Date: 08/27/2008 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, I hope it won't be another 13 months until the next update! And I really want to see what's next!
Date: 08/26/2008 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Buffy can die the presumptious cow. I'd like to see her get a beating while helpless now. I never thought reading a Season 4 fic could inspire the old season 6 anger for Bitchy Buffy.
Aside from that brief rant, your writing style is good and very readable, hard to find good grammer in the world of fanfic.
Date: 08/26/2008 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Buffy can die the presumptious cow. I'd like to see her get a beating while helpless now. I never thought reading a Season 4 fic could inspire the old season 6 anger for Bitchy Buffy.
Aside from that brief rant, your writing style is good and very readable, hard to find good grammer in the world of fanfic.
Date: 08/24/2008 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 3
What an intriguing and fresh concept you've come up with! I'm very anxious to get some more pieces of the story, and to see how Spike and Buffy will come together on this one :)
Date: 08/24/2008 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I like this story already, and I can't wait for more.
Date: 08/23/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
*rereads first chapters* Oh now I remember, even the big cliffhanger where you've stopped. :)
Good to see an update again :) And even more that there will be another chapter soon. Looking so forward to find out more about that little vampire. A very young demon... well that doesn't fit to his age. Because I hope he will still grow. I'll wait and see :)