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Date: 03/05/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

OK so here I was at work looking for something to read and I ran across this story and the first one.... SHAMEFULLY I have to say I read them both without comment and now I am at the end and see you were discouraged because of what you thought was lack of interest... NOT NOT NOT!!!! OMG what a great story! BOTH of them! I love them both! I had a hard time WORKING because I wanted to read all day! I would LOVE to see a sequal to this!

GREAT JOB! I loved how you developed the story on both, very belieable and realistic I think!

THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. I definitely got the feeling that the lack of Spuffy was driving people away in droves. But I would have kept putting it up anyway - I'm contrary like that... I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 11:52 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

wow. so that's what happens when these two get together and claim each other huh? wow. now, not that i didn't love the story because god knows i did, i'm just wondering if you're gonna maybe add another part to this. i would love to see how it goes from here. i mean, when is buffy gonna tell spike she loves him? and how does it all work out? at least now, with spike in her life this way, she can actually go do college. and what about dawn? anyway, i was wondering is all. but i did love the story. both of them actually. keep it up.

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. No plans right now to continue it - although I had, at one time, started an epilogue or sequel. Got other irons in the fire right now, though.

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

What a wonderful story! I love how you include a mutual claim in lots of your fics. This fic, however, was particularly awesome. Three cheers for Riley bashing! I kinda wish he did get his balls cut off, but I guess you can't have everything. ;) Thanks again for another excellent story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Twenty-One:
I bet Riley is sorry now that he ever brought Spike there to torture him.
At last one good thing: The chip is out. :)
Twenty-Two:
Back at last. Buffy made Spike very happy, claiming him back.
Loved it (even more with Riley gone) :)

Author's Response: thanks, cordykiteen. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Nineteen and Twenty

Ah that answers my question if you ever did a sequel for this one. If you ever write, I'll see it posted somewhere :)
Nineteen:
Oh things gone worse; Riley has Spike. :( And Buffy suffers through his pain; yeah, kinda hard to fight this way. Closing the link for now would be good.
Angel is coming too? He's a bit pissed *g*
Twenty:
Sadly clever, letting Spike bleed, taking the chip out and waiting for Buffy to stake Spike. But Riley is underestimating both Buffy and Spike. And now he is in trouble himself.


Author's Response: Oh yeah. Big trouble. He has no idea....:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Seventeen and Eighteen

Seventeen:
Ah.. the expensive furniture. I hope Riley won't destroy the lower part of the crypt this time.
I'm glad Buffy told Joyce what she feels for Spike now, not pretending it's a fling again.
Eighteen:
The scene in the cemetery with Riley always being the last one was fun. Seems as if he doesn't want to let go of Buffy even if she made it clear to him. Ah the real break up speech. Giles is right; Spike is even more in danger now.

Author's Response: Yes, he is. Riley's pretty pissed.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 10:07 pm Title: Fifteen and Sixteen

Fifteen:
Seems as if Xander talked too much; Anya just told like she always does. That would have been the opportunity to tell Riley the truth...
And again, Riley showed his colors, what he really thinks.
Sixteen:
Xander is right.. Spike should be careful. Especially now that Giles told that story.
Glad to see Buffy so worried about Spike. Maybe there's hope for her after all. (The scene in the sewers was fun.)
Didn't think Buffy was able to confess to Spike that she missed him; and the claim too.
;-) And good for them Buffy took a shower this morning.
Unexpected for Spike: Buffy wants him to claim her again, after they tried to let it fade away. Did Buffy then knows what she wanted to know: that she does love Spike not because of the claim. And no more Riley so yay :)
Indeed, this bite mark won't be so visible. ;-)

Author's Response: Yep, all claimed again. It's going to come in handy...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 09:06 pm Title: Thirteen and Fourteen

Thirteen:
Giles is more accepting of the fact that Spike did help Buffy than I thought. I hope Buffy saw now that Riley ísn't the man for her. :|
I hope Spike didn't feel it through the claim.
Fourteen:
If Spike decided to get drunk most of the time he'll need some money to do so *sigh* What he does for Buffy (letting the claim vanish).
Spike knows... he takes it rather well (maybe because Riley failed Buffy?) But I don't like Riley's calculating look. He is out for revenge and Spike is his target. The claim is gone? That's a relief when it comes to watch the woman you love with another man.
I'm sure Spike followed Buffy; not only because she had the feeling this was the case. Because I think Spike seeing Buffy with Riley again made him destroy the tombstones.

Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Eleven and Twelve

Eleven:
I'm glad that he claim still functions. This way Buffy knows how hurt Spike feels because Riley is back, she can't deny it. And I hope she did hear what Riley said, his opinion on vampires. I really hope she did hear.
At last she isn't fond that he's back.
Twelve:
Sweet, Spike checking out if Buffy was okay. 'The talk' well almost. Buffy still wants the claim to go away. In order to know if she feels what she feels because of that? Gives me a bit of hope for them. *sigh* That will be hard for Spike. Buffy doesn't show that she is hurt because of that so much like Spike does.

Author's Response: Glad you're still reading. :) Thanks for the regular comments.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 06:21 pm Title: Nine and Ten

Nine:
They are both going through the motion, huh? Buffy wasn't pleased when Spike told her that he isn't her friend. He's more, she has yet to acknowledge that. And at the end of the chapter it seemed as if they could work it out. But who was watching them? Riley?
Ten:
I'm glad that they decided to have their 'last night' after all. Buffy seems to be more acceptable of Spike now. But I forgot about the chip; I knew Spike still has it but I forget that he won't able to defend himself against Riley.
Uh-huh.. after some fun now back to business. There was a man sleeping on the kitchen counter? Mmmm I fear it will be Riley. That it is the same who watched them before.

