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Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 - 11:33 am Title: Broken

Oh dear. Please let them talk this through rather than just avoid each other. Can't wait for the next update - soon please.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 05:51 am Title: Broken

Uh oh...I hope he talks with her instead of assuming things. I don't like it when they're not talking. Great chapter! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 01:30 am Title: Broken

Boy, if Buffy and Spike would put half the energy into a relationship that they put into denial, they'd be happily married with 2.5 kids by now! Great update. More please.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 - 07:29 pm Title: Broken

I'm glad Buffy has Doyle for a friend. I think she really needs one right now. Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 - 05:01 am Title: Broken

I hate to sound harsh but what does Spike expect of Buffy....to wait until he has come to terms with a memory that only gets more martyred with time. The swift kick to his ego and behind will serve to make him come to terms with his survivors guilt and not being enough for Drusilla. Time may heal all wounds but time is something that Spike is wasting mourning a memory. Hope that he will put Drusilla to rest and move on to the living.

Look forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 08:57 pm Title: Broken

Well, I was going to go 'Woooohoooo' to getting an update, but now, now I think you are really evil!

Enough of the angst, give me a fluffy filled spuffy chap next time!!!!!

xxx

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 05:28 pm Title: Broken

Doyle seem to be very observant. Maybe that comes from his job; he noticed Buffy 's state of mind (feelings). Maybe Buffy leaving with him will make him jealous enough to think if he is ready to let her go or if he is ready to take a risk.
Well at last Spike doesn't like to see Buffy with Doyle; that's a start ;-)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 04:45 pm Title: Broken

Luv this fic! Very glad you updated.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: Broken

An intuitive Doyle.. but will it get the response she wants from Spike?

Glad the muse seems to be pushing you ahead !!

Ready for the next chapter and their encounter over Doyle. And glad to see Buffy and Spike come to a realization about their relationship.

Enjoyed.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 03:23 pm Title: Broken

beautiful, doyle is clever.
looking forward to more

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 08:25 am Title: All about us

It's getting so good. I love it when the slip and tell something of their feelings for each other and then run and hide! More please.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: All about us

Great update!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 07:01 pm Title: All about us

Well at least they have faced their fears and let's hope that they have the courage to start clean past their shaky beginnings. Enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: fabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: All about us

hey, i wish you to get better in your surgery.good chapter by the way

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 12:59 pm Title: All about us

Hope you're feeling better, it's never easy after surgery, Take care of yourself first. It's a great story, people while find a way back to it, I have no doubt. So he's got feelings for her as well, cool! It's a hard story for him, he went through a lot with her. Alot of guilt to be caring around. Thank you for the update, non-the-less. Great chapter, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 12:42 pm Title: What I like About you

It's coming to a head now, isn't it? Hope they can get everything on the table. Surprised that Buffy's never been in love or had feelings for anyone and no one had feelings for her, ever! Well to finish the next update, thanks for this, I'm enjoying it. You're keeping me on my toes.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 12:25 pm Title: It's oh, so quiet

Damn, I hate when I miss updates. Glad they're becoming close. So Dru's dead? That surprises me, most of the time she just leaves so it's a little easier to deal with but If she died while still loving him, well that's a totally different set of emotions for him. Now to catch up again. Thanks for sharing, it's a great story.

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 11:43 pm Title: All about us

Luv luv luv this fic...
Keep the chapters coming
p.s.: i hope you feel better soon!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: What I like About you

Yeah, it makes no sense to give advices and not to follow them. But at last he told a tiny bit of himself. Even to know he was married and seeing her chances of being with Spike are getting smaller hurts. Good for (against) cliffhangers that the next chapter is up already :)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: All about us

Hi great story please let me know when u update
annaawhitehouse@hotmail.com

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: What I like About you

Ohh you see, I would of definately been shouting at you if you had posted htis the other day... So glad you forgot! lol

Youwch it's a bit cliffy at the end *wanders off having already read chap 11* thanks hun! xx

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: What I like About you

Thanks for the chapter. Now the next chapter makes since. I thought that I missed something. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 04:15 pm Title: All about us

Love this fic, so glad to see you updated! And not just one chapter, but two! Me very happy, hoping for more soon! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 03:55 pm Title: All about us

I didn't know you had an LJ; added you. :)
You made a jump at the begin of the chapter? Last chapter she wasn't on the phone with Spike. ~ Spike took heroin? No wonder Giles wasn't pleased. Spike is very lucky that he didn't get addicted; that can happen very quick. ~ So that was Spike's story. He stayed with Drusilla for the way she treated him / cheated on him. Maybe it had Drusilla brought back to her mind. But I guess she was too far gone for it anyway. And maybe we wouldn't have 'spuffy' then *g*

Author's Response: =) I saw you added me =D I'll friend you back Yeah, I made a jump in the beginning of the chapter. My mind was totally elsewhere and I just skipped chapter 9. I'm soooo sorry. It will not happen again. And yeah, maybe Spike went through all that only to meet Buffy, and have some hot Spuffy lovin' in the future!!! =)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: All about us

Great chapter. Although it was much too short. I hope you are feeling better and I look forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to read Buffy and Spike's reactions to that conversttion and their admissions.

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