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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 11:43 am Title: Revelations

Oh Ioved it, can't wait to find out more about the letter too.

Author's Response: hi babes. I will explain everything int he next chapter which will be up very soon as my muse wants me to finish this

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Revelations

I wasn't sure at first if the letter made Buffy sad or if it were good news. But I think 'distress' is more bad than good. So this Buffy belongs to Spike for three years now? Then whatever happened in her past was more than three years ago.
So the letter is connected to Buffy's secret / her M.O.
Interesting twist; please write more. I want to find out more / read on :)

Author's Response: HI honey. A lot will be explained in the next chapter. The cause of her animosity towards Spike will be the fist thing to deal with ---- and yes, I will let you know just who wrote the letter

Reviewer: nb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 08:42 am Title: Revelations

continue continue

Author's Response: Hi nb, i will - I will. Thanks for the review honey, there will be more very soon

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 08:30 am Title: Revelations

A good slant on the early relationship between Buffy and Spike: the attraction is obvious, but so is the spite and animosity. A flammable situation, which I think, judging by this first chapter, you'll bring to life, if you continue.

Author's Response: Hi sue, I think I will continue now that I know the reader want me to. Reivews really do feed our poor damaged souls - and for feeding me - I thank you very much

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 07:51 am Title: Revelations

I love this story! I can tell it's different from the rest. Im very well intrigue with the plot of this story. I like it too that Spike and Buffy are at odds with each other. It makes the story more interesting because no other couple could fight and make up like Spike and Buffy!

More please!

Author's Response: hi babes, a lot of questions will be answered soon - a new chapter will be ready beforeyou know it.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Revelations

It different I'm not sure if I like it or not so I'd say another chapter is called for Babes.....Though I did find song on lime wire and play it while I read....Song was sad....May be thats what unsettling me....But other than that I not sure I fully understand why Spike was so cruel and unloving to Buffy also....No I need another Chapter then I'll know .....Sorry Gilly If it not the review you as looking for?......Huggles anyway for my friend.....

Author's Response: Hi mrs, give it time babes. All will come right in the end......

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Revelations

This is a very interesting story. I do like Spike like this, his own man with power and using it and a bit shady. Keeps him a bit more real, times were hard then; people did what they had to; they had to live. Bitchy Buffy is a given, if she was innocent and just loved him, how could we have a story? I hope you continue and really liked the use of the Cole Porter song.

Author's Response: Hi DK, thank you as always for taking the time to read and review. I will continue this story thanks to the interest everyone has shown. A lot will be explained in the next chapter, and thanks for appreciating my choice in music. Till we meet again......

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 02:47 am Title: Revelations

NO!!!! What a mean cliffie! Continue please!!! Does Buffy have a kid or something? A sick mom? Where is the letter from? It seems like she needs money, like her job is forced. So what happened to her?

It seems Spike does treat her like a whore. I noticed mentions of him teaching everything she knows so I'm assuming she was a virgin or close to it when she met him. Why does she hate him so much? Did he force her or something? What's their relationship like?

I can't wait to find out all these things! I'm already loving ur fic! Can't wait for more! Please continue!!!



Author's Response: secretguest - my angel. There was a lot of subtext in this chapter and I am SO glad you picked up on it. A lot of your questions will be answered in the next few chapters, but I promise you this - it will be spuffy. Could I honestly write anything else????

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Revelations

wow. i'm very interested to see where this one is going. i think i have an idea though. great job. loved it bunches. more soon.

Author's Response: hi toots, yes there will be more soon. Now I know that there are readers interested the update will come thick and fast. My muse is pushing me for this one, and I might just let it..........

Reviewer: bloody_hell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:01 am Title: Revelations

i really liked it, and i'm looking forward to another chapter! please dont let it die!!! haha i don't usually read fics of Buffy and Spike set in the olden days, i'm used to them in present time, but i was really impressed with this story line and i knew that i had to read it. please keep writing!!!

Author's Response: Oh my treasure, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. It's hard sometimes to know just what the readers will like, and I am glad this fic is appealling to the readers out there. More soon, honey, I promise

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:00 am Title: Revelations

You did it again Gilly, you got me hooked on anaother one of your fics, this is good , angsty and smutty, just how I like them., of course you must continue, and continue. Can't wait to read more, and of course the grand finale which is always Spuffy , love going down thatroad with one of my fave authors.

