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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 02:59 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…

Oh my...Angelus strikes again it seems. Update soon please! I'd really like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: lol i swear i had to laugh when i first read that and i really dont know why but yup yup...we wont focus on him all too much in the begining just a little guest appearance here and there...seriously im just happy to be portraying him as angelus and not angel omg angel is always whining or feeling sorry for himself but ya know if ya like him am sowwies ^^ stay tuned

Reviewer: Susie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 02:33 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…

Fabulous beginning! This shows some awesome potential for a great story. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanx you rock your just to kind I thought it was horrible not enough description to short ugh then again im really critical with my own writing thank you again!

Reviewer: Peroxide_dreams Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 02:15 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…

Great start! I am anxious to read more!

Author's Response: Thanx for you suport i really was expecting some major flames Im hoping to get the second chapter up by monday the latest im going for kidnapping scene but who knows stay tuned in ^^

Reviewer: Marguerita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 01:19 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…

Hi BrokenHearted24,
An interesting premise, haven't really seen a plot like this before I don't think. If I read the summary right it seems Spike will be kidnapping Buffy soon...should be interesting lol. Great writing for a first fic, good on you for beginning.

Do you have a beta? If not you could ask for one on your next chapter, I'm sure someone will respond, and they'll be able to fix up some stuff, like capital letters, speech marks etc... and just make it really polished.

Great fic, hope you update soon

Marg xx

Author's Response: nope I probably do need a beta though cause if i know one thing about me its that im horrible with all though technical grammer issues. first i wanna work on getting this stupid thing to space for me then there will be some spuffy kidnapping action probably next chapter...and boy can i say spikes in for a major shocker when he takes a look at hot and young buffy summers ^^ thanx for the review i hope you keep reading buh biiz

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 01:12 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…

great story so far, you're very good with the descriptions of everything, makes it really easy to picture where they are/what they're doing etc...

one thing - it would be great if you could space out the paragraphs a bit, it would just make it heaps easier to read. (not trying to be harsh at all so please don't take this as a criticism)

really liking where this is going, hope to see more soon! : )

Author's Response: yeah Im trying to figure out how to if you could give me a little hint towards it i would love you forever it seems to hate me very much though so i havent been able to it was originally written with space marks and thanx i didnt expect to get such great reviews really so early on and yeah I always feel that describing the scenery sets some kind of a mood thanx so very much

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