INCREDIBLE! I love this fic already. Can't wait to read the rest...
Young Buffy was so cute. A lot of otherwise good authors don't really know how to write kids. You don't have that problem. Young Buffy was believeable and an absolute joy to read. I'm so excited about this story!

-Alyx

Author's Response: It's a relief to know that you readers think I did a good job on little Buffy, because you're right--writing little kids can make or break a fic whether it's done properly or not.