[Report This]Date: 04/11/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Eight
Great chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 02:44 pm Title: Seven
This is a wonderful story! The writing is done well, the story
deveIopment isn't rushed, and the characters are true to form. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, Annona!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'm glad you think it isn't rushed, though I don't believe it will be a long fic. I just can't handle dragging things out forever and I think the point of this will become very--suddenly--in focus sooner rather than later. I really appreciate your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 03:16 am Title: Seven
Spike really had some good words for Xander
Author's Response: He really did, and thankfully Xander listened for once! Thanks for reading, kw.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: Seven
Can't wait to find out what happens next! Great chapter!
Author's Response: No waiting, I've updated! yeehah! It's so unlike me. I wonder if I'm getting my zing back?
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 05:07 pm Title: Seven
I just started reading this fic and I love it! It's really good, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm not going to argue with new readers, LOL. New one is up.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Seven
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Seven
Xander still has doubts and is ready to run.... magic won't heal that. Good that Xander noticed Willow's obsession with magic (to fix everything with magic) too.
Good advice from Spike to let the fear of "what might" not rule his decisions... it worked :)
Unexpected! The trio trying to kill Buffy off. Glad that their plan didn't function - for today :)
Author's Response: LOL, that Trio are a pain!! Glad you're reading CK!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 10:11 am Title: Seven
Oh I love it.
Author's Response: Yay! Lets hope I can help you stay that way, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 07:17 am Title: Seven
Great chapter.
Like the fact, that Spike and Xander seem to "understand" eachother for the first time!
Keep on wirting!
MOa from Germany
Author's Response: I always seem to go for a possible Xander/Spike friendship in my fics. It never starts out that way but it seems to progress so naturally! I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic, MOa.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 06:23 am Title: Seven
SQUEE!! Absolutely fabulous!! Loved Spike's speech and I'm really glad that Xander was witness to Willow's scariness---in regards to magic and Spike. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Hi Esther! I'm so glad you liked the speech. I really hate writing dialogue. I'm not confident about writing an American voice at all!! The whole scary-Willow thing is coming up!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Seven
They tried to blow her up? God, Warren is a demented little freak. The other two aren't that much better. I'm glad their stupid plan failed, I hope Buffy and Spike give the smackdown on their asses. I'm also glad Xander went through with the wedding. Spike should get major points for that. I still don't know what Willow's problem is. I thought she was over the use of magic at this point. Of course, I'm just thinking of the show. You could have changed that and I probably just missed it or something. Anyway, glad to see such a fast update after the last one. Can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: ROFL! They did! But what is important to note is, they screwed it up--like they are apt to do. Phew! Spike is definitely thinking he should get major points for keeping the wedding on track, but then his motive might be half the problem in the end.
I haven't quite sorted out what's going on with Willow either, but we'll get there. 'Seeing Red' is only two eps away and really, Willow didn't know what was going on with Buffy and Spike during ehr 'down time' so to speak. So who knows what a combination of her having to give up the thing that makes her feel important so she can get Tara back with Buffy taking up with a soulless Spike would have done to her. I'll likely have a Willow-centric chapter soon. I really don't write much Willow, pretty much because she's the character in the show I can't stand, but I'll try and keep it realistic. I'm already working on the next chapter so hopefully before the end of the weekend it will be up.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Six
Loved it! Can't wait til the next update!
Author's Response: Yay! Hoping you like the next one, which is actually up already. I'm hoping to work on the next one today so with luck by Sunday that one will be up as well!!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 08:04 pm Title: Six
Loved Spike playing the counselor for Xander (devil's advocate). Opened his eyes a bit, huh?
Good to read the update :)
Author's Response: Spike is the obvious choice as a counselor! Glad that you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 07:10 pm Title: Six
SQUEEE!!! A great Spike/Xander scene---love it!! Ya know, I really wish that this could've been explored on the show cause those two---after everything was talked about, etc---could've been good friends. Thanks for giving us this wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: ESTHER!!! {{HUGS}} Just a question, why were you worried you wouldn't get to read more of this fic? I admit I was feeling very doubtful I could continue it, but I'm definitely feeling better about its direction now. I really am hoping I can stay focused on it and finish it by the end of April. I'll have school holidays in that time frame, so lots of kids running around and being demanding, but it's good to have a goal, right? :D By now you'd know the next chapter is up, so I hope you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:01 pm Title: Six
Spike was good at that. He got Xander to see he needed to marry Anya,
Author's Response: I'm sure someone could have shown him--if he'd ever told anyone there was a problem. Thank you for reading and reviewing all the chapters!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: Five
Oh my Tara was right Willow is jealous of Buffy because she lost the power.
Author's Response: That seemed to make sense to me, that she atleast subconsciously objected to losing the power she'd been given while Buffy was gone.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: One
What better way that to show rather then tell.
Author's Response: There is no better way, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: Three
Oh so she had money for a dress, wonder what kind of dress.
Author's Response: It's nice that she's wanting to look good for him.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 12:47 pm Title: Six
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 11:07 am Title: Two
Oh this is good.
She has to ask what color, she should know red or black.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 07:07 am Title: Six
great story
Author's Response: Thank you, MOa.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Six
Aww, male bonding. Who would have thought that Spike would be the one to talk Xander into marrying Anya? I'm glad he did, though. I really hope they go through with it, that's something I wish would have happened on the show. Good chapter, can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: Spike does have relatively misguided motives, LOL. I never understood why the show split Anya and Xander up. In my mind, it really didn't serve any plot development. I guess they just didn't want to change the dynamic of the Scooby group.
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2007 - 03:37 am Title: Five
SQUEE!!! I was so afraid that I wasn't gonna be able to read this story anymore, but thank goodness I am!! I absolutely love this!! You've written the characters so realistically---and how I love the way you've characterized Tara and Buffy's relationship---that I'm just astounded by it all. I can easily picture all of this happening and only wish that it'd happened on the show. Fantastic, hon, and I'm soo very happy to read some more of your stories. I've really missed you!! Take care!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2007 - 12:47 am Title: Five
Wow, what a well written chapter, the Willow thing supprised me. Look foward to their talk.
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