Reviews For Going Forth By Day
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Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2007 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1

When do we get more?? I love the Egyptian Gods. Hopefully they'll give Buffy back and let Spike stay with her.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't have always time to comment but I've read that you did a lot of travel. :)
I like the dreams; they are like a story in a story *g*
Another story made me think of it again: Willow got Joyce's money out of Buffy's bank account. But the money isn't for Dawn alone. I guess taking care of Dawn did count in Willow's eye for not paying rent */end ramble*
Heh heh, bad Spike :) Willow won't be pleased. ~ Loved Spike caring for Dawn.

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Your Spike prose was really on in this chapter. I loved this:

Informing all of the Scoobies as to exactly what kinds of physical impossibilities they should perform upon one another had ended with some impressive special effects; a lingering tingle down his left arm; shocked sensibilities on Tara’s part; and a new post for the vampire: Dawn-sitting.

And this: If he didn’t keep a sharp eye out, Dawn would be carrying him around in a customized purse and feeding him beef flavored heart worm treats soon.

Hee!

And I liked both Spike's mischief-making and his begrudging consideration of what the right thing to do was. One might agree or disagree on the math, but it's promising that he bothers to think it out and then choose what he thinks is right. (It being what will amuse him being only a bonus, of course. *g*)

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