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Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 12:49 am Title: The Rescue

Poor Lily. I hope they get the police involved and send her father to jail.

Author's Response: Read on and find out :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 08:35 am Title: The Rescue

*sighs* Poor Lily, what happened to her was just horrible. :-( I'm glad Spike and Buffy found her, now she can get some help. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:42 am Title: The Rescue

OMFG THAT WAS SOOOOO SAD, I CANT BELIEVE THAT THAT BATSARD DID THAT!!! HE BETTER PAY IT!!! i LOVE this story and am so HAPPY that u updated. i cant believe that buffy found her in that condiction, i hope that can get her away from and take care of her. also i hope that he goes to jail and that spike and buffy and lily become a family, it would be so perfect. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wat to read more. THANX this chapter, like every other chapter was an amazing

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means so much to me that you're still reading. Makes me so happy :) I'll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: The Rescue

OH I hope she is okay,

I just want to let you know that you spelled bear instead of beer for the drink.


Author's Response: Oh thank you Sandra! I'll fix that right the way. That could be really REALLY embarrassing :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: The Rescue

Hope Lily's dad gets what's coming to him for what he's done.

Author's Response: I hope so too :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: The Rescue

Oh my God!

Oh my God!

Poor Lily! Her dad is pure evil :@ That chapter was completely heart wrenching. I actually felt a tear :(

Author's Response: Hunni, you have no idea how glad and sad I am at the same time for hearing that. It's always hard to write something sad I think. It was supposed to be so you reacted just fine :) Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: The Rescue

Poor lily. My heart goes to lily. I hope her dad gets what is coming to him.
I love the way Spike cares about his students. Like he sees them as his own kids. Spike is really such a sweetie with a good heart. Maybe, Spike can take Lily. LOL If not hopefully he would be able to find her a good home.

Author's Response: You don't know how right you are Penny but that's all I can say right now ;) I'm glad you like the way Spike cares, I was a bit worried I made him too different but I wanted him to show a more sweet side in this story. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: The Rescue

Oh my, poor Lily. It's sad that social service can't help all the time / find out everything. I hope that Lily hasn't to go back to her father.

Author's Response: You will be able to find out soon if she has to go back or not. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: The Rescue

THat bastard I hope he rots in hell for treating a child with such ill respect and abuse. He doesn't deserve to be gifted with children if that the way he treats them....I hope when he ends up in priso the tell the other inmates he a child abuser and they give him the hiding he's needs every single day.....

I'm still loving this even though this last chapter was very sad ..... JeanettePhoto Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you still like it. I thought it was pretty difficult to write because I know it's hard to read about children being abused. I'm not too fond of it either but it was necessary for the story. You just put down everythin I felt for her dad, I felt just the same thing and I wrote it lol. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: The Rescue

Happy birthday Cissi! Thanks for another great chapter! :)

Poor Lily, I'm glad that Spike and Buffy found her. I hope Lily's father gets what he deserves...



Author's Response: Oh thank you Ari :) I'm so happy you like it!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: The Rescue

poor lily, she's been through hell. hope the social workers sort it out quickly. loved the update looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: The Rescue

Sad for Lily. Can't believe her Dad didn't get physical with Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, you'll find out later what really happened with Lily.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: The Rescue

Poor Lily, I can't believe her father did that to her. Thank god Buffy and Spike found out, hopefully they'll be able to get her away from that abusive bastard. Great update, but as always your chapters leave me wanting more, and soon. :)

Author's Response: Lol, well that was my intention :) But you will get more soon, I promise! Just talked to my beta, she'll email chapter 23 tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!

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