Date: 08/04/2007 - 04:10 am Title: Revulsion
Consider me intrigued! Just one thing interrupted my enjoyment: Afrikaans is actually a Dutch-derived language spoken primarily by white South Africans of Dutch descent. i.e., Zulu is not a related language. Likewise, it sounds like the people are African; Afrikaners are European(usually Dutch)-descended South Africans who speak Afrikaans.
Obviously it's not a huge deal, but because people who know this will be brought up short like I was, I thought you might like to know.
Otherwise I am very much enjoying this, and reading on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much on pointing out my little blooper! Obviously I wasn't too thorough on my research *goes pink in embarrassment* But now I'll be sure to correct that and my fic will be all the more better for it! I'm glad that you're enjoying my fic despite that little mishap! Again, thank you so much for the helpful review!
Date: 06/12/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Revulsion
Wow, i just started reading this story right now. I don't know how i missed it but i'm happy that i started reading it.
I feel for buffy right now. i too just just loss someone close to me. it is so hard.
and i loved this chapter. Telling us what happen with Spike and why he doesn't want to feed anymore.
But i have to admit that i felt a little sad for both spike and dru. Where dru was telling him that he doesn't want the dark he wants the light. It is like saying he doesn't want me. And spike feeling sad because he can't fight what is meant to be. And that is to be in the light with buffy. Is buffy going to a slayer in this story or just a regular girl. I hope that it is just a regular girl. I don't think that i ever read a story where spike is a vamp and buffy is a relugar girl.
sorry, for the long review.
Author's Response: I'm sorry for your loss. It's good that through my fic you can find a connection. I hope that things come together for you and that you will be alright. And don't apologize for leaving a long review! I like 'em long!
Date: 04/11/2007 - 09:10 am Title: Revulsion
i love Aggie, and wish that Hank would be a better Dad, looking forward to more, poor Spike not being able to stand the taste of humans
Author's Response: I'm glad that everyone is warming up to Aggie. It lets me know that I can create an original character that blends enough to fit with all of our well-beloved BtVS characters!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Revulsion
this is really good thanks for putting your thoughts in to words...
please update this soon
Author's Response: No, thank you for liking the outcome of me putting my thoughts into words. It's heartwarming to get feedback that tells me that someone likes what I wrote.
Date: 04/05/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Revulsion
Good to see you posting here too! Looking forward to chapter four :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing me at SR, cordykitten! I'm glad that you like my story enough to do so! *huggles*
Date: 04/05/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Revulsion
This is absolutely wonderful! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading what you've got so far. Really looking forward to more. =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad that you're enjoying this! *huggles*
Date: 04/05/2007 - 10:10 am Title: Revulsion
Hi this looks to be a great story please let me know when you update
annaawhitehouse@hotmail.com
Author's Response: Alright, Anna, I'll be sure to email you when More Than A Myth is updated. I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 06:01 am Title: Revulsion
Very interesting tale.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 05:11 am Title: Revulsion
Just found your fic and love it! Can't wait til the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like my fic so far!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 01:46 am Title: Revulsion
I love your story pleese write more soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Revulsion
I am enjoying this piece, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad your enjoying it, Toni!
Date: 04/05/2007 - 12:40 am Title: Revulsion
Ah, so things are becoming clearer. Great update. I cannot wait to see where you take these characters!
-Alyx
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like my fic so far. Thank you for taking the time to review each chapter! I really appreciate it!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 11:20 pm Title: Revulsion
this story is amazing. I love every update
Author's Response: Amazing? *Blushes* Thanks for reviewing, demonica mills!