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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2014 - 12:55 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Wonderful two part series - so glad that you chose to do a sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 11:21 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

That line of Angels', something like "I don't have a chip, just a soul same as yours" was perfectly stated and innocuous while also being ominous as hell.

I loved that Giles didn't just let his theory about Spike an his chip drop here like he did in the show. It always bothered me that he seemed to hold onto the anger after Spike dismissed him the first time. It was almost like he took his ball and went home after Spike didn't immediately grab ahold of hi olive branch.
I mean where was his watcherly patience.

The thing that i always dug about Buffy and Spike is that they seemed to understand each other (maybe at times they didnt want to but...) in a way that no one else got either of them.

While you made that understanding much more obvious than any ponit during the show, I feel like you still hit the more subtle nuances of that understanding.

It was a fun read, thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm quite fond of this little fic and get all excited when someone likes it. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2012 - 11:15 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Loved loved loved it. So glad I found it.


Author's Response: I'm glad you found it too. :) Thanks for telling me you liked it.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2012 - 05:12 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I love this so much - have read it several times. Love the friendship turned to lovers. Loved Lorne in this story. Love how they fight together as partners and equals. Wish Buffy had officially broken up with Riley sooner. Love Angel's line near the end to Riley that he doesn't have a chip; just a soul, same as his. Beautiful.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for telling me so. It's one of my favs, but it doesn't get much attention. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2011 - 07:21 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Great story, I like that Angel came to help.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2010 - 09:41 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

really really enjoyed, but felt there could be another chapter, possibly a bit in the future so i know how stuff works out for them! so good tho :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for telling me so. :)

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 12:22 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

wonderful story. i really enjoyed it

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you did.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 02:53 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Got what he wanted. A lovely ending. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Loved your story from the beginning to the end! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for saying so. I'm quite fond of this one myself, but it doesn't get much attention, so I've been afraid I was the only one who liked it. LOL

Reviewer: unknown Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 09:24 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I LOVED THIS STORY! OMG! It was perfect! And i liked the presquel as well, but this was much better!

Author's Response: Thank you - nothing like a bit of plot to make a story better! :)

Reviewer: kitty fluffakit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 01:17 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

but buffy hasnt said "i love you" to spike! how can it end?!

Author's Response: I think he pretty much has the picture - what with her accepting the claim...She'll say it eventually, I'm sure. Thanks for reading. ;)

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2007 - 12:39 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I love everything that you have written and this story was no exception. It was so entertaining and engaging from start to finish. You really know how to keep the right balance of angst and joy to keep the story interesting and compelling. I love your ability to speak so clearly and accurately in the voices of the various characters - you capture them flawlessly. My one critique would have been to ask what happened to Dawn, but you fixed that up with a reference toward the end. Please keep producing more stories. I am utterly gleeful at the prospect of reading more of your writing, but the stories are so good that often I would rather read one of your stories again then some of the new stuff I find.

Author's Response: Oh my goodness! What a wonderful thing to say! I'm so glad you are enjoying my stories. I hope you continue to do so. :) Thank you so much for your comments.

Reviewer: Goldm00n Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

OK so here I was at work looking for something to read and I ran across this story and the first one.... SHAMEFULLY I have to say I read them both without comment and now I am at the end and see you were discouraged because of what you thought was lack of interest... NOT NOT NOT!!!! OMG what a great story! BOTH of them! I love them both! I had a hard time WORKING because I wanted to read all day! I would LOVE to see a sequal to this!

GREAT JOB! I loved how you developed the story on both, very belieable and realistic I think!

THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. I definitely got the feeling that the lack of Spuffy was driving people away in droves. But I would have kept putting it up anyway - I'm contrary like that... I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 11:52 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

wow. so that's what happens when these two get together and claim each other huh? wow. now, not that i didn't love the story because god knows i did, i'm just wondering if you're gonna maybe add another part to this. i would love to see how it goes from here. i mean, when is buffy gonna tell spike she loves him? and how does it all work out? at least now, with spike in her life this way, she can actually go do college. and what about dawn? anyway, i was wondering is all. but i did love the story. both of them actually. keep it up.

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. No plans right now to continue it - although I had, at one time, started an epilogue or sequel. Got other irons in the fire right now, though.

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

What a wonderful story! I love how you include a mutual claim in lots of your fics. This fic, however, was particularly awesome. Three cheers for Riley bashing! I kinda wish he did get his balls cut off, but I guess you can't have everything. ;) Thanks again for another excellent story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Twenty-One:
I bet Riley is sorry now that he ever brought Spike there to torture him.
At last one good thing: The chip is out. :)
Twenty-Two:
Back at last. Buffy made Spike very happy, claiming him back.
Loved it (even more with Riley gone) :)

Author's Response: thanks, cordykiteen. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:48 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

THIS STORY AND IT'S PREQUEL WAS GREAT. I'VE READ EVERYONE OF YOUR STORIES AND THEY ARE ALL GREAT. YOUR ONE OF THE BEST SPUFFY WRITERS AROUND

Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a kind thing to say. :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Epilogue? Please? Filled with steamy goodness and more Spuffy love? ;)

GREAT story, I really enjoyed the ride.

Author's Response: LOL Thanks. I suppose that was original plan, but it doesn't seem to have gone anywhere and I have too much else to work on right now. Maybe someday....

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 01:49 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I realy Like this stor is great

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 09:33 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Really great read. Loved that Buffy claimed Spike back. Thank you so much for writing such an enjoyable story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I admit I read this story before. But I could not help it this is one of my favorite. It always brings me tears and joy. I love all your stories. Devoted fan.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! How kind of you to say so. I hope you still enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 04:38 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

This story was sweet with a side of humor and a taste of smut. What a wonderful combination. I really dislike a story with no comedic barb or sarcasim to it. Once again Reilys character flaws shined right though his stupid exterior. I think Buffy and Spikes relationship moved along at a great pace. It was almost too healthly. I really enjoyed reading this story. This is the first story I have ever followed chapter by chapter. I usually just wait until they are completed. But I really enjoyed the experience of reviewing chapter by chapter and so I think I will be reading more WIP.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments and for reading so faithfully. You are probably right, in terms of the relationship being too healthy. LOL Certainly not what we saw on the show. I'd like to think that some non-Scooby influenced time spent together, and Joyce's influence might have given them a bit of chance early-on.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 04:12 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Diana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:44 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Great story. I very much enjoyed reading it. Thanks for updating all the time and for sharing this with us.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:03 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Much goodness. Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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