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Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

great chapter

Author's Response: thanks golddrake

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

Duh.. I meant dead not dad in my review. This just didn't make sense right now *gg*
Yes, you are; you updated now (forgiven).
Oh what a twist with Angelus' first soul he was cursed with! Didn't expect that; yet if gives the 'soulmates' a very new meaning.
Wow, and you're good for surprises indeed. There I was happy that William felt better already, things seemed to be a bit 'lighter' and another turn! If Dawn is stuck there... oh my, they'll better start now finding her.
And yes, loved the update :)

Author's Response: Thanks Cordykitten - and see i'm even responding while you're still online to try and make up for not thanking you last time. Glad you like twists - was waiting for reviewers to start shouting at me. Thanks for Friendy thing too. Now all I need is an LJ worth reading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter 7

Think of that: You'll be dad and still have to work for your old boss like mopping the floor? *shudder* Not good. Good is only that some of the other humans are still alive. And Liam is his old drunken self. A bit of a disappointment for Buffy but not as bad as if she would have been together with Angel. Looking forward to more.
PS: Added you. Then I'll see when you update your LJ.

Reviewer: wilywiccan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

I remember being so disgusted that Spike did it with Harmony when he got his body back. Ugh. After he had been with Buffy, after Buffy said those three magical words. Even if he was thinking of Buffy while he was doing it. I can't imagine being Buffy and walking in on that.

Author's Response: I agree. I can't really explain that bit of insanity either as you've probably gathered from my fic.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 7

I was wonderfing if ol' Liam was gonna turn up in the fic... his intoduction to Buffy certainly was memorable. :D Love your characterization of Liam, you did a great job of showing us just how sleezey he truly is. Spike's reaction to Angel and his plight was priceless... lol! Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Think I can have some fun with Liam if he ever sobers up. Couldn't have Buffy going all cow-eyed at her lost love and Spike seething with jealousy this time, they've got enough to deal with. thanks MidnightGirl.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 7

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 7

I love this story! I love the interactions between Slayer and Spike, they're so cute together.

Author's Response: They're cute in any universe. Thanks B

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7

That chapter was a riot!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and get my strange humour.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 6

I just found this story today and I'm really loving it. :D The interaction between the couples is fun. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you MidnightGirl it is delightful to get a new reviewer

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oooo, Spike is *fun*. I love that he tackled Slayer into a shower! And found clothes! who had that outfit around?

Wonder if people are kept out of the building, too - like Dawn and Fred are stuck outside trying to figure out what's going on? Think the phones work?

Author's Response: Glad you think the character of Spike is fun - he's sort of having fun in my head as I write. Good point about the phones - if I cover myself later then you know it's all down to you!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Funny that Demon kept the clothes, and Slayer popped out naked. And with the reverse for the "human" counterparts, the four are truly yin and yang.

I can believe that Buffy's feeling possessive and worried she'll lose William. And acting impulsively is very much a Buffy trait. She had to do something as clear as day, or they'd still be going round in circles and not getting anywhere, since William was just trying not to piss her off.

Wonder where Liam is stashed? And where have Wes, Gunn, and Lorne blockaded themselves? Oh, and is Harmony now dead?

Author's Response: Liam is coming up soon and its not a pretty sight. Thank you for your review it is very much appreciated

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 6

Nice morning after :) And I see Spike took care of the slayer even if she don't seem as if she was eager to take the bath or wearing clothes *g*
Now we'll have to wait and see how Buffy's plan will function. And if Angel can give some answers what happened; and what's the matter with the world outside (by example Dawn). ~ Looking forward to more :)
BTW: Will you use your LJ in the future? I was thinking of friending it but it is empty for now. And you need more icons *g*

Author's Response: Would love to Friend you - am a bit technologically challenged though - when I work out what I'm doing then I will try to make my LJ more interesting and maybe you will visit me then?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Mmmh the old Spike being two persons now to deal with is hard for Buffy to do now (I hope she'll do better when they are all back in their own bodies).
Wow, in a way she does because the slayer is part of Buffy. And this Slayer claimed her demon :) What make Buffy jealous. She forgot that she was jealous of herself! But maybe that will sink in later. ;-)
At last for now it lead to Buffy claiming her William.

