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Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2008 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Poor Spike. His perfect night is ruined. I do think Buffy is being a tiny bit unreasonable here, since he would know more about claims and the risks involved. Also, they kinda just met not too long ago and forever is a *really* long time so even if he said no for reasons other than risk it would be understandable.

On the other hand, I guess it doesn't look good from Buffy's viewpoint, but I don't know why she would think he wouldn't want her around longer just because he doesn't want to claim her.

I'm sure you'll make it work out in the end, though! I have faith! Good to know she doesn't need to be turned to stay with him. Still loving this story. :)

Author's Response: I think their perfect night is still rescueable. So no worries about that. And I do see your point regarding Buffy and I promise that will be addressed in chapter 21.

Buffy didn't think he would want her around for longer even if he didn't claim her, because he never intended to keep her for longer than the duration of her vacation. It didn't mean he didn't love her, just he didn't think he deserved her in any way and she'd be better off without him.

Yeah, turning her was the one thing I knew from the start wouldn't happen. Spike would've never forgiven himself for taking her out of the light and into the darkness with him. Thank you so much for your comment, you wouldn't believe me how much you pov helped me iron out some details. :D

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Wednesday, Wednesday, Wednesday! It's finally here! I'm going to be hitting refresh all day in anticipation of the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: *lol* I probably will update later tonight. I have a few things to do before, including trying to write a little more of chapter 21. ;)

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

I read it twice it was so good! ;)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

You are soooo evil that it actually scares me!!!!! you can not leave me hanging like this!!! you better update soon......or else *evil glare*

Author's Response: *giggles* I scare myself sometimes. *winks* No worries next chapter will be up ver soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

LOVED IT!! :D

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Awe :) Buffy guessed right, Spike is smitten with the dress and even more the woman inside it!
But Spike looks stunning too.
Oh my... I saw the misunderstanding unfold itself and them getting deeper into it. After Buffy took Spike's answer as rejection Spike could only dig him deeper in the hole he opened.
Very good news to know the next chapter is ready to post. Soon?

Author's Response: Yeah, they were both smitten until misunderstanding happened. *sighs* vnext chapter will be posted very soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

I couldn't review each chapter, I was racing through them so fast...but , please, please, please next chapter?!?!?!  I LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you, darling. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so much!

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

¿Qué? ¿Cómo ¿Qué? ¿Pero por qué? *snif, snif*

Que desastre, pero por qué este hombre no ha podido pensar un poquito antes de soltar un No, tan descarado, vaya lio.....

Ya puedes ir saliendo de tu lugar supuer secreto y escribir algo para arreglarlo ¬¬.....

Author's Response: *lol* Por què? Bueno, porque tenìa que pasar. Spike nunca pensò en quedarse con ella por siempre, porque no creìa merecerla. De todas maneras, no creo que vaya a seguir siendo tan testarudo por mucho màs tiempo. ;) Gracias por tu review!

Reviewer: 1880girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Two words.................Perfect Twist

Author's Response: Thank you so much, darling! I'm ecstatic you think so!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Nice twist, I never saw that one coming... As long as there will be a happy ending, I'm happy :)

Author's Response: Hee, it's good that I could surprise you with it, then. And no worries, there'll be a happy ending, no doubts about that. :D

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Lordy, how matters of the heart get all jumbled with the head interferes. Think she had a bad case of the pot calling the kettle black when she accused him of only seeing & understanding what he wants to. Really think it's her that's not understanding what he's trying to tell her. And, please Lord, let Spike stop Giles from taking her back to London. Lordy, this has me so on the edge of my seat, that I'm going to be haunting this place til the next updates posted. (BTW, I love Echoes, as well, and you're wrong. This story is just as good as Echoes. Congrats on the awards!)

Author's Response: That's so very true, how matters of the heart get all jumbled when the head interferes. Keep in mind, though, Buffy is very young, around 24-25 I think, and just got rejected, when she'd been absolutely sure that would never happen. She was hurt, thinking he just wanted to use her, which was an honest mistake, really. Spike didn't handle it much better, I think. I promise you won't have to wait endlessly until this is resolved, though. I hope to post the next chapter a little later tonight (Wednesday). Thanks for reviewing and for what you told at the end. *blushes*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

The picture of Spike... reminds me of a James Bond picture.. with Sean Connery?

Nice job ... to its creator..

Author's Response: Perhaps that's the base she used. And I agree, it's very nice :D

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Thank goodness you already have the next chapter written! I don't know if I could have taken it. Haha. As much as it frustrates me, I'm really glad that you wrote this chapter the way you did. The angst will make the story that much sweeter. :)

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you, darling. And that's what I think as well, that the angst will make the story all the sweeter. But I won't drag it out endlessly, I promise you that. Next chapter should be up this Wednesday. *hugs*

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

OH I loved the fight.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you did! Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Amazing chapter and I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for. Both Spike and Buffy referred to "claiming" during the chapter and it was clear that their ideas on same were poles apart. I suppose Spike will at least know where Buffy has gone because Giles will drop her off, that is if he doesn't stop her from leaving. Please post soon because I'm on the edge of my seat and it's not very comfy and I'm sure you don't want to stay in your secret location for too long! Loved it.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for your kind words. And no worries I'll post the next chapter on Wednesday, you'll find out what happens then. ;)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

aahh, the pillock. he completly mishandled the situation, typical man!!
wonder how he's going to react when he finds Buffy gone.
please, please update soon
loved it loved it

Author's Response: Hee, yes, very typical man. And you'll find out how he's going to react very soon, I promise. ;) thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Stuborn pair, aren't they?

