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Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:34 am Title: Eleven and Twelve

“I need to know if what I’m feeling for you is me or the claim.”

“Which do you want it to be, Buffy?”

Damn, thats some emotion going on there. Gotta wonder myself too. No girl should turn away that vampire. Just isn't right. And Riley is an oaf. Just throwing that in.

Author's Response: LOL He is an oaf. Which will become clear quite soon.

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Date: 03/04/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Eleven:
I'm glad that he claim still functions. This way Buffy knows how hurt Spike feels because Riley is back, she can't deny it. And I hope she did hear what Riley said, his opinion on vampires. I really hope she did hear.
At last she isn't fond that he's back.
Twelve:
Sweet, Spike checking out if Buffy was okay. 'The talk' well almost. Buffy still wants the claim to go away. In order to know if she feels what she feels because of that? Gives me a bit of hope for them. *sigh* That will be hard for Spike. Buffy doesn't show that she is hurt because of that so much like Spike does.

Author's Response: Glad you're still reading. :) Thanks for the regular comments.

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Aaah -- that was so sad. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Really enjoying reading this. Can't wait for your next update. Keep it coming please.

Author's Response: Another update in a little while.

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Date: 03/01/2007 - 03:46 am Title: Eleven and Twelve

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: "next" will go up this AM or tonight -depending on how long it takes me to get ready for work. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 - 01:45 am Title: Eleven and Twelve

Can we just dump Riley now? He's annoying and big and just...ugh. Plus Spike's much hotter and gives way better orgasms! :D (I sound like Anya)

Author's Response: LOL, Yes, you do sound like Anya. :) I'm sure Riley will be gone sooner or later...

Reviewer: pfeifferpack Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 - 01:41 am Title: Eleven and Twelve

“There’s something very wrong with doing experiments on sentient creatures, even if they are evil.”
 AMEN sister! I always thought the Initiative was the biggest of the big bad's on the show. It was humanity at its worst like the gulags/camps throughout history....horrifying because we SHOULD know better.

Rotten Riley planting nasty seeds! Sigh....well at least this Buffy has had a taste of steak before the hamburger started talkin there's hope *G*.

Excellent
Kathleen'





Author's Response: ROFL at "before the hamburger started talking" Thanks for reading, honey. And, yes, the Iniative was far from a benign organization, even if they hadn't been building Adam.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 11:48 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

As if a claim could *make* you feel......that's not it's purpose, Denial Girl!!

Author's Response: LOL That's our Buffy!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Awww...I hate when they seperate. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Tomorrow - Thanks for reading

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Great conversations with both guys

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

I love it,

Riley is back and trying to get Buffy to bring the relationship back to the way it was.

Why why is Spike leaving her, they love each other.

Author's Response: He's leaving so that she won't be tied to him by anything except her own desire to be there. Keep reading. You know they won't be able to stay apart very long...:)

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