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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2013 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

Still a good story, but there are a number of plot holes in this chapter:
1) Clem says he has never heard of Jansen, but at the end of chapter 10, Jansen's minion had talked to Clem about him when Clem was at his friend Aaron's apartment. Clem ran to the crypt in chapter
11 to tell Spike and Buffy.
2) Anya says that "no earth magic" affects Jansen, but then Willow, along with Tara and Anya, are able to use earth magic against him. Would have been better to say that he is *nearly* impervious to earth magic rather than entirely unaffected. I get that you're showing that Willow has become stronger than even Anya could predict, but then that should be made clear before Willow succeeds... either Anya, Tara or Willow should explain that what they're doing (or what they just did) will make them able to override Jansen's protection from earth magic, or that they're using Salano magic or something.
3) Clem shouldn't be the one telling Xander how much Giles hates Spike... Clem wasn't even at the Magic Box, Xander knows better than Clem does at this point in the story.

Other than those little things, the story is really good... glad Jansen's dead.

Reviewer: Susy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG!!!!

I don’t even know what to say. But I’ll gonna start with a huge OBRIGADA.!!!!!!

It’s incredible how you can always make us love Joyce and Clem, and even Xander with his redemption. But I’m still a little worried about Willow…

Now, about Spike… oh…poor baby. And Buffy watching his torture, it really broke my heart. I just hope you’ll reward our guts (of reading it) with the last chapter ;)

Oh, and I’m really HATING Giles!!!

Once again, my dear, thank you sooooo much.


Author's Response: It's I who should thank you honey. Your e-mail made me pull my finger out and get this chapter done - the fans of this fic should thank you. The next chapter I hope will be the last, but the plot bunny might just take over - I hope to get the chapter up at the weekend, but we shall see

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 14

I'm still reading :)
It's good to see them so happy in these difficult times. At last they have themselves (and Buffy's family). Wanting to survive is a good first step (because if you have given up hope when you're starting a fight... that's bad and will possible kill you anyway). They will have difficulties enough fighting an army.
Dawn isn't answering her cell phone? ThAt had me worried too.
I'm glad Joyce convinced Willow and Tara to help. Anya was an unexpected bonus (wanting to help to). Didn't expect Xander to help again. So it's only Giles that won't help, stupid watcher.
Ack.. too late, Buffy and Spike are caught. But names have powers. And giving his name to them was his downfall. But only thanks to Anya because she knew who Jansen of Salano was. :)
Awe :) But with the help of the Scoobies they won! Good ending of that chapter.
Looking forward to the next one (the last one if I understand correctly?) and what's the what about Giles (the truth behind Spike killing his father).

Author's Response: hello CK, how are you sweetie. The next chapter will be the last, and I will answer all the questions then. We also have to make sure that Willow doesn't stay on the dark side of magic too....

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 14

Great to seee you back and I loved the update. Really hated Giles for the way he was treating Bufffy, he's supposed to love her and he'd see her die rather than be happy, what ever his reasons!!!
Good for Joyce, and I love the way Xander came round and saw Giles for what he was.
looking forward to the next bit


Author's Response: Hello pet. I just my backside into gear last night and wrote this chapter. It was dedicated to a friend called Carla, who just kept on at me to get this updated. Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 14

Thank god for the Scoobies! They pulled through!! I like it when they pull through. Giles is an idiot though. Though I do realize he thinks Spike killed his father, he shouldn't have sacrificed Buffy's feelings or possible her life because of that. Hopefully that really is the end of Jansen.

Author's Response: hello my sweet. They all rallied in the end, but we have some loose ends to sort out now. Will Giles get the real answers to his questions, and will Tara and Buffy be able to bring Willow back from the brink - watch out for an update soon - I promise

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter 14

Yaay Gilly you updated , and what a great chapter it was , is Giles under some spell or just an asshole? Loved the way the scoobies came to the rescue , especially Willow . Do you think you can have Joyce beat up Giles? I would love to see that. I emailed you about chapter 9 and 12 or was that 9 and 11, re: a certain sexual act being declined, I don't know if you got it or maybe I read wrong, But I don't think so anyway , i'm so glad their both ok. Now lets put a hurting on asshole Giles.

Author's Response: Hi honey, I got your e-mail, did you not get my reply???? You were so right, but it is up there now so no point in changing it now. I will email you again right now - if you dont get it, then contact me again through the site. Love ya babes.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 14

OMFG I CAN BELIEVE THAT HE TORTURED SPIKE!!! THANK GOD THAT THEY GOT TO THEM IN TIME!!! im so HAPPY that u updated and i LOVE this story so muc. im so glad that they decided to help spike and buffy and i cant believe that giles didnt try to help and wanted spke to die so horibly. also im so glad that things worked out andthat buffy got to kill that bastard. i hope now that they can finally be together without any trouble and giles leaves them alone. also i hope that everything works out well and that theyre happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CNAT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Hi Sarah, please accept my apologies for not updating before now, and I hope this chapter made up for it. Soon it will be just the two of them - I promise - but we might need to fix Willow first......

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 14

Was hoping you would finally return. Missed this Fic.

Enjoying.. and obviously not the end ..waiting for more

Author's Response: Oh Pam, I am so sorry it has taken as long as it has. I did try and write, but for some reason the muse just upped and took a holiday. I promise not to leave it as long next time - at least I will try not to.

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