Author's Response: Yep, it's Riley. Sigh.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 05:52 pm Title: Seven and Eight

Seven:
Sweet morning after :) Buffy even got a lesson what abilities a vampire had. I don't think she noticed how natural (homey?) her behavior was, heating blood for him and pouring juice for herself. She would have panicked again ;-)
They really got used to be together, share not only the slaying. Mmmh-hmmm it's coming to an end already; Joyce is coming back first.
Eight:
Ah.. Buffy is starting to see the truth too. Back "from Egypt", from denial. Yet she wants to go back where they were before. *cough Riley*
It came to Buffy's mind now too what it means. Even if she hasn't decided anything yet, Spike is already .. I'm not sure if devastated is too strong.
Oh my, Joyce knows. And Buffy managed it now, even if I'm not sure if she did it to save Spike from dusting, calling it only a fling that she has to hide. Now he's devastated.

Author's Response: You know it wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if she wasn't making him miserable...

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:48 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

THIS STORY AND IT'S PREQUEL WAS GREAT. I'VE READ EVERYONE OF YOUR STORIES AND THEY ARE ALL GREAT. YOUR ONE OF THE BEST SPUFFY WRITERS AROUND

Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a kind thing to say. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:43 pm Title: Five and Six

Five:
Bad luck for the demons that Spike and Buffy were so pissed off *gg* and that they enjoyed the fight. Looking good when doing it too, even Angel had to confess. Mmm and Spike will have to confess too: seems somebody has a secret.
Lol Spike was right to run; Angel's nose will tell him what has happened in that parking lot ;-)
Six:
Buffy knows now to tease Spike, huh (in the car)? Yet she is shy to tell what she wants.
And she is learning already *g*
Hot :) Spike was almost terrified... Buffy should know that Spike doesn't want the claim gone.
And now he's happy again, even purring :)

Author's Response: LOL - yep, he's pretty happy just now. Let's hope it can last for a while....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:45 pm Title: Three and Four

Three:
Buffy took her time to look her best, putting her trust in Spike and it was worth it. Spike in a suit? What a sight these two must have been this evening. Both are jealous :)
Buffy's answer was good (not Spike and the Slayer, Buffy and William). They took pictures too? I hope it will be Buffy who get them, not Riley.
And they dancing good together. Still makes them hot, huh? Spike knows his way around in L.A.; the place where they were dancing was nice (till Angel arrived). ;-)
Four:
Duh.. Angel tried to make a scene but Buffy told him her mind about that. *g*
Buffy sang the chorus with Spike? So at last both sang for him. And if Angel doesn't like what Lorne saw this can only be good then :-D

Author's Response: Yep, it isn't turning out to be all that bad a date, all things considered... thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Epilogue? Please? Filled with steamy goodness and more Spuffy love? ;)

GREAT story, I really enjoyed the ride.

Author's Response: LOL Thanks. I suppose that was original plan, but it doesn't seem to have gone anywhere and I have too much else to work on right now. Maybe someday....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:00 pm Title: One and Two

Trying to read this one now :) Though I don't think I'll be able to finish it today.
One:
Even if Buffy had a pleasant sleep her waking left her in panic. Not a good sign.
Nope.. Spike tried to be noble and did hide all his feelings... Buffy doesn't have a clue how sad he is about loosing her again.
Two:
*g* Loved Spike's remark about birth-control and Buffy translating it. The conversation between Buffy and Spike later? *sigh* She doesn't know what she means to him. And how it hurts Spike (like when Riley called). Good to see signs that Buffy isn't so fond of Riley

Author's Response: Thanks, cordykitten. No rush, you know. The story will still be here when you get time to read it.

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 01:49 pm Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I realy Like this stor is great

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 09:33 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Really great read. Loved that Buffy claimed Spike back. Thank you so much for writing such an enjoyable story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

I admit I read this story before. But I could not help it this is one of my favorite. It always brings me tears and joy. I love all your stories. Devoted fan.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! How kind of you to say so. I hope you still enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 05:57 am Title: Nineteen and Twenty

teheee! SO THERE RILEY! GET YOUR JUST DESSERTS YOU SICK COW-FACE FAT UGLY FREAKY GUY!!!! (haha it'd be nice to see buffy get in a few blows too, once angel's finished with him. unless he dies?) can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL Don't hold back. Tell us what you really think. :)

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 04:38 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

This story was sweet with a side of humor and a taste of smut. What a wonderful combination. I really dislike a story with no comedic barb or sarcasim to it. Once again Reilys character flaws shined right though his stupid exterior. I think Buffy and Spikes relationship moved along at a great pace. It was almost too healthly. I really enjoyed reading this story. This is the first story I have ever followed chapter by chapter. I usually just wait until they are completed. But I really enjoyed the experience of reviewing chapter by chapter and so I think I will be reading more WIP.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments and for reading so faithfully. You are probably right, in terms of the relationship being too healthy. LOL Certainly not what we saw on the show. I'd like to think that some non-Scooby influenced time spent together, and Joyce's influence might have given them a bit of chance early-on.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 04:12 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Diana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:44 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Great story. I very much enjoyed reading it. Thanks for updating all the time and for sharing this with us.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:03 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Much goodness. Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two

Great story, although I can't believe they let Riley walk after a second murder attempt

Author's Response: Yeah, they were probably a little too easy on him...thanks for reading.

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