Lovin' this :)

Author's Response: *giggles* Yes, they are. One a little more than the other methinks. ;) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

I absolutely love this story. Thank you for updating!

I kind of expected things to go wrong, so I wasn’t upset at the end of the chapter—there was too much buildup. Spike, like many other men, thought that big gestures like the flower from South America or a day in the spa, etc. would create a perfect evening, whereas “perfection” could stem from something much simpler, from an understanding between two people. While the whole day up to the dinner misunderstanding/argument was great and wonderful, it wasn’t necessary. Buffy loves him, not the thing she can buy for her. And as much as I don’t want to bring up the “A” word :), (I love Angel, but think his love for Cordelia was much better for him, just like Spike was better for Buffy—ok, I’m getting off the topic here, oops…) Spike’s thoughts of sacrificing his feelings for her own good (without letting her make a choice herself) definitely echo what Angel did in the series.

Love this story!


Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you weren't upset by the chapter. And exactly! He thought all those gestures would make up for not staying/keeping her with him. Never looked farther into what she might feel when it was over. Typical man, I guess. And yes, Buffy loves him and wants to be with him. I have to agree with your parallels between what Angel did and what Spike did. *hugs* and thanks again!

Reviewer: nonny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

You are EVIL!!! But we love it! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, darling! I'll take that as a compliment. *winks*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:30 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

OH MY GOD, you are the evilest of evil people... EVER!

I was sooo happy to get to work and see an update on AoI! Finally the perfect night, and then... and he... and you... OMG! I could kill you! (well, no I couldn't, cuz you're a sweetheart and I love talking to you, and I want you around, but still... that was a major risk you took, missy!)

You do know you have to make this up to us, right? LOL! I'm about to have people kidnap your muse and blackmail you for an update!

That said, despite the fact that I was actually growling at work, I loved the angst (hey, I'm sick, ask Tina!) and want more, please? *pouts and bats eyelashes*

*hugs you tight*

PS. You sooo could have let on just a little of that! Grrrr

Author's Response: Moi? Evil? I'm so not. It was my muse's fault, I'm nothing but her slave. *bats eyes innocently* Although knowing her, she'll take that as a compliment! *giggles and winks*

Awww, I love talking to you, too. *smooches* And you know I'll make it up to you, and pretty soon, too. No need to blackmail muse... yet. ;)

You want more angst? *giggles* Well, I'll have to see what I can do about that. *lmao* What? You already said I was evil anyway. *winks*

*smooches* Thankee, darling! You totally make my day with your passion for my little story.

PS. Nope, I couldn't, I told you it would've spoiled the surprise. *wide evil grin*

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

AHHHHH! Totally not what I was expecting. But I understand what Buffy was saying. All or nothing. And don't worry i have complete faith it you... but I still can't wait to see what Spike will do. Hurry up with the next one!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm glad you could understand where she was coming. Next chapter will be up soon, I promise. :D

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

OMG you better duck and hide, are u trying to make me crazy, I was expecting a wonderful spuffy chapter and what did i get instead ,a chapter full of angst.
THAT WAS GREAT ,TEEHEE, I can't wait to read the next chapter (which is already written)PLEASE,please , please can we have it tomorrow , please I gotta know now how spike is going to fix this , pretty please . OH update soon.

Author's Response: Nope, not trying to make you crazy I promise you. I do love writing angst every once in a while though. I'm glad you thought it was great. ;) And nope not today, but I'll post on Wednesday. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

Yikes!!! The unbearable heartache is killing me! I feel so bad for Buffy and Spike right now... things could not have gone worse. :( They're on separate pages at the moment, but I faith you'll fix things in due time... after all what is Spuffy without a bit of angst. Good update.
Loved the manip, and CONGRATS on your wins!!! :D

Author's Response: I agree, what's Spuffy without a bit of angst. Just a bit, I promise. I won't drag it endlessly and next chapter will be up very soon. Thank you so much for your lovely review!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

lol. you better hope no one finds that secret hiding place of yours!!!! lol. not very nice way to end the chapter but completely understand why it had to be done. i see where spike is coming from but i really see where buffy is coming from. how could he think that making love once with her and then getting rid of her was going to be okay??? he knew how he'd feel after, but never took into consideration of how buffy would feel. great job. loved it soooooo much. you better post soon before ur found.

Author's Response: *lol* No worries, I'm very well hidden. ;) Sorry for that, couldn't resist leaving it there. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter even if it was an angsty one. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 19. Neo Expressionism

WAT THE FUCK!!! I CANT BELIEVE THAT EVERYTHING FELL APART AND THAT SHES QUESTIONING HIS LOVE!! ALSO I CANT BELIEVE THAT HE WOULDNT CLAIM HER!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that shes leaving him and he better go after her. i REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hope that they work things out and that he claims her and they stay together forever. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update as soon as u can, im literally DYING to read wat happens next. THANX SOOOO MUCH!!!

Author's Response: Hee, have some faith, I promise everything will be resolved... eventually. ;) Next chapter will be posted on Wednesday. Thanks for reviewing!

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