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Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Still loving it, and I agree, there are worse things than death, but it couldn't happen to a more deserving guy.

Author's Response: Hee, you're very right about that. ;) thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2008 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Oh, that is a far worse fate. Those places were nightmarish. Good to get a little taste of Spike's history.

Author's Response: Hee, I'm very happy you liked that. :D Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

As long as Riley gets what he deserves, I'm happy *grins*

Author's Response: Oh, I think he will get what he deserves. ;)

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Love what you did to Riley *evil grin* Still addicted to this story ;)

Author's Response: Glad you approved, sweetie. I aim to please. *winks* thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Candi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Hey it rocked luvd the story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Candi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Hey it rocked luvd the story!

Author's Response: Thank you, honey!

Reviewer: 1880girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2007 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Interesting Point of view from Spike, hopefully more spuffy coming soon in the upcoming updates.

Author's Response: Hee, yes, a lot more Spuffy is coming soon. *lol* Thanks for reviewing, darling!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2007 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

This is a great story and I love the more sinister way of disposing of Riley. It seems Bedlam is a more suitable revenge.

Author's Response: Hee, I thought so too. Plus I wanted a place from where it would be virtually impossible of escaping. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Thank you for the update. I am glad your father is doing better. The chapter was very good. I am glad to learn more of Spike's backstory. I am no fan of Riley but I wonder if his stay in the asylum will end up causing more problems. It explains a lot. Please update when you are able.

Author's Response: Thank you, honey. He's almost back to his normal self now, too. :D I'm very happy you liked to learn more of Spike's backstory and no worries, Riely won't be a problem any more, I promise. ;) I'll update in just a bit, I hope. ;) Thanks again.

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

I'm definitely not disappointed in Riley's fate, I'm sure Ethan will take good care of him. ;-) Loved the Spike/Buffy scene, and I also enjoyed learning a bit more about Spike's past. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: *giggles* Ethan will take very good care of him, no doubt about it. ;) Thank you for your comment, darling, I'm delighted you're still enjoying the story. *hugs*

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Thanks for the update! Spike is so silly for not expecting to keep Buffy.

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree, he's quite stubborn as well. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Absolutely a wonderful ending to a great chapter! I am one of the many who is rooting for Ethan's experiments to end badly. I really don't know why they ever wrote a person like Riley for the series. A vampire is more real than his character was; and a lot less boring. I am really enjoying this story and I hope your Muse keeps you working. Thank you for sharing your work.

Author's Response: Hee, I think having Ethan's experiments end badly could be arranged, me thinks. It seems there are a few of you that would like to see that, so I'll give it a shot. Thanks for your lovely comment and I hope you enjoy the update!

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Hi, Mari:

Just finished reading Chapter 13. Like you, I think there are far more horrible ways to make people pay that don't involve a quick death. What is happening to Riley is well deserved. I am, however, hoping you'll give more detail on what that lovely, evil Ethan Rayne has planned for him. Ethan is one character that I just love to watch - evil with a touch of Monty Python.

I have never been a big follower of artists, but after working for a college for 20+ years and having been in the midst of a fundraising campaign for new art buildings over the past several years, I have slowly come to appreciate various different venues. I have thoroughly enjoyed Spike's profession here. You have taken what can be a very complex subject and made it understandable and appreciated by even a novice such as myself.

Will look forward to the rest of your story. If it happens that Riley happens to meet up with a friend by the name of Big Butch or Big Kralik and becomes someones "bitch," I wouldn't really complain a bit. ;)

Cheers,
Nikki

Author's Response: Hi, Nikki,

I'm happy you agree with me on this. It was impossible to resist when the idea surged in my mind. And don't worry, after a petition like that, how could I not show you in detail what Ethan has planned. Probably in the next 2 or 3 chapters.

To tell you the truth, art has never been my favorite subject and I never imagined I'd ever write anything related to it. However, my muse decided she wanted him to be an artist and I'm nothing if not her slave. Nothing I could do. So I've had to research and I'm very glad I've been able to transmit it in a believable way. Thank you for that, it means a lot to me.

*giggles* You know that's a great idea, might even use it if you don't mind? Thanks so much for your lovely review, darling. It made my day.

Hugs,
Mari

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

So Riley's going with Ethan. Didn't expect that but it works just fine for me. Seems like he'll get some torture or something. Can't wait for more Spuffy!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, it works pretty well for me, too. Didn't really wanted Giles or Spike killing him. And torture seems about right. ;) Hope you enjoy the Spuffy that's coming then. Thanks for reviewing, honey!

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Ethan Rayne? Hm... I'm really interested to know what you're planning on doing with him. I'm pretty excited that you chose to have Buffy fully accept Spike. More please!

