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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:14 pm Title: Questions and Answers

BTW: What are Hessians? I only get the reference to the German soldiers that fought in the American Revolutionary War (German mercenaries).
Ah that was a part of Joyce's story. So William took her back with her to Russia. Where she got hurt later but he did help her to escape again (when I read the first chapters correct).
I wonder what Buffy will decide now. :)
Xander is bad for her; he is indeed what Hank and Spike think of him.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:55 am Title: Unexpected Developments

Buffy is lusting after Xander (just ignore me for a moment: Eewwwwwwwwwwwwww. Yuck.)
Loved William coming to Buffy's rescue when Faith was hurting her. And the dance let to their first kiss; seems that both were surprised by it. And even better to see that Buffy didn't feel the same when she was kissing Xander after that.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Unexpected Help

Though I now some books about Stanislaski I don't know Lisa Kleypas'. Hehe.. the prince was called Angelovsky in her book *grins* And it has time travel... the original one. ~ Whatever you changed or are using from the original one, the summary sounds interesting :)
And I like the start. Joyce told Spike her opinion of his fool mood *g*. ~ And love that survived thousands of years the sounds like reincarnation ... But Joyce didn't see the face of the woman, huh? Little does she know but she noticed something off later.
William got Buffy a tiger? That's a big cat... ~ And at last Joyce saw that Buffy is meant to be with Spike. But she tries to put this to a stop before it starts. I wonder why...
I guess we'll get a little of Joyce's story (what Spike did to her) later. I guess that's "Midnight Angel" or? *on to the next chapter*

Reviewer: leelu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:32 am Title: Unexpected Developments

Great update...so we've started to connect some very important dots in this chapter obviously. Love the way you're putting the whole piece together over a foundation where it seems fated that Spike and Buffy end up joined somehow. Nicely done. And when are you going to kill Xander (and I'm not really joking here - the shrew in me says he MUST die for thinking he can use Buffy AND keep his mistress) LOL! More soon. Please?

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: Questions and Answers

I just all three chapters and i'm really loving the story so far! Great update! Can't wait to find out what happens next. :D

Reviewer: asha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

this is soo good! i love the storyline so far, very original. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:14 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

A historical fiction, yay! I love these, especially since they are so rare but usually very well written. This story seems to have the same good quality. At least the beginning is very promising.

A question concerning the Russian names. In the first chapter, there is a character called Illia. I've never heard this name before, so I'm curious - is this some kind of an English version of the name Ilja?

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

I luv historical romances and I love your story. I haven't heard of the original before and I will remedy that. In the meantime I Iook forward to enjoying your brilliant spuffy take on it. Please update soon.

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 04:53 am Title: Unexpected Developments

You're on a roll! :) I like stubborn Buffy and building UST. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks Brat! I am trying not to make Buffy extremely forward, but I don't want to make her a wall flower either. I figured stubborn was a good in between. Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: leelu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:18 am Title: Unexpected Developments

Wow another update! Thank you sooo much. Hmmm...so Spike's been waiting for his chance with Buffy for a while now huh? And it's never arrived before? How'd THAT happen? Oh and MAN what a switch - Buffy lovesick for Xander, LOL, whodda thunk it? But are his affections genuinely motivated by love or is there something else going on? Loved Spike's put down of Faith (where's she get off saying Buffy's not good enough for her brother) and am VERY interested to know whether Joyce is still of the opinion that Buffy and William should be not be encouraged to spend much time together. More soon please!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! :giggle: I had to put Xander and Buffy together. It just makes you want to root for Spuffy more!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:23 am Title: Unexpected Developments

great update :)

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:58 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

I'm enjoying your story so far.
On a side note, historically there could not be a LORD Robin Woods during this time. Although slavery had been abolished in England by this time, to be a Lord you had to be born to it. Robin would have either been born a slave or the very least his parents, therefore no Lordship.

Author's Response: I know, but I really like Robin so I put him in the story. I am glad that you are enjoying it! More soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:55 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

That was a quick update! And a very good chapter as well--I'm glad you went forward in time as much as you did...the last chapter gave some background and now we get to see them older :) (I do think you called Buffy 'Emily' once though)

Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: tan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

Gross....Xander and Buffy. That is so nasty.

keep up the good work. More spuffy please.

Author's Response: More Spuffy soon, I promise! Xander was really the only person that I could really see Buffy with. Angel is going to come into the story later, but not in a mean way. More Spuffy in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:11 pm Title: Unexpected Developments

A beautiful story I must say. I love the spirit in buffy and the forbidden love that buffy and spike are going to have.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Spike and Buffy will have a long and bumpy road ahead of them.. especially when her father finds out... :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Unexpected Help

wow, great start, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! More to come soon, I promise!

Reviewer: leelu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:10 pm Title: Unexpected Help

Ooo err I say - oh yeah, a BIG ooo err LOL. Really liking the period setting and the ever so feisty Joyce that you've created. Hank seems well devoted to her which makes a change from how he's often portrayed. Can't wait to find out what the dynamic between our leads will be like when Buffy is twenty (how old is William btw?) And will Manny still be around by then too? Here's hoping so (me loves me some tiger cubs). More soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think I am going to have Spike be about 28... The second chapter is almost done!

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:40 pm Title: Unexpected Help

oooooooooh me likes it me likes it. :) please update soon it was good

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have another chapter up soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Unexpected Help

That was a really good first chapter :) And I can see Buffy trying to keep a tiger in her closet ;) I hope that you'll be able to update this story soon...I really want to read more of it!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I had to giggle when I wrote about Buffy trying to keep Manny in her closet... so Buffy... LOL Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Just Another Reviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Unexpected Help

Great!!! Love the plot! And I like the way you lined up all the problems that they'll be having later in the story, without making it too obvious. It's giving people a really good idea of whats going to happen later on, without telling too much. I'll be reading!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was trying not too give too much away in the first chapter. Thanks for reading!

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