AWW... I'm so happy for Spike and Buffy, it's so great to see those two kids happy. The dialogue in this chapter was wonderful, I especially liked Buffy's line about being a Stay Puft Marshmallow Bride. Loved the flashback! Fantastic update!

Author's Response: YAY - I'm so twisted sometimes, but glad to see it got you laughing - and that you liked the hotel scene. Thank you very much for the lovely review darling, smoochies to oyu.

Reviewer: Ellashy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter Out

i dont know what i could say to explain the awesomeness of this chapter so hopefully its the thought that counts lol

Author's Response: Awww, you just said it perfectly sweety, you really did. Thanks so much. Hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Out

If you're looking for said two icons there, they aren't at her site (just checked). I've uploaded both (one still, one gif) to my lj scrapbook. Beep me if you want to have a look.

Author's Response: Oh cool. If you have the direct link, that would be great, or I'll just check out your lj to see it. Beeping you... lol.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Out

wow can i say that was hot, i think most of the readers would agree that was hotter than hot xD what an original yet sexy way of proposing im happy for them yay sexiness heehee maybe this will produce a sexy child? o.0 update soon sweets cant wait to find out what happens

Author's Response: Very cool - glad you enjoyed the hotel scene, it was different writing the normally know-all Spike experiencing something new. Giggles, I just couldn't see him, when proprosing, being all nervous. He's arragant, cocky, you name it, but that's his persona and what Buffy also fell in love with. One more chapter to go sweety and we'll also see the appearance of a new character on a very important day. Thanks so much for the lovely review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter Out

This was a wonderful fic, I'm so glad I read it...and, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now :)

Author's Response: That's alright sweety - I'm just glad you dropped me a line to say that you've been enjoying it... it's been so much fun to write and to hear everyone's reactions. Thank you so very much for the review, they really are food for the muse. Huggles.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Out

The titty faerie? LOL - So now I know who to murder for making mine too big - damn bitch, lol

And hehe, my mom Chaptered out because of me *bats eyes*

LoL - Surprised Tarzan Spike didn't have the same reaction in my fic to having gotten Buffy preggers... well, the kid showed up from the future but they don't know if she's preggers yet, so i still have some time, muahahaha

Author's Response: LOL - I actually took a lot of my husband's reactions - the titty fiary line - and added it into the fic. I died laughing when my hubby said it to me. A-HA. See, I chpatered out of the Army when I found out I was pregnant. My husband is the career soldier. Oh neat - so you have a secret p regnancy going on yourself. It's too much fun trying to plan out all the reactions, isn't it? Glad you liked the chapter my dear, and your other pic will be used in the final chapter, *winks*. THanks so much for the review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Out

LOVED THE CHAPTER!!! IM SO HAPPY THAT THEYRE GETTING MARRIED AND HE WAS SOO EXCITED ABOUT THE BABY!!! also the end of the chapter was VERY sexy, great job. i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that everythings coming together and that theyre getting married and starting a family. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see how it ends. THANX SO MUCH!!! U ROCK!!

Author's Response: Yup - happiness at every turn for our couple from now on... they deserve that much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter , darling... huggles.

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Out

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to find out what happens. I love all your stories so keep them coming!

Author's Response: You got it sweety and thanks for the compliment/review. Glad I could entertain you, this fic has been so much fuin to write. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter Out

loved the latest chapter! I can't wait to read the conclusion. This story is just so funny and totally sweet.

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so much sweetheart - I can't tell you how happy I am that you've enjoyed all the elemnts of the fic. Yup, one more chappy to go and I'll wrap it up on a happy note. Thanks so much for the grat reivew. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: terra Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 01:54 am Title: Welcome to Hell

I will step forward and also leave ya a much due review. LOL I have only been in the Spuffy world for a few weeks now. *ducks head AGAIN* I am a Bangel....but recently made my way here somehow or another and found myself reading summaries and then off to read some stories LOL. And here I am on the Spuffy Realm everyday looking for new stories to read.

I really enjoy reading your stories... have two of them on my favorite least and am starting to read your others now. I love the way that you write Spike all cocky, rude, and full of himself....not a love sick person. You are a very talented writer whom brings people in and keep us on the edge of our seat waiting for more.

This story to me is unique from anything I have every read and the fact that you have the background knowledge to make everything real just makes it that much more special.

I really hate to see this story end but all good things must come to end. And that means you will HOPEFULLY have time to write something else that we all can enjoy.

P.S. want to thank you for leading me over to read the story that you guest wrote for. VERY VERY good story!!!

Author's Response: That is just soooooooooooooo cool - you being new to the spuffy realm of reading. There's nothing wrong with being a Bangel fan... I was when I first started watching the series.... guess I just can't resist a bad boy though once Spike popped onto the screen. I really hope you enjoy yourself here at TSR - there are just so many great stories and authors to choose from and I'm very honored you've found my fic and are enjoying it sweety... very honored (hope you like my other works as well, just bear in mind they were also written in my early stages as an author - I'm constantly looking to improve as a writer). Hee hee, I LOVE a cocky/rude/full of himself Spike... guess it's my love of bad boys coming through. Very glad you didn't shy away from IAN, because it is so different, but then again I'm always looking to write something unique - a never before done type of fics because I prefer originality to re-inventing the wheel, call me crazy. And you're very welcome for the Shadows reference... she is truly a very talented author that I look up to as a role model. THanks you so very much for the wonderful review - I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it and that it has me smiling like crazy. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Out

And Holy Bejesus! 1017 reviews in all?!! Damn girl, how much food do you need? O-o I haven't seen a Spuffy writer's fic reach tthis level of popularity since Nautibitz. You should be proud.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAA, well, I suppose I look at it from chapter to chapter rather than as a whole. Wow, popular? Nautibitz? That's an honor to be mentioned within the same sentence, thank you darling, I'm blushing ten shades of red right now. Thank you so much for the awesome review - you just made my week.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Out

Sorry I've been slacking off on "feeding" you lately. LOL. Still loving this fic including the hot ass sex. *winks* Glad you changed your mind. I'm going to be so sad when the fic ends. On the bright I look forward to seeing what you come up with in your next fic. Any ideas yet? More snarky smutty Spuffy would definitely be of the good. =D

I'm going to be contrary and say I hope Spike gets to have his baby boy. Whenever there's a Spuffy baby predictably it always turns out to be a girl. But I think a boy would be a better fit for them. Unlike my girly girl self, Buffy doesn't seem the type who'd want a baby girl so she can dress her up like her own personal dolly and teach her how to cook and bake, you know? Tee hee.

Author's Response: I'm glad I changed my mind too - it was kinda fun writing that scene, lol. Oh yes. I have tons of ideas and plot bunnies in the works right now. When my muse doesn't want to cooperate on any current wips here at TSR, he's writing other fics that just aren't ready to post yet. (I intend to get them more than halfway written before posting anything) I have about 3 I'm working on, but the one to be on the look out for next (once TE and IAN are finished) is entitled Murphy's Law, another comedy/romance where you guessed it... whatever can go wrong does. And of course I'll be updating WDMC also - haven't forgot about that one. As for SPike getting his son, *winks*, you'll find out next chapter. My husband was like Spike, he was just convinced, becuase it was what he wanted, that he'd have a son first and then a daughter... damn guy got his way too, lol. I agree, I don't see Buffy playing to a baby girl, at least not in this fic, hee hee. Thanks so much for the truly wonderful review hon, hugs and kisses.

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