Author's Response: Hee, you'll find out soon about my plans for Ethan and Riley. *evil grin* And from the beginning I always knew she would accept him. Thanks for reviewing, hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

See, I told ya they'd love it. Riley's fate is indeed worse than death, grins evilly... to Bedlam we go. And Spike's history was a very, VERY lovely touch. It gives us insight into the man that overcame his beast. And to dust Dru... divine, *sighs*. Hmmmmm, such a nice thought that our blond couple is all snuggly-wuggly in bed - - guess he didn't have to use those secret passages after all, LOL.. Can't wait to help out on the next chappy sweety. Smooches to you.

Author's Response: Hee, you're just too sweet to me. *hugs* and yes, to Bedlam we go. *wide evil grin* I'm very happy you enjoyed his backstory, as always you were very helpful while I drew it out. *giggles* Secret passages were not exactly needed for the moment, perhaps later? *lol* Thanks again for all your help, darling and for reviewing. *smooches*

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

OH no Riley is alive hope he doesn't get out and hurt Buffy. and Ethan a dr. interesting.

Author's Response: He won't, no worries. Ethan will make sure of that. ;*wide evil grin* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

LOL made Ethan into something of a Dr. Frankenstein in this story I just love it.

Author's Response: Yeah, couldn't resist. Thanks for reviewing, darling!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Really enjoyed reading some of Spike's back story - more man than monster! and what a sneaky bugger Giles is to have Riley "relocated". Thank you so much for the update.

Author's Response: Yep, always more man than monster. I'm very happy you enjoyed reading his backstory. And you'll still find out how sneaky Giles can be. *giggles* Thanks for reviewing, darling. :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

YAY for the update and the site being back. *deletes LJ memory* Then I can read here.
Good Spike doesn't have a soul to loose, he was so happy with Buffy in his arms, trusting him.
Interesting part, showing Spike's past. Drusilla underestimated the human part in Spike (William if you will); that caused her death. ~ And yeah, I guess you'll need money if you need to hide yourself (even if only for paying W&H).
Oh! Bedlam... not a place where Riley will have fun. And I wondered how Dr. Ethan did fit in there; Giles is the connection. You're right, this fate is even worse than a quick death.

Author's Response: Hee, yes, it's good that the site is back. TSR is my favorite place to read as well.
Yes, he was happier than he'd ever been, I think.
I always wanted to give you all a glimpse into his past life, give you an idea of why he acts like he does if you will.
*giggles* Yep, not a place where Riley would have any kind of fun, Ethan might, though. ;) Thanks for your review, darling. *many, many hugs for you*

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Oh, I think Riley's fate is quite appropriate. :D

I now wonder how Buffy will convince William that she's going to be with him. I imagine she would want to attend to her affairs back home, but be racing right back to him. He might think their parting is best, but he's dealing with a very stubborn Summers girl!

Author's Response: Hee, thank you, I'm glad you approve. :D

Hee, you'll have to wait and see how will all play out the next few chapters will give you the answer. ;) And you're right he's dealing with a stubborn girl, but there are other things to consider. ;) Thanks for reviewing, darling!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

wonderful update. thanks for sharing and the thought of Riley going mad in Bedlam sounds delicious


Author's Response: Hee, isn't it deliciously evil? I couldn't resist the idea once muse whispered about Bedlam. Thank your for reviewing, darling. *hugs*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

Enjoyed the backstory on Drusilla. Goodbye Sire.

And still a little more human than most. Saved his parents.

Connection of Giles and Rayne? Or just a coincidence? Being in a "Looney Bin" would drive anyone crazy.. Poor Riley. Deserves worse.

Enjoying.. And voted !! Waiting for the Love Scene
And her decision.



Author's Response: Hee, yes, good bye to Dru, very quickly and as painlessly as I could, too. ;) It was always my intention to show a different side of Spike, perhaps the one he could have been if there weren't an Angelus?

Giles and Ethan are friends in here, as you'll find out in chapter 15. ;)

Thanks so much for reviewing and voting. Hope the new chapter tides you over until the Love Scene. ;)

Reviewer: maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

was happy to see a new ch loved it more soon thank you maggie


Author's Response: Thank you, maggie, I'm glad you enjoyed. There'll be more soon. :D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 13. Pointillism

OH I LOVED THAT ETHANS GONNA GET A HOLD OF RILEY, THATS WAT HE DESERVES!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. also i thought it was beautiful that spike killed dru for his parents, i have never read that in a story before and love the idea. i really hope that buffy doesnt leave spike and that they stay together and he turns her. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX SOO MUCH

Author's Response: *giggles* He sure will. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, sweetie. I wanted to bring a different element with the way Dru dusted, I'm glad you approve. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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