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Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Prologue

Well - I am hooked and happy to be so - Wonderful writing - I only hope that many of the ff writers will read your work and learn.

So very glad to have found you - selfish little reader than I am, I sure hope that you have other works here so that I can gobble them up.

Reviewer: pfeifferpack Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: Prologue

Lovely start! Very visual and emotional as well. Off to continue reading.

Kathleen

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 08:16 pm Title: A Door in the Walls

If anyone doubts that Buffy and Spike should be together, they should be shown that every world has a Buffy who is with , was with or wants to be with Spike.

Great explanation of Slayers, vampires and the multiverse.

Author's Response: Thanks Tamara! Man I was really praying that people didn't start flaming me for this section... so glad they didn't. I had a tough time writing it.

Reviewer: Minerva Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 05:33 pm Title: A Door in the Walls

WOW!
This story is absolutely terrifying! I love what you're doing! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've tried to keep the horror elements to a minimum so far, but there's still some spooky stuff on the horizon for the gang. So glad you're into it!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: In the Land of the Blind...

Oh God, Andrew's " Take Me" will live forever in my brain! That was great.

Author's Response: Thanks Toni. Andrew's been a total gas to write. I always loved him on the show.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: A Door in the Walls

So they are killing of Buffys in alternate realities and Willow has gone completely off the reservation now. Sweet :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 03:05 pm Title: In the Land of the Blind...

LOL, gotta love Andrew......and with Spike in a black mask that has his voice deep and mechanical I'm surprised he didn't pass out when he asked him to take the mask off.

I just love the Star Wars references.

Author's Response: Thanks Spacelord! I'm relieved that moment worked for people. It's such a delicate pop reference - and one of the great fantasy movie scenes, I think.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: A Door in the Walls

I like this story but this last chapter has me completely stumped. Is she talking about calling all the Buffys from other time zones, I'm confused

Author's Response: Thanks, scary! Yeah, I was a little worried about this chapter... it's confusing on purpose, but what's happening at the end of it is critical to the story arc. Its also a kind of wink and nod to AU fiction in general, since I'm attempting canon, here. I promise things will begin making sense again very shortly .

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:19 pm Title: Prologue

I read half the first chapter and knew instantly that this was a keeper. Your syntax is brilliant - a shrill, savage din that rattled up from her blood like a swam of bees (be still, my heart! That's incredible) - and from what I've read the plot is intricate and extremely well-realized. I am printing it out now to savor at leisure and will be pimping it voraciously.

Author's Response: You're so kind to say that, k. Its really exciting to me that I've gotten such awarm response for my very first fic. I hope you check in to let me know how I'm doing.

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 07:25 am Title: In the Land of the Blind...

This is fantastic! I am so addicted, can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks evil - looking forward to you checking in and letting me know how I'm doing.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:34 am Title: Red Falcon

WhoHoo! Spike to the rescue. Poor Buffy. What in the blazes is going on here!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:27 am Title: In the Land of the Blind...

I'm definitely enjoying this so far. I love the suit idea for Spike. It's cool, it's practical, and it makes a handy secret-identity plot device.

And you're updating crazy fast. I love that.

Author's Response: Thanks, Penny. It's funny, but it's been rolling out of me pretty quickly. I'm actually up to chapter 11 at the moment, but I'm a little shy about posting the next few until I've polished them up a bit. And the next couple will be REALLY WEIRD so I really have to make sure I'm on my game. Thanks so much for reading it!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:13 am Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

Okay, this I did not see coming. Riley was the second phone call. Riley to the rescue? At least you made it fun. And mammajama! I have not heard that in a long time. Love Riley getting the drop on Giles. And what is up with slayers eyes glazing over? What in the HEdoublehockeysticks has Giles been up to???


Author's Response: Haha, thanks! It's funny; Riley was never one of my favorite characters on the show, but I thought I'd give him his due. It was fun trying to internalize him and come up with a believeable voice.

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 02:11 am Title: In the Land of the Blind...

Oh, this is bloody hilarious! I love the Star Wars references and Andrew is too funny for words. I wish there was more to read. Keep it coming.


And I can't wait for some Kennedy ass kicking!


Author's Response: There is more Andrew to come. Always thought was really a great character on the show. So glad you're feelin' it!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:21 am Title: What the...?

Very mysterious! Very interesting! Slayer assasins, slayer monster assasins. Creepy Giles.

I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:03 am Title: Trouble, Again

I noticed that not many were leaving reviews, and I decided that instead of saving my reviews until I read all that you had written since I had just discovered this fic I would review each chapter. This was very interesting plot development. The disintegration of the Scoobies is very real. I love how you made Willow maybe the cause of the hurricane Katrina. Very, very interesting. Also, what is going on with Giles? I look forward to finding out.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: In the Land of the Blind...

great story, love the involvement of Andrew. not enough stories with him in and you have written him so well, I can hear him saying the words about peanut butter sandwich, what a laff

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: In the Land of the Blind...

Just want to say how much I'm enjoying this fic... you've obviously put a lot into creating this world, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: Prologue

I have read the summary for this fic several times but did not go in to read. Boy, I had no idea what I was missing. This first chapter is so wonderfully poignent. I look forward to the rest of your story and since you had a great time writing it I can only assume I am going to have a great time reading it!

Author's Response: Thanks, Dee. It's gonna get a little twisted from here on out. Let me know how I'm doing from to time. It's my first fan fic, so be gentle (But not 'too' gentle) (-:

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Nicked

Wow, a lot going on! What's gotten into these slayers? Angel a Senior Partner? Things have sure changed. This is great - I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 10:03 pm Title: Touchdowns and Interceptions

well I have been enjoying this story but this last chapter left me cold. Didn't understand a word of it. You should have put subtitles with it for the only English speakers among us. I am guessing Giles has been kidnapped by Riley to somehow protect Buffy ???

Author's Response: That's true! Riley was the 2nd phone call., and has come to help BUffy. Sorry if the patter wasn't international enough!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 09:06 pm Title: Prologue

wow this chapter has had me riveted. I love the bit about he was supposd to be her punishment but ended up her gift. fantastic. more please

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Nicked

Dramatic and intriguing, without going to far over the readers' heads. I'm immensly enjoying this fic.

Reviewer: Nancy-Pancy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: Nicked

Angel is behind this? OK--you have to update soon and give us all the dirt! Exciting start--looks very promising.

Author's Response: You know, you really helped me, Nancy. Before you wrote me, I didn;t realize that a certain sentence was coming off that way. I actually revised "Red Falcon" now so it;s clearer. Angel informed Spike about the Slayer uprising, but he's not behind it.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: Nicked

Brilliant first few chapters. Really intense and interesting. This has big potential hope you can keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm rounding chapter 10 at the moment... just want to polish the next few up before I post them.

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