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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really looking forward to this alternative to S6. This has to be part of how Dawn felt during this time and Joss never voiced in canon. The Scoobies were to wrapped up in them selves to really be there for her. Not the way Spike was, that and they could share in each others pain. Very good start, looking forward to more, thanks.

Author's Response: I agree! I lovea Spike/Dawn friendship! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice way to leave us hanging babes. Really good chapter and I can't wait on the next one. More soon please

Author's Response: Thanks !! I love cliffhangers!!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1

This story has a good start, look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update soon!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 1

wow. willow's....controling. something tells me that willow is gonna be a problem as the story continues. loved it lots and lots. mores soon.

Author's Response: Yes Willow will be somewhat of a villian in this one! Im glad you are enjoyng it!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far I can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I will update soon!

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Can't wait to see more. Spike and Dawn's friendship is so sweet. Xander and Willow need a kick in the ass.

Author's Response: Yes I agree! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I love it more please.

Author's Response: Thanks will update soon!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

If you mean they're going to bring back Buffy as if it was immediately after the Season 1 finale this looks as if it has massive potential. THAT Buffy hasn't had any negative experiences with Spike! I'm definitely intrigued.....

Author's Response: Yeah I always wondered what would have happened if Buffy hadn't been so jaded when Spike fell in love with her.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

when you say the buffy killed by the master, do you mean in the doppleganger episode or when buffy was killed by the master in season one?
Either way, excellent fic, i can't wait to read more, especially how spike and dawn are going to react to buffy being back. update soon!

Author's Response: II hope I cleared it up Im my Authores notes for chapter 2! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very, very interesting!!! I will definitely be looking for updates to this story. More, soon??? Please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I will update soon!

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

An intriguing start! Waiting for more...

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heartbreaking, seeing Dawn and Spike so devastated. Yet they find solace in the other's mourning.
Tara seems to be the only one that has second thoughts. Willow doesn't hear.. she'll do it. ~ I love the first chapter; looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning. I love Spike and Dawn's friendship and Tara trying to be the voice of reason. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update soon! I think Tara was always a voice of reason, but very few people seemed to listen to her.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Willow and Xander need a good ass kicking.

I always felt for Dawn during that time. I mean she loss her mother and sister the same year. That would be tough on anyone let alone a teen girl who is having trouble finding out who really is. My heart broke for her. And Spike was the only one who cared about her what she going through. Shame on the rest who didn't take the time to look after her.

Author's Response: I agree I loved the Spawn friendship. I always found it touching and it broke my heart when Joss tore it apart in seaons 6&7

Reviewer: peroxide_dreams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love, love, love the idea!!! Great beginning!!! Thank you so much for writing this for me! Cant wait for more!!
*hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks muffin *huggles* I was soo hoping you would like it! I will update it soon!

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great idea! i love it...sounds like a good fic....update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you ! I'm glad you like it so far I will update soon!

Reviewer: Andie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh! Very interesting! More please!

Author's Response: Thanks I will update soon!

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