Author's Response: JO, my angel. A lot of things will be explained in the next chapter, I promise. I know I like to leave you hanging, but the muse is on me just now so you might not need to wait too long...............

Reviewer: peroxide_dreams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 12:28 am Title: Revelations

Hee, hee she got me to write one too for her other banner, Sneaky girl. I love the beginning, I hope you will keep going with it.

The link will only work for Spuffy Fantasy members, they have to join to read, to keep minors out,

Thanks for the pimp!

Author's Response: Hi honey, vampgirly stalked me at home and at work, but when I saw the banner the storyline just hit me. If I didn't pimp the comm, I would have been hunted down *LOL*. Considering vampgirly is coming to stay with me for a week in July, thereis not far I could have gone!!!!

Reviewer: Trudi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 12:19 am Title: Revelations

I like Spike and am very sympathic to his character but I have to say that his behavior toward Buffy really disturbs me. Now typically I don't comment to an author regarding how they write their characters because I figure that how they write is their choice just as it is my choice what to read. But I've read your past stories and you generally write Spike as a good guy, who might not always behave wisely but whose heart is generally in the right place. So I am really surprised to read how Spike treats Buffy sexually. Since he knows that she hates what he makes her do it all seems very hostile and not at all the way Spike usually behaves toward women--at least in your fics. So I am hoping that there is some kind of explanation for why he does this to her. I haven't read the challenge so am in the dark as to the particulars of the story parameters and perhaps the reasons are evident there. But, on the face of it, I actually don't blame Buffy for hating him right now. I'm eager to see what happens and what the reasons are for the behavior of both Buffy and Spike as written in the first chapter.

Author's Response: Trudi, my pet, thank you for reading between the lines. A lot of the questions you ask will be answered in the next few chapters. And I will make you this promise....it will be Spuffy all the way baby

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Revelations

I am so glad you're back to writing historical fic. This has really got me intrigued. I hope we are going to get flashbacks on how they met? Of course you've got to continue!!!

Author's Response: HI Mag-rose. As always thanks for the review. I have another historical fic in mind, and wll probably start on it very soon. I am so pleased you like it, and thanks to your encouragement there will be more.....

Reviewer: ascii27 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 11:27 pm Title: Revelations

Wonderful; very hot, of course you should continue.

Author's Response: hi ascii27, you have no idea how much your review and encouragement help us poor authors feel. Thanks to people like you who take the time to leave a review, more chapters appear and more writers are encouraged to write - I thank you

Reviewer: Serentiy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: Revelations

Now you know that I want you to continue, right? Silly to ask, babes. Curious as to who sent the letter so please write another chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Hello sweetie, I think you need to get yourself and LJ account - they are free and just think of all the wonderful places your stories would go. I know a lot of readers out there who love your stuff and would love to see it on LJ too. La la la la la - *pimp*

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: Revelations

Hmm, the link worked for me. I think you have to be a member of the community in order to see it, but I'm not too sure. Anyway, this is an interesting start. You should continue with it.

Author's Response: Oh Tammy, thank you for your encouragement. If I did not continue I think vampgirly would stalk me. LOL. There will be more soon as the story is set in my head now and the muse is telling me to 'write it down'

Reviewer: Jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 11:02 pm Title: Revelations

I just finished reading "The Lord and The Lady" earlier today. I loved that one. So I was really excited when I saw this!

It's great so far. Really intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens. Like who the letter is from and what it says. How Spike really feels about her - you keep mentioning his "loving kisses" etc... Why Buffy doesn't just leave him if she hates him so much. And all that jazz.

I really enjoy period fics, no worries there. ;) Keep up the good work!

PS: The link didn't work. =/

Author's Response: Hi Tammy, to receive a review from a writer as good as you, is praise indeed. I think you need to be a member of the LJ Comm for the link to work, sorry about that. I'm a bit of an LJ virgin I'm afraid and I need to get folks to help me do things *grins*. A lot will be explained in the next chapter, and if you read TLATL you will know I am all about the cliffhangers *grins again*. Till next time.........

Reviewer: jennypower Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Revelations

Loved it! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Oh my sweet, thank you for being my first review. I am SO glad your liked it. I quite like it myself, but there would have been no point in taking it further if the readers hated it. Till the next chapter, babes.

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