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Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

You are indeed a terrible person!

Very enjoyable update with some wonerful lines. One of my particular favourites: "A sad little briefcase lay open to one side, spilling evil secrets and a Tupperware lunchbox." Cynical yet poignant, just as it should be.

As regards the end; as I say, terrible person.....


Author's Response: Thank you I can't tell you what a pleasure it is to get reviews like this, especially as this is my first attempt at fanfiction. Actually my first attempt at any fiction since I left school, and that was a very long time ago. Without feedback I simply don't have a clue if anyone is enjoying my tale or not. Sorry for the tease at the end. Well ok I'm not that sorry!

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:05 am Title: chapter 3

What an inventive story line! Looking forward to the Key side of Dawn making an appearance. Since there was no human side to her before the Key, what's left when the Key is removed? Puzzles, puzzles... can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: Hello Joan and thankyou Yes you're right about Dawn ... and yet. All will be revealed eventually. My world, my rules (which loosely means that you may have to suspend your disbelief quite a lot). Hope you enjoy though.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:35 am Title: chapter 3

great start, can't wait to see how this gets fixed

Author's Response: Thanks daydreamer - you're not the only one! Hope I can live up to your expectations.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:45 am Title: chapter 3

That was a great chapter. Hybrids split in half? Very inventive.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Dee, am going to see just how many hybrids I can shove into the story before I'm done. Suggestions?

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: chapter 3

Love the story. I can't believe that they were all split. What in the world happened to the 'slayer' and where is Dawn. Love Spike and William sticking by Buffy. Angelous just never learned. He always had to go after the unattainable.

Author's Response: The Slayer will be back very soon, and Dawn? well you'll just have to wait and see. I've always believed that Spike's demon must have loved Buffy - otherwise why go through so much for her?

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:13 pm Title: chapter 3

Interesting development , very interesting , keep going i'm here waiting.

Author's Response: Hi Jo, my new best friend! You'll have to wait a few days for the next chapter, but I promise It'll be soon. It's hard without a Beta to know what's ok and what's not and if I miss closing any gaping holes in the plot then I'll have a hard time explaining myself to eagle eyed readers later.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:00 pm Title: chapter 3

I'm definitely enjoying your story thus far.

Walking in on Spike and Harmony was novel and brilliantly done. The comparitive maturity they have both shown thereafter is also refreshing.

As for the most recent developments: you most certainly have me intrigued. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Took ages to think of the best way for them to first meet and then I realised that I could use Spike's moment of lunacy with Harmony to get the ball rolling. Didn't want hearts and flowers from the off or lots of angst and does he/she really love me, at least not for long anyway. Hope I can sustain your interest with the rest of the story.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

YOU FIXED THE SPACING , GREAT I JUST FINISHED REREADING IT CAUSE I LIKE IT SO MUCH . YOUR STORY IS GOOD KIDDO NO NEED TO DRINK , ALTHOUGH I COULD HAVE ONE MYSELF,LOL, .I'LL BE CHECKING FOR UPDATES

Author's Response: Thanks Jo, promise to lay off the booze from now on (hides gin and tonic)

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Author's Response: Thanks Dee, I never knew what a kick it is to have someone read and respond. No wonder so many authors beg for reviews.

Reviewer: L Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

hmmm, like

Author's Response: Mmmm, Thankyou

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

well, she said that she was having problems with the spacing. I would be more interested to read if that gets fixed, i think it's a good idea.

Author's Response: Hi Sara, saved it as mac for word and pasted it again so all better now. Would appreciate it if you gave it another read

Reviewer: Gremlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I would like to give you a review but I couldnt read the story.
The wall of text kills the desire do read it.

So add some paragrafs, some spacing and so on. Cause if you dont have those things and simply have a wall of text your story will go unnoticed by many.

Author's Response: dear Gremlin please try again have fixed it now

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Boy does he have some groveling to do . It's a good story , write some more and i promise to read it and don't treat angel to nicely , i hate him.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo, you are my first ever reviewer - and thanks for even managing to read it in the first place. Will post more chapters soon - just need a stiff drink first.

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