Reviews For Mate's Pain
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 21
Date: 05/14/2011 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 21
You have great plot ideas, and are pretty good at dialogue, but you are "telling" instead of "showing" a lot of the "action."
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 21
Date: 10/25/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww, Willow and Tara :) So sweet. So Buffy and Spike are looking for a house. Nice :)
Author's Response: well this is season 4 so yeah Willow and Tara are getting the start, sort of dropped hints chapter 4 or 5.
Thanks.
Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 21
Date: 10/25/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 21
Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Date: 10/24/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Really great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you.