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Reviewer: Caro Mio Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 08:45 am Title: Slipping Away

I don't think he'll kill her, unless you're going to really surprise us.

Don't feel all that sorry for Riley, really.......If it had been against a human, I'd say he should get a trial and end up in jail, but that isn't the case, here, so *someone* has to administer punishment.

Author's Response: You know I can't answer yes or no... bad Caro, lol. A few (well, two) people did feel bad for Riley, and opted to stop reading this fic... But I couldn't not allow vengeance- I'd have to be insane to just let it go. Thanks for the support :D

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Slipping Away

Really dark, hope he doesn't kill Buffy.

Author's Response: Can't answer, but thanks for the review, and I'll try to update soon :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Let My Savage In

Thought it was a dream, it was too quick, them falling in the arms of the other, and then the little boy.
Good that Harmony was there in time. I hope Buffy will be there soon too even if Harmony took care of Riley.

Author's Response: Oh, I've got big plans... Thanks for reviewing ;)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 03:00 pm Title: Let My Savage In

Love this story so far. Poor Spike, very heartbreaking. I wouldn't blame him for killing Riley or letting them kill Riley, but I think the guilt would eventually do him in. Looking forward to more. Please post soon.

Author's Response: Well, I haven't gotten to that part, so I can't answer either way, but I hope you like how it turns out. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 09:47 am Title: Let My Savage In

So that was a strange dream wonder what it means. Thank you for Harmony but I hope she doesn't let him kill Riley and Buffy gets there in time, I also hope he doesn't go back with Harmony.

MOre please love it.

Author's Response: Well, the update kinda clears it up, though I'm not dead yet- not nearly ;) And Harmony... still can't say, can't spoil you. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Let My Savage In

Well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing- hope you like the rest ;)

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 04:17 am Title: Let My Savage In

I just found this story and it's great. I'm actually sort of liking Harmony in this fic, to the point where I hope she isn't too hurt when Spike and Buffy finally get together, if/when they do. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm getting a lot of that- the whole "liking Harmony" bit ;) Thanks for reviewing, and hope to see you next chapter.

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 - 05:33 am Title: Guiding the Blade

More good stuff, keep it up. Fucking Riley.

Author's Response: Thank you, Monsieur. Oh, Riley will get his...

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 - 05:13 am Title: The Virus of Life

Great chapter, I just re-found the story. American History X is an amazing movie, glad to see you've found it.

Author's Response: Yes, I've seen that years ago, and loved that film the first time around. Thank you :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: Guiding the Blade

I wonder how Riley would have reacted when facing Joyce instead of Dawn; I don't think he could have scared her. Harmony got help? Won't hurt... maybe Spike will cross their path and let Riley to them. It was better that he'd run; the chip isn't out yet.

Author's Response: Interesting take- the Joyce v. Riley thing. Hmm... it's not too late. And our Spike will be okay- I'm sure I've tortured him enough- for now... Thank you :D

Reviewer: mitte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: Guiding the Blade

hey - just started reading your fic. I think it's dark, angsty and at times terrifying. in one sentence: I LOVE IT!!!!
Riley chilles me to the bones(that man is sick) and I love that Spike has people he can trust who support him.
Do think you should put up what the story is about on the main page that way you might get more readers - I almost skipped it bacause I couldn't see what it was about

Author's Response: Lol, thank you mitte :D You're aboslutely right- I don't know what I was thinking, and will fix it straight away. Thanks again.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 11:08 am Title: Guiding the Blade

nononono!! not again! pls, i don't think my heart could stand it! :(

yeah, def better a coward than a victim. even if, given the circumstances, the only coward around here is riley...

PS anya is just awesome!

Author's Response: Well, I didn't say what would or wouldn't happen... Have faith in me, please :D Lol, thanks- I try to get Anya right.

Reviewer: lacammi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 04:35 am Title: Guiding the Blade

damn your fic creeps me out
but i like alot actually
please update soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it- and no worries, it creeped me out to write it. Thanks :D

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 03:59 am Title: Guiding the Blade

Looks like Harm is "damage bound," and has enlisted Chris for a little revenge! Ye-haw, better saddle up that cowboy!