Author's Response: Onward gentle reader!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

Somebody had sealed the building off? At last for Buffy and William it is. I didn't think that Spike's time being a vamp would pay off but it did, finding a place to hide.
Buffy will make her relationship work ... I hope she'll manage it. Mmm love possessive Buffy :) Two tongues? Oh Spike; if he found them, where is the slayer? *on to the next chapter*

Author's Response: Glad you're willing to go along with my fevered imagination. Only watched Angel the once so am taking great liberties as I go.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 11:33 am Title: chapter 3

Ah they got split? Not only Buffy and Spike, all hybrids are separated now? I hope Dawn being away is far enough not to be affected. *phew* Spike isn't taking sides with Angelus, he's on Buffy and William's side. And the slayer. Hopefully they can take Angelus down.

Author's Response: yes poor dawn - wouldn't it have been awful if she'd been in the building!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 11:18 am Title: chapter 2

Recharging the amulet? They (W&H, Knox) better don't get to know about Dawn's mystical powers...
Heh heh I'm sure Spike will enjoy the new clothes, good idea of Dawn.
Mmm make-up-fight? Something like that... they just started to have fun. I wonder what's with the light and who sighted "too late".

Author's Response: da dum da dum da dum

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

I saw you use the other name at the BSV; yesterday I saw your update and thought it was time to catch up with his story :)
Uh-huh... no wonder Buffy was pissed off. But at last she was in time before things got too far. If not for Lorne Buffy would have run again... stupid Spike, groveling is indeed in order now. Angel won't help them, more the contrary. (Dawn helpded too I see.)
Spike talked to her! And so far he isn't dust and his nose is well :)

Author's Response: Cordykitten - you are so sweet reviewing all my chapters. Am feeling all mellow and wanted now.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Slayer and Spike's demon being drawn to each other is really a great way of showing that Buffy and Spike really truly love each other. I loved the way you described their mating. Human-Buffy's possessive words in the end seemed a little too much, though. I didn't feel it was really logical. An exasperated tirade about the skanky Slayer or seducting William would've felt more real. Then again, maybe her actions were meant to be seductive? I felt it was more passionate and possessive and those are not the things I'd expect from Buffy's human side. But then again there hasn't been much time to get the whole picture of this character.

Wow, I guess my thoughts started flowing a bit too far. :) In short, loved it & expecting more!

Author's Response: Dear Ella I'm glad that you like the Slayer/Spike interaction and that you're enjoying it so far. Don't worry about putting all your thoughts down, they've actually been very helpful. I think that I did end that chapter a bit too quickly. I'll try to explain Buffy's mindset better in the next chapter.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 5

WOW, can you say that the Slayer wanted her man. Now what in the world does Buffy think she can do? Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my rather assertive Slayer, and Buffy? well she's in a bit of a spot now I agree. It will all be alright eventually I promise (can't stand miserable endings). Thanks for coming back to review. I may not be getting many responses but the ones I've had have more than made up for it.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, you did great for your fist smut and I am enjoying your first fic. The Slayer is some come of predator!

Author's Response: Shades of Beer Bad Buffy I know but the Slayer certainly isn't shy about getting her man. I'm glad people realised that If she'd wanted Spike dead she wouldn't have tugged him onto the floor first! Thank you Dee

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

You certainly needn't panic: I loved the chapter.

Buffy's rejection was heart-wrenching. Little details really got to me, for example Spike doing up her last button.

As regards Spike and the Slayer, well it was primal and passionate, just as it should be!

Author's Response: tis-kit you do my ego so much good when you review and quote little bits back to me. Thank you so much. I'm glad you caught Spike's feelings of rejection in such a short description. I wanted his actions to speak for him rather than put thoughts in his head. Please stick with my story, I'm writing this for you as much as for myself.

Reviewer: DizzyB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Just found this tonight and fell in love with it. I like your storyline. It's different...unique. Can't wait to see what you do next.

Author's Response: Thank you DizzyB, hope I can keep your interest. The story is an idea that wouldn't get out of my head even though I'm not a wild fan of Angel series 5 myself (although some individual episodes are brilliant).

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 4

Okay, you so have me and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am glad that Spike found them but to join in was funny. But where in the world is the 'slayer'????? I am just glad that at least the three of them have been able to make it together.

Author's Response: Oh yes the Slayer ... now I wonder where she could be? (gives evil chuckle).

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 4

Interesting story, looking forward to the next installment :D

Author's Response: Thanks MG hope you stick with it. Am trying to add a new chapter every weekend.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

You are indeed a terrible person!

Very enjoyable update with some wonerful lines. One of my particular favourites: "A sad little briefcase lay open to one side, spilling evil secrets and a Tupperware lunchbox." Cynical yet poignant, just as it should be.

As regards the end; as I say, terrible person.....


Author's Response: Thankyou tis-kit. Am especially glad you liked the tupperware lunchbox line

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