Date: 08/10/2007 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter 9
I love your fic so far, but I hated the rape chapter because of what Riley did, not because the chapter was bad.
I hope he gets what he deserves, that pig.
I like the fact that Spike takes care of Buffy so well and I hope they will get a safe journey to L.A.
That agent worries me, what is she/he up to? Maggie Walsh makes me feel sick, I think I hate her.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yes that was a hard chapter to write, but I am glad you like it, more will be soon.
Date: 08/10/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 9
reads like an outline of a story.
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Date: 08/08/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love how Spike is taking care of Buffy. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: He is I wanted to capture that sweet and caring guy we say with Dru being sick in season 2, where he could go from hard as steel to as puddle in seconds with her around. I hope I am doing a good job. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 08/08/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thats another great chaper except for the gammar mistake in the first line...misuse of the comma... i'd blame that on the editor/proof reader ....Oh That me must be my fault then sorry ....Anyway no need to duck for now it looks good ...Cookies for you Jeanette
Author's Response: Thanks