How sad that Spike is having to run to prevent being a victim again. Seems like his rep and ego are taking a hell of a beating.

I adore this story, in case I havent told you lately, so please, please, pretty please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Yes, I know... I've never tortured Spike like this, but I swear to remedy it all... Thank you for reviewing ever so much :D and sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 01:42 am Title: Guiding the Blade

Poor boy, they'll have to fix this some how. I have been enjoying the whole story, darkness and all and thought you'd like to know. Looking forward to more. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know. And I will fix it, I assure you :D

Reviewer: ochit_duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Guiding the Blade

Well the end part certainly made me laugh! Better to be a coward than a victim! I totally agree! But before i read that i was totally nervous that Spike is going back to his crypt again just when Riley is going there, too!

I hope Harmony will be able to catch up with them! Let Riley feel exactly the same way and more than what he did to Spike. I*m sure Harm will make sure of that! If i were her i will cut his balls, too!

Author's Response: Nah, Spike wouldn't go to his crypt- not that it matters.... Thank you so much for reviewing :D

Reviewer: penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 11:59 pm Title: Guiding the Blade

poor spike. more please.

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait, and it'll get better, I swear. Thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 11:44 pm Title: Guiding the Blade

Oh I love it, more please.
I hope he makes it back to Giles safely


Author's Response: Sorry for the wait. ANd thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 08:04 pm Title: Duality

What Riley started with Spike is continuing. It started (well not really small with Spike but he didn't kill him) but Riley starting to like the feeling? It scares me what he'll do net. He lost his scruples. *shudders* He enjoyed what he did to Dawn.
Sorry, but I really hope Harmony will met Riley before he can attack Spike again.

Author's Response: Well, only chapter updates will tell you that :) And, Riley (in my humble opinion), wouldn't hurt Dawn, or any human. I don't think he would even harm a dog. But demons, well, he just doesn't give a damn about them, and becomes morally bankrupt. Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Duality

I love this story, and just read chapters 4 & 5. Wonderful stuff. I can't believe I'm going to say this, but, woo-hoo for Harmony! ;) More soon, please. I'm really digging the Spuffy drunken bonding.

Author's Response: No worries- you're not alone on liking Harmony in this fic, lol. Thank you so much for reviewing :D

Reviewer: OCHIT DUZON Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 12:13 am Title: Duality

This story really got me so intrigued. The suspense ids killing me! Will you be so kind and update sooner!

Author's Response: I'm sorry- RL is hijacking my time for updating fics, but I'll try to be better at it. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: nightshift Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Duality

Now *that* would be the ultimate in revenge--neither Spike nor Buffy having to do anything because Harmony destroyed Riley.

Author's Response: Oh, Harmony will have her time, I assure you... Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Duality

go harmony. go to some damage to riley.

dawn has a crush on spike. hehe...... more please.

Author's Response: Harmony has a plan... Of course she does- who doesn't? Lol. Of course, not everyone... But thank you for revieiwng :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: Duality

sorry I just reviewed this a bloodshed forgot what board I started it on, I love it, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Lol, no problem. Thanks for reviewing- either board, it's all good :D

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 02:43 pm Title: The Virus of Life

uhmm... now you are making me partial to harmony too? not sure i like that! lol

jk, you know. this is quite an interesting thought. while spike and buffy's tentative friendship blossoms, harmony keeps riley prisoner in a cave, and tortures him till his last drop of blood... ;P

just one thing... i'm not sure giles would have told joyce the truth. he owed it to buffy, cuz the big shit was her boyfriend and she needed to know for her own sake. but spike needs a little privacy on that 'detail', and buffy's explanation to her mother should have been enough.
clearly, this is just a personal opinion and since i dunno where are u going with your fic, maybe you did just what fit better in your story...

PS i just added this to my fave, cuz i relly love it! :D

Author's Response: Interesting, but I kind of had some of this plotted out... I'll most certainly keep it in mind though ;) And Giles, well, given their history, and other things that will come up in this fic... I needed Joyce to know that "normal" isn't always healthy (or at least, what is perceived as normal). Thank you ever so much for reviewing :D

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