That was the most disgusting thing I have ever read being done to Spike. How long will this go on? I´think I better sit this one story out, it´s simply too disturbing, and frankly, I have no idea what you´re trying to do, and where you´re going with this, because so far there has been no plot at all, only different torture scenarios. Very weird.

Author's Response: actually, this is the only scene of torture the story's had so far, so i really dont get the whole "only different torture scenarios" comment.... the plot so far is simple...after the battle spike is captured by the demon general and made a slave, and as described in the story summary, it will be about how he escapes and eventually (through a lot of hardships) makes his way back to Buffy.... also, i just stated in the author's note that this is the worst of it, this chapter, and after this point things start to get better for him, and that's as close as i'll come to detailing whats to come with the story, but it seems to me it makes it pretty clear it won't be going on much longer -- if at all.... see, i don't know...it's hard for me to understand why some people don't know by now what to expect from my fics....darkness, disturbing subject matter...all pretty much a given with my stuff...i'm sorry if it's not something you care for, but it's your choice to read or not.... thanx for your review, i appreciate your opinion, even if i don't completely understand it *sigh*

God what are you going to have happen to him now?
I don't know if I can handle i'm sorry your a great writer and i've enjoyed reading fics like lying eyes , belongong and because he needs me but this Siron character is to mean for words . I may have to skip some chapters until he either escapes or is recued.

Please don't let this happen to him, let Buffy save him before it does , please . I know you like to hurt and degrade Spike , but just this once , save him.

Oh goody, more torture for Spike. Maybe we need a new category of fic. SWP = sadism without plot.