Oh! The Initiative is chasing a little vamp-child that is breathing or only nervous, this doesn't mean it may be human. I guess only nervous. What a poor one.
And Buffy doesn't like the Initiative because they do her work? Too bad she does like Egypt too much. But good she isn't fond of Riley here.
Buffy's reaction to that little boy is interesting: She thinks he's familiar, feels familiar to him. And a very interesting eye color too.
If I should make a guess I would cast a look at the Initiative (the reason that little boy is there) but we'll see. Hopefully soon. :)

Author's Response: Wow, you're really observant... but pssh don't tell the others yet *looks around nervously* :D I'm glad you like it and thanks for the great review :) I hopefully have chapter 2 finished soon PS: I friended you back, but I didn't have the time yet to reply to the comments on my lj :)

Oh... Wow. This is a fantastic start- great premise. And you can already see the Spike elements in this adorable child. I can't believe the Initiative were trying to hunt him down, poor little thing.
Let's hope Buffy doesn't freak out and do something regretful now. I love this, now bring on the Spike!!

More please!!
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Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it so far. And yep, Spike will be in the next chapter...

wonderful start looking forward to seeing where this is going

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Yay!!!!!!!! Spike and Buffy has a kid. The little boy sounds adorable. I bet Spike and Buffy would make beautiful kids. I'm glad that it was a little boy and not a little girl. it seems like most writers go with little girls. but i want to see a little spike runing around. You know.

more soon please.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. :)