Reviews For Twisted Fate
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Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 08:55 pm Title: Getting To Know You

Good conversation and friendship, what a great place to start for them.

Author's Response: That's always a good start :)Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Getting To Know You

Uh Oh resolved face Willow ....Buffy and Spike don't stand a chance of not ending up together....

Author's Response: Lol, nope! True! When Willow's resolved, then there's no turn back.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 - 09:13 pm Title: Getting To Know You

Plotting Wicca, love it, I wonder if it will happen.

I love the story, but on a side note, college is spelt with and e not and a.

Sorry just thought you should know.

MOre please.

Author's Response: Thanks :) And thanks for noticing the college thing ;) I didn't think of it. Another chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 - 03:56 am Title: Getting To Know You

I enjoyed Spike and Buffy's conversation, I think it's great they're taking the time to get to know each other. I also loved that they've decided to be friends. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! I'm very happy you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Casey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 - 03:34 am Title: Getting To Know You

I love it so far so please update soon.

Author's Response: Oh, I will update again soon :) I just sent chapter 5 to my beta so I guess it'll be up in a few days! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Getting To Know You

Asking questions was a good way to get to know the other better. They don't have a lot of chance with Willow and Tara wanting to play matchmaker :)

Author's Response: Thank you Cordykitten! Haha, you're right, they really want them together huh? :)

Reviewer: Spelling Nazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 03:31 pm Title: Getting To Know You

Um, okay, first of all, this story does have a lot of potential, but the writing needs some work. There are too many mistakes, which can be distracting for the readers:

“Summers. Why doesn’t people call you William?”

That should be don't, not doesn't.

“Ho said I blaamed o?”

Was her mouth full or something? It was hard to even tell what that's supposed to be. I have to say that it sounds like Buffy is drunk here, just with the way she's talking.

And also, it's college, not collage. I notice that a lot of people make that mistake. Sorry, I'm just strict when it comes to this stuff, but I do think you have a good idea here. Just reading it over more carefully, or getting a beta to help you out would make it a lot better.

Author's Response: Thanks for noticing the wrong spellings. I just talked to my beta and she missed that part, but everyone makes mistakes :) As for the spelling, I'm sorry if it bothers you but I can't write everything right since I'm not a native speaker. I'm doing this because I want to train my english a bit, and of course because it's fun to write. But I hope I'll get better later. Thank you for the comments!

Reviewer: Aidan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 12:02 pm Title: Getting To Know You

L-o-v-e it! you shoule post the rest of the story like... now!

I think you have a really good start here.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, the whole story right now? No, that's no fun :) But I'll post another chapter in a few days. I do have pretty much the whole story finished but I need to rewrite some things. Thank you for you review, Aidan!

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Getting To Know You

Good start weldone!

Author's Response: Thank you, Katkin :) I saw that you said you were gonna read this story, means a lot you did :) I haven't had any time to read The Superstar and the Single mom, I have just read the first chapter but I have to soon! I loved Her shoulder to lean on!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Getting To Know You

Ooh, it just keeps getting better! I can't wait to find out more about Spike's past, it seems like there are a lot of things he doesn't want to talk about yet. Great update, you're a very good author! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just put a big grin on my face :) That makes me really happy, especially since it's coming from you, you're absolutley one of the best authors on the site! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 10:23 am Title: Getting To Know You

Nice interaction between both couples. I see Tara and Willow are going to help the situation along a bit oh and I've always loved Willow's resolve face.

Author's Response: Oh me too! She's so cute when she does the resolve face in the series :) Thank you for the review!

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